[v1.0.7b]
The writing in this VN is so masterful that I cannot give it anything less than 5 stars.
Before I get into the review, I would like to address the only negative thing I can say about this game. Other than the scratching distortions in the audio, the biggest problems are the sex scenes.
There's no dialogue during scenes. The early scenes which were probably done when the team was bigger pretty much just lets you cycle through some animations with no text at all. It has smooth and decent animations (currently a bug makes the videos kinda small, but whatever), but this type of sex scenes are the worst you can find in porn games. Without any text, It's entirely unfappable. Towards the end, there is a new system for sex scenes which has more potential. In these scenes, there are at least a some minimal descriptive text as it plays out your chosen position and location. However, there are still no dialogue.
I believe all members of the team quit at this point, and the writer took over coding and rendering. The scenes that use the newer sex system don't have animations. It uses a slideshow technique to simulate movement. This may put off some people, but I actually think its an opportunity for the dev. The current dev is a writer first and foremost and my god, is the writing good in this game. Leverage that skill and write some sexy dialogue during the scenes. Good kinky dialogue gives more eroticism to a scene than some 8k 120fps high res animations ever could. Draw the scenes out with more descriptive text and sexual banter rather than relying on some poorly animated loop. Make use of multiple stills from various angles and multiple positions. We already know the dev can write erotic fiction, because all the shit leading up to the actual sex is way hotter than the currently wordless sex that plays out.
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With that out of the way, I'll get into the actual review.
The hook: This is a story all about how my life got flipped-turned upside down.... Ok sorry about that. But the hook is basically that your life got fucked after a corporate gambit backfired and you are talking to your therapist about the fallout. This works surprisingly well as a narrative tool.
The story: The main plotline revolves around some juicy corporate espionage. The side stories revolve around various women in your life that are being affected by your spiraling mental state. The story with the girls have some great build up and pacing. The main corporate plot is gripping to say the least.
Gameplay: You tell a portion of your story to the therapist by selecting a girl. As the story plays out, you make choices usually between red and blue. Red is the hot headed, angry, sexual, corrupting type. Blue is the caring, calm, beta, loving type of responses. Each girl and NPC has their own version of red and blue stats. One girl responds to red by gaining submission. Another one by gaining corruption. Its different for everyone and its all shown in the very well made planner book thing.
The writing: Some of the best writing I've seen on this site. By far the strongest aspect of this game. The writing is very much grounded in reality. At no point did I think a character's response to a situation or dialogue was questionable. Everyone stays in character and everyone IS such a character. They are all so interesting in their own way, even the side characters. At the hands of a lesser writer, the red/blue system might have gotten out of hand and kind of devolved into porn logic, but everything plays out extremely naturally here. Picking red choices to corrupt the innocent shy friend of your .... neighbor's.... daughter is still very much in character of an adult giving reasonable advice to a young girl (mostly). It's all very believable and you don't say insane shit that is brushed off by people as if it wasn't ridiculously out of line. MC is very self aware.
The Renders/Models: I love the models. They all seem unique to this game. Haven't seen them in others and they are pretty fantastic. Young teens with petite bodies, Busty maids, Super sexy Asian chick with a constant scowl. Muscle woman. There are variety to experience and the render quality is quite good.
Finally, Dan Allen. I think this side character stole the show in one scene. It was pretty epic.