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To each their own I suppose, but to me, this sounds like an extremely boring plot twist. She's far to old for me to be interested in corrupting her and wanting to knock her down a peg because she's an aristocrat just sounds like envy. The premise of this sort of game really isn't that different from some other games here, Katie's corruption for example, but the big difference is that the player experiences the corruption from a very intimate first person point of view rather than as some sort of out-of-body third person coordinating it.I would like to suggest a plot twist. I really don't like the aristocratic mother-in-law. She needs to be punished. Have someone steal her diaries and collect evidence against her. She has committed fraud, kidnapping, murder and other crimes she doesn't want publicized. Blackmail her into going through 'dream therapy' and becoming someone's sex slave. Of course she will resist, curse, cry the whole way. I can provide a chapter from a short story, to graphically illustrate this scenario.
I get that some people don't like the idea of submitting, which I can understand as modern society pushes the idea of being strong and independent, and so they want to have a path where they can "win" by beating the corruption or as you suggested, by flipping the corruption onto the antagonist. This makes me wonder: would you would still want a plot twist like that if instead of experiencing the story as the subject of the corruption, you were instead in the role of Victoria doing the corruption to your future son-in-law?