Ren'Py Dominion [v1.05] [Fallen Angel Productions and Mylph Money]

[Deleted member 136796]

Come on .. we are talking about love interest, not sex interest.

If MC had a male BFF he cared for, sure enough
he would feel bad about the guy getting spit roasted by his motor bike gang buddies.
MC would have to ask: ”Is this who you are? A free use person? Are you a male whore? What is this?”

Then his friend would say: ”No, I would never do anything like that with you”.

Then MC would say : ”Then I do not see any point in us being friends anymore,
as you seem to be intimate with strangers who you do not tell me about
and meet in secrecy to bang, specifically keeping it a secret from me,
for reasons you are not telling me.” Bye!

End of game/plot/story.

I refferece True detective : In the third season, the woman detective
goes as far as murder to help another woman out of a drug orgy becasue she thought the woman was
going to get raped, she said stop! no! and some asshole started to slap her around and tried to fkk her.

Then the next couple a days she recovered and said she was not in any danger,
she loved being drugged and used as s meat sleeve in those parties.

This is to show that bad feelings do gang up on MC when he cared for someone,
regardless of the fact the dev or anyone else tells otherwise.

Suffice to say the detective was perplexed but had nothing to do about that girl never pressing charges,
or the fact she was looking forward to go back for another drugged meat sleeve girls party.

Mc is feeling rage, he is in turmoil, that si the truth. Telling a traumatized man he should not give it any thought, even tho he feels for the friend, the mom, the BFF, is not doign any good to him.
Like sayind to your friend grow up after he sees something traumatic.
That never helps.
Those kind of scenes are alwasy charged emotionally specifically for inducing anger and jealousy and
a sickening feeling, just syaing move past and ignore the pain does not take away the pain.

The examples you make actually work for making an emotional connection to the story, either a positve or negative one even. But that's not NTR, cuckolding isn't seeing a "friend" or "A person you mildly care about" having sex with another person.
I'm not a writer, but I want to improve. I have the urge to just make a bunch of porn and put it out there, but I fight that. If I piss people off with my game and they still play it to the end, I still call that a win. If they don't stay, I'm okay with that too. To each their own.

 

[zombhunt]

The real reason everyone has a problem is the fact that the previous version of the game had no NTR and some plot and now it is full of NTR and no plot other than the MC is now a clueless loser. Plus it gave us preview of who is going to be a LI. I enjoyed the the previous version because he wasn't a loser and only lesbian NTR(more tolerable), most of these games they always make the MC a loser, you back tracked the character. It would have been better to just abandon this game and make a new one.

 

[Deleted member 136796]

The real reason everyone has a problem is the fact that the previous version of the game had no NTR and some plot and now it is full of NTR and no plot other than the MC is now a clueless loser. Plus it gave us preview of who is going to be a LI. I enjoyed the the previous version because he wasn't a loser and only lesbian NTR(more tolerable), most of these games they always make the MC a loser, you back tracked the character. It would have been better to just abandon this game and make a new one.

He's a clueless loser, I'd say he was a pretty normal guy. He didn't show any interests in fucking his family members and did not really care to know about their sex lives. I was going for a more realistic development in the relationships, in a way. Starting a game off with the MC automatically wanting to fuck his mom was a fatal flaaw of my previous games, from what I've been told. I kinda see the point in that criticism actually.

 

[zombhunt]

Then why force the NTR on the player? You give the option to skip viewing it knowing most players will not like it, so why not make it so that if its skipped, it actually did not happen, why force that in the story? It doesn't seem to be benefiting anyone, neither the player or the plot or you the dev.

 

[Deleted member 136796]

Then why force the NTR on the player? You give the option to skip viewing it knowing most players will not like it, so why not make it so that if its skipped, it actually did not happen, why force that in the story? It doesn't seem to be benefiting anyone, neither the player or the plot or you the dev.

By definition it's not NTR and if you really have an issue with the game stop playing it and don't download my shit again. Nuff fucking said.

 

[Fallen Angel Productions]

Then why force the NTR on the player? You give the option to skip viewing it knowing most players will not like it, so why not make it so that if its skipped, it actually did not happen, why force that in the story? It doesn't seem to be benefiting anyone, neither the player or the plot or you the dev.

if you actually played the game you'd know that if you choose not to see the ntr scenes then they don't happen and won't be part of your story the only one that you can't skip is the sister's gangbang because it's to get her to fall for you she didn't like you before that so stop saying stupid shit play the game before commenting on the thread

 

[zombhunt]

Well already knowing who the LI's are gong to be does make it NTR, blame yourself for that one(previous version).

I watched this game for awhile waiting and hoping it didn't get abandoned like most of your others, liking the way the story was going and wanting to know where it was heading, loved the visuals and was kinda glad it wasn't about dickgirls this time. Then you reboot/ remake it and I gave it try, i was like cool maybe more to the story and then i was slapped across the face with this stuff, so of course i was unhappy with it like most of the others, what did you expect. Hence me saying you should have just abandoned it and started a new one, then bitching would have been way less. And yes i am done with your game because it went in the wrong direction for me, it was no longer enjoyable to play.

 

[zombhunt]

lol even after skippig the ntr scenes it goes ahead and tells me what that person did in the scenes, so no it did happen in the story.

it describes to me everything the character did and thats after the gangbang, the mom with the bf dad scene, the sister again on the couch with bf, yes even if skipped it tells me anyway, so what you mean it didn't happen in the story that's funny.

it kinda feels like you are rubbing it the players face for skipping the scene by describing what they did in narration afterwards.

i think my problem is, is that i enjoyed it waaay more before this reboot and don't like the direction it went and feels like its going. i had high hopes for this game, because it was trueley enjoyable before. And i do apolagize it come off as harsh, sorry.

 

[Deleted member 136796]

lol even after skippig the ntr scenes it goes ahead and tells me what that person did in the scenes, so no it did happen in the story.

it describes to me everything the character did and thats after the gangbang, the mom with the bf dad scene, the sister again on the couch with bf, yes even if skipped it tells me anyway, so what you mean it didn't happen in the story that's funny.

Problem solved, Ya'll think it's funny to make all kinds of shitty reviews and leave pages of dumb comments about NTR. Getting constructive criticism is like pulling teeth and I'm done trying. If people want this game updated they can get a leaked build from a patron, I'm done participating in this shit.

 

[zombhunt]

you get angry because i tell you exactly what the game does? it literally tells me what they did in the scene after i skip it. in narration form. so why even skip it?

 

[Jaweed]

Why was the game abandoned?

 

[jstreet]

Why was the game abandoned?

I was wonder to but if you read two post above yours you will see why. It looks like the ntr haters got to him. For me I don't like the ntr but at least the dev made it so we didn't have to see it.

 

[zombhunt]

dev got angry that i pointed out that its not skipped NTR if the narration describes what happens during the skip, after the skip (dev said it skipped it in the story if you selected to skip it) so the skip was false. If the player doesn't want to see it, why would they want it described to them?

 

[Jaweed]

dev got angry that i pointed out that its not skipped NTR if the narration describes what happens during the skip, after the skip (dev said it skipped it in the story if you selected to skip it) so the skip was false. If the player doesn't want to see it, why would they want it described to them?

The man left the game because of you :/

 

[Deleted member 136796]

The man left the game because of you :/

I lost my cool a bit too, I'll put it on hold for a bit though. I'll just get a bit thicker skin.

 

[Jaweed]

I lost my cool a bit too, I'll put it on hold for a bit though. I'll just get a bit thicker skin.

Dude, you're really good at this, please don't stop making the game.

 

[Deleted member 414263]

Cumming Home is still a great game. Don't let Trolls who lack nuanceand creative vision ruin yours. This is a artistic game, not real life. There are always art critics often jealous of talent, creativity or success. Just remember why you do what you do and keep up the good work! You added back story at least you did not kill off a love intrest or wait to the end to Cuck the player. You are an artist and artist do what they feel needs to be done to create their art.

 

[voyeurkind]

Some (hopefully) constructive criticism:

* I didn't mind the scenes not involving the MC, but I didn't know what their purpose was. Was it just to give the player some early h-scenes to watch? Was it to show that the women in the family are very sexual people? Wa s it simply done out of spite? Whatever the reason, I don't think it got across. I don't think they need to be removed, but you might want to think about how they're being presented.

* I like the inclusion of the sisters, but I also found them frustrating. MC didn't get to do anything with the older sister, and when they got to the aunt's the younger girls all pretty much disappeared.

Also, why did the older sister change her hair so drastically? Was it in response to the trauma? It would be good to expand on that a little.

* As I said before, once you get to the aunt's house the younger girls disappear. I like MILFs just fine, but I prefer the body types of the younger girls (in particular the younger sister). I guess you're still reworking those parts but I'd like to see much more of them in the next update.

* Is there a reason there's so little emphasis or care about the character names? They're used so little I can't remember who most of them are. For instance, it makes sense for the MC to refer to his mother as "mom", but why not refer to his aunt as Aunt Betty (or whatever her name is)? Why not refer to his sisters and his cousins by their first names? And why aren't those names used in the quest log?

* Right now, it seems as if every location outside of home is pointless. Sure, you can go find a job and earn money, you can spend money as well, but to what point? Will working out and improving strength have any effect on the game? I know there are scenes set away from home, but is there any other purpose to having those locations? I'm guessing there's a future purpose but at the moment I'm pretty much ignoring those areas.

It might sound as if I'm hating on the game, but that's not the case. I do like the game, I just think there are things that could be done better.

My primary attraction to this game is the casual comfortable nudity and physical intimacy, and that's still being delivered.

Anyway, keep making the game you want to make and ignore the haters, as nothing you do will ever satisfy them.

 

[Deleted member 136796]

Some (hopefully) constructive criticism:

* I didn't mind the scenes not involving the MC, but I didn't know what their purpose was. Was it just to give the player some early h-scenes to watch? Was it to show that the women in the family are very sexual people? Wa s it simply done out of spite? Whatever the reason, I don't think it got across. I don't think they need to be removed, but you might want to think about how they're being presented.

* I like the inclusion of the sisters, but I also found them frustrating. MC didn't get to do anything with the older sister, and when they got to the aunt's the younger girls all pretty much disappeared.

Also, why did the older sister change her hair so drastically? Was it in response to the trauma? It would be good to expand on that a little.

* As I said before, once you get to the aunt's house the younger girls disappear. I like MILFs just fine, but I prefer the body types of the younger girls (in particular the younger sister). I guess you're still reworking those parts but I'd like to see much more of them in the next update.

* Is there a reason there's so little emphasis or care about the character names? They're used so little I can't remember who most of them are. For instance, it makes sense for the MC to refer to his mother as "mom", but why not refer to his aunt as Aunt Betty (or whatever her name is)? Why not refer to his sisters and his cousins by their first names? And why aren't those names used in the quest log?

* Right now, it seems as if every location outside of home is pointless. Sure, you can go find a job and earn money, you can spend money as well, but to what point? Will working out and improving strength have any effect on the game? I know there are scenes set away from home, but is there any other purpose to having those locations? I'm guessing there's a future purpose but at the moment I'm pretty much ignoring those areas.

It might sound as if I'm hating on the game, but that's not the case. I do like the game, I just think there are things that could be done better.

My primary attraction to this game is the casual comfortable nudity and physical intimacy, and that's still being delivered.

Anyway, keep making the game you want to make and ignore the haters, as nothing you do will ever satisfy them.

Thank you, I'll take it into account and give all that more thought.

 

[voyeurkind]

Thank you, I'll take it into account and give all that more thought.

One other thing: why did you show Lavendar getting raped? This game is mostly lighthearted and fun, but the gang rape just doesn't fit the tone of the rest of the game.

I'm fine with her getting gangbanged if it's consensual or gangraped if the game had a darker tone, but it doesn't really seem to fit currently. I'm sure it will make more sense as development continues, but at the moment it seems out of place.