so i hope the dev doesn't change the story due to patreon.
and yeah everything is nice except for the bad grammar but hopefully the dev can fix that
The dev could use Suscriberstar or whatever its called, as some other devs have set up alternate accounts for their supporters to continue to support/influence developer's incest based projects on the less strict alternative payment platform/service. Also, the Dev may make it look like non-incest to stay on Patreon then create a patch on this site or somewhere similar like many have done since Patreon's Persecution/Inquisition style of religious hypocritical morality based policies since they were first initiated.
(not saying incest is right or wrong but that the main religions and quite a few of the minor ones have a history of Prostitution, Incest, Abuse, and misinformation they purposely overlook &/or attempt to bury in the name of political correctness or false/misguided superiority complex to be leaders at the cost of truth/historical accuracy/honor)
Lastly agree with the idea of getting a proofreader to correct things lost in translation as dev appears to be well-spoken in English but lacks written ability due to slightly different use of phrases/sayings that get lost in translation.