VN Ren'Py Dream Dance [v0.1.3] [FeeLuck_Games]

[Saint Blackmoor]

" iT'll BE AvOiDabLe GUyS I DoN't uNDerStAnd wHy pEoPlE gEt mAD jUst lEt tHe deVelOper dO wHatEver hE wAnts "

It seems envyNox is typing with one hand again. Have you heard of Voice to Type, little buddy?

I'm really enjoying the game. Is there going to be a gallery/replay scene function?


That's one huge weiner.

That's what she said.

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

It seems envyNox is typing with one hand again. Have you heard of Voice to Type, little buddy?

I'm really enjoying the game. Is there going to be a gallery/replay scene function?

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That's one huge weiner.

That's what she said.

Thx)) Yep, the replay function will be in the next updates when there are enough replayble scenes in the game for it.

 

[Dragongod777]

When you feel like it send me the apk verson that you wanted me to test out to see if will work past the ai part

 

[Babymomo]

Hey you creator I play on android At the beginning of the game there is an AI image. I feel like I'm thrown out of the game every time I see an image of the AI that moves and changes little by little. Enough to help distribute and save. Continuing from the section where AI images were passed. Have you gone yet?

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

Hey you creator I play on android At the beginning of the game there is an AI image. I feel like I'm thrown out of the game every time I see an image of the AI that moves and changes little by little. Enough to help distribute and save. Continuing from the section where AI images were passed. Have you gone yet?

Hey. Check out the DM

 

[Antera]

Boring start with hobo. cursor which made my eyes bleed and one of top 10 ugliest MCs I have seen. yea I am out.
Good luck to the dev.
(Female models are done very well)

 

[battali0n]

In this version you will not any problem with that. But in 0.2 i have this type of content. And yes you can skip it. And now I thought that this might not be obvious at all, and I should add a note about this content when player need to choice....thx

When you say you can skip it does that mean:
1) it is optional, as in the player decides whether it happen or
2) It still happens but the player can choose not to see it?
Also will it involve a Li?

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

When you say you can skip it does that mean:
1) it is optional, as in the player decides whether it happen or
2) It still happens but the player can choose not to see it?
Also will it involve a Li?

The second. If you are not into it just skip the game.

 

[johnmnf692]

The second. If you are not into it just skip the game.

If you want to make a cuck game, you need to put it in the tags, or at the very least the future tags. No one gives a fuck if you want to do that, there are already plenty of those games on this site. What people don't want is false advertising and having their time wasted.

As a sidenote, the UI of this game is fucking horrendous. It's a visual novel, not an MMO, it doesn't need a bunch of redundant buttons taking up a large part of the screen.

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

If you want to make a cuck game, you need to put it in the tags, or at the very least the future tags. No one gives a fuck if you want to do that, there are already plenty of those games on this site. What people don't want is false advertising and having their time wasted.

As a sidenote, the UI of this game is fucking horrendous. It's a visual novel, not an MMO, it doesn't need a bunch of redundant buttons taking up a large part of the screen.

No worries i don`t want a cuck game

 

[johnmnf692]

No worries i don`t want a cuck game
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Guy, if you're putting sharing into the game, you are making a cuck game.

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

Guy, if you're putting sharing into the game, you are making a cuck game.

Where did you see it in my game?

About UI. Am I do not understand something? Is it too much for you? I mean "fucking horrendous" as you sad?

 

[johnmnf692]

Where did you see it in my game?

About UI. Am I do not understand something? Is it too much for you? I mean "fucking horrendous" as you sad?
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Do you not see the giant blue diamond in the bottom right corner of the screen? Personally, I don't really care for character portraits, but they at least have a purpose, which I can appreciate. The giant blue diamond is completely redundant, everything it does can be done by clicking a single mouse or keyboard button. Most games with a quick menu have the text options across the bottom middle of the screen, so that it's unobtrusive, although I personally prefer not having it at all. I honestly can barely tell right now whether or not you have a textbox, but if you do that's also unnecessary, all you need is a sufficient text outline. Your renders are really good, you obviously put a lot of time and effort into them and the character designs, which I commend, so don't cover them up for no reason. I was also talking about the interface within the menu as well, which is more limited than the basic ren'py menu, despite being somewhat prettier than the basic menu.

As for not having sharing in your game, you are the one who has vaguely answered questions pertaining to that. Whether or not the game currently has sharing/swinging/ntr or not isn't particularly relevant when you have failed to clearly state whether or not the game will or won't have those things. If you want to include that stuff, that's your prerogative, just be clear and honest about it, it will make everyone on both sides happier to know what to expect.

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

Do you not see the giant blue diamond in the bottom right corner of the screen? Personally, I don't really care for character portraits, but they at least have a purpose, which I can appreciate. The giant blue diamond is completely redundant, everything it does can be done by clicking a single mouse or keyboard button. Most games with a quick menu have the text options across the bottom middle of the screen, so that it's unobtrusive, although I personally prefer not having it at all. I honestly can barely tell right now whether or not you have a textbox, but if you do that's also unnecessary, all you need is a sufficient text outline. Your renders are really good, you obviously put a lot of time and effort into them and the character designs, which I commend, so don't cover them up for no reason. I was also talking about the interface within the menu as well, which is more limited than the basic ren'py menu, despite being somewhat prettier than the basic menu.

As for not having sharing in your game, you are the one who has vaguely answered questions pertaining to that. Whether or not the game currently has sharing/swinging/ntr or not isn't particularly relevant when you have failed to clearly state whether or not the game will or won't have those things. If you want to include that stuff, that's your prerogative, just be clear and honest about it, it will make everyone on both sides happier to know what to expect.

Oh, so we're aiming for politeness and objectivity? Great, let’s go for it.

I’m genuinely pleased to hear you appreciate the design of the renderers.

I must admit, I’m quite surprised you think that a solo developer who creates a game has never played a similar games before. However, I’d like to highlight an issue from a player’s perspective: the text buttons at the bottom of the screen are difficult to tap accurately on the first try, particularly on mobile devices. This can be incredibly frustrating. For me for example. As for completely removing the quick menu, I’m afraid that’s not an option for me. I use it regularly and have no plans to eliminate it. Nevertheless, I will be redesigning the quick menu in the next version, not for those who might be bothered by it obstructing a small part of the table, a piece of the floor, or a cup on the table on render—Oh, how will we ever cope with such issues? It is subjective concern. But for those who find the icons and buttons confusing and inconvenient, which is a more objective concern. The internal menu, from my experience as a player, seems intuitive and stress-free, and I haven’t received any negative feedback from my patrons about it, particularly not about the gallery. Comments like "it’s ugly" or "I don’t like it," or suggestions to "play with fonts," I generally disregard as they tend to reflect personal taste. My over ten years of professional experience(not in game dev) supports this approach.

So, I must ask, why should I make changes based solely on your say-so, especially when you describe them as "fucking horrendous," rather than based on what my paying subscribers and I prefer?

About sharing in my game. I clearly say that now he is not in the game in any of the versions. And those who really care about this can pass by.

 

[Hateitfuckit]

Lmfao, wtf is wrong with this dev? Honestly, it doesn't hurt to tell your audience-future supporter/donators what type of sexual contents you are going to have in your game. Which is literally why most people play these games.

It's cool if you don't have a clear idea of the game (which sucks tbh and make people skeptical to support as who knows if you even have any plans to finish this game) but you should still have a base idea of kinks you are gonna add. Here an example - Imagine watching straight porn and suddenly MC started fucking his gay best friend lmfao.

I am sorry but don't fuck with the hobby bs if you want people to pay for your game. I ain't funding someone just for them to see if game developing is for them or not.

I am interested for now as most others here said, the renders are pretty good but so far the story fucking sucks. (It earlier ver. So imma ignore reviewing).

All in all, I understand people frustration here. Nobody wants to waste their time playing a game just to get cucked and humiliated after liking a li. Tho, I would suggest ignoring this one till ver.5/10 and check the reception. That's what I am gonna do anyway.

 

[fajiker145]

Jesus Christ! Do you honestly believe that developers making game alone map out the entire script for a game before they even start developing it?

Yes, actually. Not everything but they know what is going to happen enough to provide the corresponding tags and therefore the focus the game will have and what audience it aims to attract.

And if a plot twist involves the main character being cheated on—something he might actually be indifferent to due to a lack of real feelings for the person involved—do you really think I'd spoil that in the tags? That's hilarious.

Man, I am sorry to tell you but the tag will spoil it anyway even if you dont want to.
Theres no "spolier" clause for tags, they are straightforward: If its in the game, it gets the tag
So it will never be a secret that MC gets cheated on because as soon as the update comes out, the game will get the NTR tag and people will know before even downloading it.

The only thing that you will accomplish by witholding that info is to piss off the people who followed/supported you until that point and that didnt know they were supporting that kind of content.
You can check what "suprise ntr" tends to do to games, there are many examples of devs who just added ntr without notice in later updates and it never goes over well: stranded dick, the curse of joy, Lewd Island are the ones that come to mind among many others. The first two ended up abandoned and the last one had to do a rushed ending because of the shitshow and the lose of support. And ntr was avoidable in two of those, still killed those games because people dont want to get blindsided by it and find out they were funding that kind of content. It hurts the dev's reputation.
But well, if this is just your hobby, then ok, good luck, just wanted to explain why future tags are important as people who actually pay for these games want to know what they can expect from their investment and what they are paying for.

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

 

[mmomm]

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Don't listen to anyone, dude. It's a great start. We're looking forward to more!

 

[Chris2041]

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Very mature of you how old are you 15 ?
Now seriusly you are new and probably this isnt the best look to have if you want a fan base and want to earn money .
If this is a hobby and you dont care and are trolling thats another story XD

 

[FeeLuck_Games]

Very mature of you how old are you 15 ?
Now seriusly you are new and probably this isnt the best look to have if you want a fan base and want to earn money .
If this is a hobby and you dont care and are trolling thats another story XD

More mature than personal insults, yeah yeah. )) I stop and will stop any serious dialogues with that people.

And it is trolling of course already.

And I will do it with any guy who will allow themselves to insult me or my loved ones.

I will spend time on my patrons and on the game not on useless conversations about something who knows "better".

If you know the better way, just do it. Don't spend your time on commenting the game that you don't like and insulting the dev. Just make your own the best game and prove it - that is real mature way.