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Fuck. I cannot vote. But yeah.. I don't think anyone care about Monica. I would take her out and include the prostitute (either Lita or Lola) as a full LI.
Maybe the patrons will say differently? I agree, don't care much about Monica and would rather have Lola instead. But i am just a pirate so everything that comes my way is profit. :LOL:
 
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fried

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I voted for Monica, even though I wasn't thrilled with our early experience with her (i.e., all the "prove your love" performance attitude she displayed), because I feel there is a lot that can be explored there and it might not go in obvious directions.
 

Ickerax

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I voted for Monica, even though I wasn't thrilled with our early experience with her (i.e., all the "prove your love" performance attitude she displayed), because I feel there is a lot that can be explored there and it might not go in obvious directions.
Me as well but looking at the voting so far Emily is winning 3-1 :(
 
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BigDaddyDom

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Fuck. I cannot vote. But yeah.. I don't think anyone care about Monica. I would take her out and include the prostitute (either Lita or Lola) as a full LI.
Second that, Monica is definitely my least favorite LI
What happened to Amanda? I would have thought she would be next??? Is the plot just abandoning her?
I doubt that. Pretty sure Amanda is one of the most popular LI's, which is probably why dev is saving her :cry:
Me as well but looking at the voting so far Emily is winning 3-1 :(
Emily FTW!
 

RomanHume

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So I just want to throw this out there, but if you played the game it would help me immensely if you left some feedback. Good or bad. I like reading everything to get a feel for what's working and what's not.

Of course, if you're going to leave bad feedback I only ask that you at least make your criticism constructive and offer me some insights about what I can do better. You know, rather than just accusing me of being an amateur that's shilling patrons for money. Give me something I can work with. Others will tell you, I'm all ears and eagerly want to know what I can do to make this the best game I possibly can.

Cheers mates!
 

ZTex

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Apr 3, 2019
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So I just want to throw this out there, but if you played the game it would help me immensely if you left some feedback. Good or bad. I like reading everything to get a feel for what's working and what's not.

Of course, if you're going to leave bad feedback I only ask that you at least make your criticism constructive and offer me some insights about what I can do better. You know, rather than just accusing me of being an amateur that's shilling patrons for money. Give me something I can work with. Others will tell you, I'm all ears and eagerly want to know what I can do to make this the best game I possibly can.

Cheers mates!
My only bad feedback is that this is a new client without the previous chapters. I know why that is and so yeah...not much to say on either side of this. Once everything can be merged/re-done i'll be happy.

But yeah. Gib more good shit.
 

Ayhsel

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Maybe the patrons will say differently? I agree, don't care much about Monica and would rather have Lola instead. But i am just a pirate so everything that comes my way is profit. :LOL:
Of course. If only one guy is a Monica fan and has been supporting just for her it would be a douchebag move. I would be very surprised anyone care about her, but hey... I am always wrong, so what do I know. I don't know when was the last poll and it is probably biased as it really matters when you make the poll, but I am confident she would be last as main LI. And even behind other non main love interest.

I was just mentioning what for me would be a totally better alternative. The prostitutes (using Lita for non futa using Lola for futa) i think are way better characters than Monica.

I dislike futa so obviously I am not interested in Lola. But given how much I love the novel I decided to try it once (obviously chose not to fuck her cause I dislike it) but I felt she was a great character. Like if we could have a non sexual path, a friend path, I would definitely enjoy seeing more about her as I think she is really interesting and well written character.

Lita, on the other hand, obviously was super great and I was sooo into her when I met her. I mentioned I really think she would do for a great more permanent lover, and specially meeting her outside her job sounds super interesting to me.

I don't remember once in which I care 5 words that Monica said.

So my comment was simply an expression of desire, not an actual recommendation.
 

Cartageno

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I think Monica has a couple of uphill battles to fight to gather people's attention. She is sat right between "that young thing" (aka teenagers, the "college kink") and a grown woman ("milf kink") so doesn't profit off these very popular likeability boosts. Lore wise she is further removed from the MC - wife, daughter, co-worker are just closer, daughter's friends you've known for years as well - without any meaningful interaction so far in the game. She's not "conventionally hot" being short haired and butch (which of course also can be kinky but not on a "milf" level in general popularity).

But what I think puts her at a disadvantage the most is that - apart from the wife, but wives/fiancées/established girlfriends work a bit differently - she isn't taboo in the slightest (no incest, no boss-subordinate, no patient-therapist), removing that little tingling on the inside, there is no real conflict as with Nanami. You could just cut her out of your life without any consequences while the other girls you'll have to continue living with to some extent so you'll have to "make arrangements" with them, even with Lupita (who also serves the Latino kink, not the most common, then again I wouldn't know many who dislike it, while Monica arguably isn't dark skinned enough to score with ebony lovers just for that).

Now, all this could hold for Ayhsel's alternative suggestion of Lita/Lola as well even though they look younger and more "classic hot", but they would still be some kind of "forbidden fruit": having an affair with a prostitute would be seen differently than one with a fitness coach.

So in conclusion there's not too much that makes her stand out for probably a large swath of the player base. She isn't bad but overshadowed because her development will have less impact on the character's story and in a more story driven novel like this that doesn't promote her. If we had the same characters in an "everybody wants to jump your bones after two minutes" game, results might be different, but here the story element is stronger. And even in that other one, not serving a major kink may relegate her to midfield at best.

And I gotta admit even though personally I like her for not filling a character mould seen in every other game and then some, she has some high-end competition here. Yes, even Amanda, who is arguably the most classic character in this game (shy young girl with a little crush on you).
 
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fried

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I think Monica has a couple of uphill battles to fight to gather people's attention.

But what I think puts her at a disadvantage the most is that - apart from the wife, but wives/fiancées/established girlfriends work a bit differently - she isn't taboo in the slightest (no incest, no boss-subordinate, no patient-therapist), removing that little tingling on the inside, there is no real conflict as with Nanami.
Yet, an employee of the club seems to be her boyfriend. She also has an overly judgmental view of said man, which says to me that their relationship dynamic, the MC's deepening interactions with the "boss" from that club and the MC desiring to keep his (paid) affairs a secret could all pull together into a world of hurt and even blackmail against the MC, while adding unknown amounts of tension into any affair he has with Monica.

She came off like a self-assured nobody, but all those tendrils leads me to believe she will play a role in undesired exposures and concerns for the MC. So, I'd like her path explored for those factors, essentially.
 

fabulous007

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While I voted Emily because I like the character, I admit I have no clue what her love path could be about. No problem with the hate path, it will have its own dramas and aims, stuff will happen, but what about the love path (if you already wrote the story Hume, don't reply, I prefer being surprised).

As for advice to make the game better I have none, it's hard to be really critical toward this game for me. Of course I have personal preferences (like I'm a bit sad the old scene with swimsuit-Cassie and her father in the kitchen will be rewritten), but nothing I would objectively criticize as poorly made. I just hope once again for big differences between blue/red paths.
 
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