VN Ren'Py Dreamland [v0.4.0p] [Dokiden]

[ItsNotUs]

I had the feeling. But it's ALL the other things that made me feel that this story is a fucking trap.

1- Mia - We start a relationship, but this fucking MC can only think of his EX. That means only one thing, she's going to show up and fuck everything up. Result: Not interested.
2- Lea - Psychotic bitch drug addicted, sex addicted, unstable and uninteresting. From here I can see she's nothing but problems. If this was a Harem game it would be the first time EVER that I would refuse a girl. Result: Not Interested.
3- Summer - Nothing for, nothing against it's a nothing burger. She feels as unappetizing as a Vegan meal. I'm talking about personality, the assets are all awesome, of course. Result: Not Interested.
4- Danielle - Lea wannabe. She would be on a maybe list if this was a Harem, since it isn't, nope. Result: Not Interested.
5- Jacklyn - The Ex that could go die far away. Haven't even seen her yet, just want distance. Result: Not Interested.
6- The redheaded on the lake - Couldn't even bother to learn her name. She'll be problems galore. Result: Not Interested.
7- Alex - Not really a friend. Just a pervert. Probably involved or guilty of that Abigail girl disappearance. Result: Not interested.

The only mildly interesting character was Mia. Since the MC botched it... Couldn't care less. Also, the HORRIBLE "music" on the scene with Mia, made me Mute this game, what the fucking hell was THAT.

Now, the MC. The dude completely pretends to like Mia after we (the players) FORCE him, then goes and can only think of Jacklyn. So, he makes his own choices? Are we in control or the Dev? Since it is the Dev playing, I wish him a lot of good luck, play your game with your "Played" users.

No one in the game felt really interesting. The LI's all have amazing looks, but the personalities suck, really, really suck. The MC, is controlled by the Dev, not us, so... it's nothing. The real MC is the Dev.

In terms of story, there's really nothing here. At least until where I could stand to play.

It is beautiful, full of gorgeous girls, all full of desire to fuck. That's it. It is probably enough for many, didn't do ANYTHING for me, I'm here for a GOOD Story, for Porn I have other resources.

I truly wish the Dev good luck and all of you teenagers of all ages, a good FAP by the Dev, enjoy his hands.

Peace

For a person who is not interested in this story, you often use the word “uninterested” - in this case, reverse psychology will work! That is, you are very interested in all this! A person who is not interested in the project will not describe his opinion in detail! If you removed the word “uninterested” from the context, then in some places, i might agree with you!
-Leia is a personally disappointed me, because she is ready to sleep with Alex for a place in the car and etc. Even though she was definitely the "last whore", she had my sympathy until that moment.
-Her friend Daniella gives me mixed feelings, here my opinion depends on which path we are walking on. If you choose her as your LI, she become a hot girlfreand who doesn’t want to share, and this is surprising in her character, because if you take other paths, then she is almost the same whore as Lea.
-Sumer wins very much compared to all the other LIs, let her hint to you that she just wants sex from you, but in reality, in her thoughts, she is in love with you and it stands out when you choose Mia and not her.
-Mia is a modest, smart girl who fell in love with MC. When you play her path, everything takes on gentle romantic notes, you want to protect her, but at the same time you feel sorry for her for her modesty, because MC can so easily break her heart!
-The red-haired girl.., it’s hard to say anything about her because she just lived all this time under the close supervision of her father, despite the fact that their "happy home" in the spring turns into a festival of sex and vice, she just wants to get out of the cage! But due to the fact that her story intersected with Sumer’s story, for my subjective taste, i’m skipping her even though she’s a pretty "busty girl"!
No one has seen MC-ex, so it’s hard to say anything!

I will repeat my opinion once again: i hope that in the next releases the game will not turn into a fierce horror, but will keep the tension like a good thriller, because there are so many beautiful girls with whom you want to see various depraved sex scenes, and finally see this Dreamland, and his unbridled life in spring period!

 

[Tinman021]

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Hi. Are you able to check via your mod where is the second card of Alice?

 

[FatGiant]

For a person who is not interested in this story, you often use the word “uninterested” - in this case, reverse psychology will work! That is, you are very interested in all this! A person who is not interested in the project will not describe his opinion in detail! If you removed the word “uninterested” from the context, then in some places, i might agree with you!
-Leia is a personally disappointed me, because she is ready to sleep with Alex for a place in the car and etc. Even though she was definitely the "last whore", she had my sympathy until that moment.
-Her friend Daniella gives me mixed feelings, here my opinion depends on which path we are walking on. If you choose her as your LI, she become a hot girlfreand who doesn’t want to share, and this is surprising in her character, because if you take other paths, then she is almost the same whore as Lea.
-Sumer wins very much compared to all the other LIs, let her hint to you that she just wants sex from you, but in reality, in her thoughts, she is in love with you and it stands out when you choose Mia and not her.
-Mia is a modest, smart girl who fell in love with MC. When you play her path, everything takes on gentle romantic notes, you want to protect her, but at the same time you feel sorry for her for her modesty, because MC can so easily break her heart!
-The red-haired girl.., it’s hard to say anything about her because she just lived all this time under the close supervision of her father, despite the fact that their "happy home" in the spring turns into a festival of sex and vice, she just wants to get out of the cage! But due to the fact that her story intersected with Sumer’s story, for my subjective taste, i’m skipping her even though she’s a pretty "busty girl"!
No one has seen MC-ex, so it’s hard to say anything!

I will repeat my opinion once again: i hope that in the next releases the game will not turn into a fierce horror, but will keep the tension like a good thriller, because there are so many beautiful girls with whom you want to see various depraved sex scenes, and finally see this Dreamland, and his unbridled life in spring period!

Oh yes, I was interested. Interested enough to download and play.

I could stand it until the "date" with Mia. When the Dev took the story into his own hands and said fuck you and your decisions... This pissed me off. I said 4 times that I want Mia. But no, the MC that we DON'T control, wants Jacklyn. So, lost interest.

That was the Dev telling us, I AM in control. I'll let you make the small decision, but I control this. So, good luck... have a good time on the leash. The others were already a no-go, since Mia is a no-go also... there's nothing for me here.

Got it?

 

[ItsNotUs]

Oh yes, I was interested. Interested enough to download and play.

I could stand it until the "date" with Mia. When the Dev took the story into his own hands and said fuck you and your decisions... This pissed me off. I said 4 times that I want Mia. But no, the MC that we DON'T control, wants Jacklyn. So, lost interest.

That was the Dev telling us, I AM in control. I'll let you make the small decision, but I control this. So, good luck... have a good time on the leash. The others were already a no-go, since Mia is a no-go also... there's nothing for me here.

Got it?

Dude, the game is not over yet, let's see what happens next, I think if you chose to stay with Mia, you will stay with her!

 

[FatGiant]

Dude, the game is not over yet, let's see what happens next, I think if you chose to stay with Mia, you will stay with her!

Not with a Dev that wants to be a player. We made a choice, he buds out of it. If he didn't want us to chose Mia, shouldn't have given us the chance. I hate this type of shit. Hate. We choose 4 times to stay with Mia. 4 times. The Dev wants none of it.

Fuck that. It is a Dev telling us he's the one. It's nothing else. To me, he killed the story with the ONLY Li that was even half interesting, as in not a sex maniac. Lea and Summer can go fuck a tree for all I care after that prank. Danielle is just a whore, 10 minutes after meeting a guy is jumping on his dick, this time was the MC, next time who is?

Nope... not interested. It was exciting, for those few minutes... Now, I am pissed off and letting out steam, on the only place made for it.

Wait, telling me that Danielle becomes a good girl if we go for her, does what? She is presented to us as a fucking whore that fucks anyone, and we are to pretend we didn't see it and fall for her? Are you kidding me?

Lea and Summer prank you because they imagine you were spying, don't even ask, or care, so they pretend to want to fuck, just to humiliate you? And you fall in love? What's the next humiliation scene? So Lea goes to fuck Alex and you say yes, and fall in love? Damn son, you must be really backed up.

To recapitulate:
1- Mia, the Dev doesn't want you to have her. Done.
2- Summer you say she's in love but she chooses to humiliate you for no reason. Done.
3- Lea wants to drug you, doesn't care what dick she fucks, is the instigator of the prank. Done.
4- Danielle just wants to fuck, today is you, next day someone else. Done.

Is this a better representation of the LI's here? Too bad, the game looks amazing. The assets are awesome. Only needs a story. Or a writer that knows how to create characters. AND THAT stays the fuck out.

If this was a Harem Game, Lea and Danielle would be out. If this was a good game, they wouldn't even be in the car, after we said no.

First the Dev, by Alex hand imposes the whores on us. Next we choose one girl that isn't one of the whores, and he blocks you.
What is he going to choose for us next?

Peace :/

 

[ItsNotUs]

Not with a Dev that wants to be a player. We made a choice, he buds out of it. If he didn't want us to chose Mia, shouldn't have given us the chance. I hate this type of shit. Hate. We choose 4 times to stay with Mia. 4 times. The Dev wants none of it.

Fuck that. It is a Dev telling us he's the one. It's nothing else. To me, he killed the story with the ONLY Li that was even half interesting, as in not a sex maniac. Lea and Summer can go fuck a tree for all I care after that prank. Danielle is just a whore, 10 minutes after meeting a guy is jumping on his dick, this time was the MC, next time who is?

Nope... not interested. It was exciting, for those few minutes... Now, I am pissed off and letting out steam, on the only place made for it.

Wait, telling me that Danielle becomes a good girl if we go for her, does what? She is presented to us as a fucking whore that fucks anyone, and we are to pretend we didn't see it and fall for her? Are you kidding me?

Lea and Summer prank you because they imagine you were spying, don't even ask, or care, so they pretend to want to fuck, just to humiliate you? And you fall in love? What's the next humiliation scene? So Lea goes to fuck Alex and you say yes, and fall in love? Damn son, you must be really backed up.

To recapitulate:
1- Mia, the Dev doesn't want you to have her. Done.
2- Summer you say she's in love but she chooses to humiliate you for no reason. Done.
3- Lea wants to drug you, doesn't care what dick she fucks, is the instigator of the prank. Done.
4- Danielle just wants to fuck, today is you, next day someone else. Done.

Is this a better representation of the LI's here? Too bad, the game looks amazing. The assets are awesome. Only needs a story. Or a writer that knows how to create characters. AND THAT stays the fuck out.

If this was a Harem Game, Lea and Danielle would be out. If this was a good game, they wouldn't even be in the car, after we said no.

First the Dev, by Alex hand imposes the whores on us. Next we choose one girl that isn't one of the whores, and he blocks you.
What is he going to choose for us next?

Peace :/

I don’t understand why you should be so angry at the way the dev chose to narrate his story!
They are all students, who went on spring break! We know very well what many students do at spring break: drink alcohol, drugs and get laid! Its Spring Break, Dude!
Another fact is that after a year+ they were all in quarantine due to "ahem ahem virus". MC jerks off at the beginning because they are all sitting at home and the same Sumer is caught with a dildo, they are all lustful like rabbits, they need release. And who did Sumer and Lea humiliate? I think every man would like such humiliation when two beautiful students work on your shaft.xd
You just got the story wrong!

 

[FatGiant]

I don’t understand why you should be so angry at the way the dev chose to narrate his story!
They are all students, who went on spring break! We know very well what many students do at spring break: drink alcohol, drugs and get laid! Its Spring Break, Dude!
Another fact is that after a year+ they were all in quarantine due to "ahem ahem virus". MC jerks off at the beginning because they are all sitting at home and the same Sumer is caught with a dildo, they are all lustful like rabbits, they need release. And who did Sumer and Lea humiliate? I think every man would like such humiliation when two beautiful students work on your shaft.xd
You just got the story wrong!

Maybe. Maybe.

But that Dev interference with the Mia "Date" fucked me. I am still pissed. Very, very pissed.

That SHIT killed the game for me. I can't unsee the LI's as stupid ass whores that will fuck every guy they find.

There's no chance now. I will be expecting his interference at every choice. I am now expecting the worst outcome out of everything. I completely lost any trace of trust to this Dev. To me he has become the enemy.

Oh, this girl is so cute, she wants to fuck, wait, what will the Dev do? What is he up to? I feel zero trust.

Now that he showed me that he wants to fuck me up, I expect it all the time. Every second of the game I am expecting to be betrayed. I can't feel any connection to the MC, he doesn't respond to me. He's simply the Dev playing the game.
I don't feel any connection to any of the girls, what's the point, the Dev is the one playing. Without any connection to the story, I simply can't be here.

You know, before the thing with Mia, the prank didn't really bother me much, it was just a misunderstanding. Something that could be cleared later.

After that, I started to review the scenes, my impression changed. Completely. Now I see evil intentions everywhere. Is this him, the enemy, fucking with me again? Is this a simple prank, or is something more nefarious and I am just being stupid? And this for everything. I see BAD intentions everywhere, because now I CAN'T trust this Dev anymore.

Ok, I'll get out of you guys hair. Have fun. Keep your eyes open tho... he's up to something.

Peace

 

[hermit_tr]

2 close friends vs 2 hot chicks

Is Alex a murderer ? and one of the hot chicks becomes the next victim?

 

[Don Sucio]

2 close friends vs 2 hot chicks

Is Alex a murderer ? and one of the hot chicks becomes the next victim?

It seems that, but we can´t be sure... at least not 100% sure. I think Alex can be the murderer but i need more evidences than a photo and some chat, about Danielle being the next victim... who knows, maybe Alex tell her he just find the photo there like an excuse or maybe if Alex is the real murdeder then he could kill her to prevent her from talking about what she has seen

 

[den_tiger]

will the scappry mod work for the compressed?

 

[hermit_tr]

will the scappry mod work for the compressed?

Works for me

 

[metamorphMP]

I had the feeling. But it's ALL the other things that made me feel that this story is a fucking trap.

1- Mia - We start a relationship, but this fucking MC can only think of his EX. That means only one thing, she's going to show up and fuck everything up. Result: Not interested.
2- Lea - Psychotic bitch drug addicted, sex addicted, unstable and uninteresting. From here I can see she's nothing but problems. If this was a Harem game it would be the first time EVER that I would refuse a girl. Result: Not Interested.
3- Summer - Nothing for, nothing against it's a nothing burger. She feels as unappetizing as a Vegan meal. I'm talking about personality, the assets are all awesome, of course. Result: Not Interested.
4- Danielle - Lea wannabe. She would be on a maybe list if this was a Harem, since it isn't, nope. Result: Not Interested.
5- Jacklyn - The Ex that could go die far away. Haven't even seen her yet, just want distance. Result: Not Interested.
6- The redheaded on the lake - Couldn't even bother to learn her name. She'll be problems galore. Result: Not Interested.

Okey, that's harsh)
I mean, it's just the beginning, you can't know what is gonna happen, like whether Ex will show up or not, also game makes you choose the path for a reason, I mean if you chose Mia - you will get her (unless maniac will get to her...joking)

About other so called "whores", I mean I have already played plenty of games when we start with a bitchy or slutty LI but during the game she redeems herself and you start falling for her.
You, on the other hand, - don't even give any chances them, like they behaved bad in few scenes, and already are the lost souls.. If every character was a saint, it would be boring, also, don't their flaws make them a bit more alive? Pure virgins without any bad personality traits give me a vibe of an empty NPC, rather then alive person.
And don't forget - they are horny teenagers, who were on quarantine for how long?

Personally I didn't like that lake-trap (when they left MC without trunks) on the 1st update and how stupid MC fell for it, but I got over it, it's a horror theme, characters are supposed to be stupid))) (though I still don't like it)

7- Alex - Not really a friend. Just a pervert. Probably involved or guilty of that Abigail girl disappearance. Result: Not interested.

well, I mean, it's good that you are not interested in Alex, right?


Seriously though, I think it's too early to judge, but you do you of course.
And on another note, I think it will take a lot of time fot the game to get serious progress, cause Dev works on it on his free time only.
And I still didn't get any updates on steam, only 1st chapter, that's just sad(

 

[den_tiger]

i can't find Summer's second photo even with a mod. hmmm... Any help from brother here?

I only got Daddy's girla and Flower Shower View attachment 3368069

I think you mean Alice. But yeah, I'm missing that one too

 

[Tinman021]

I think you mean Alice. But yeah, I'm missing that one too

I finally found it. It is at the Mei path, right after her flashback of meeting Jason at college.

 

[SamualHand]

It seems that, but we can´t be sure... at least not 100% sure. I think Alex can be the murderer but i need more evidences than a photo and some chat, about Danielle being the next victim... who knows, maybe Alex tell her he just find the photo there like an excuse or maybe if Alex is the real murdeder then he could kill her to prevent her from talking about what she has seen

This way your potential commitment to her, would not make a difference.... just saying....

 

[FatGiant]

Okey, that's harsh)
I mean, it's just the beginning, you can't know what is gonna happen, like whether Ex will show up or not, also game makes you choose the path for a reason, I mean if you chose Mia - you will get her (unless maniac will get to her...joking)

About other so called "whores", I mean I have already played plenty of games when we start with a bitchy or slutty LI but during the game she redeems herself and you start falling for her.
You, on the other hand, - don't even give any chances them, like they behaved bad in few scenes, and already are the lost souls.. If every character was a saint, it would be boring, also, don't their flaws make them a bit more alive? Pure virgins without any bad personality traits give me a vibe of an empty NPC, rather then alive person.
And don't forget - they are horny teenagers, who were on quarantine for how long?

Personally I didn't like that lake-trap (when they left MC without trunks) on the 1st update and how stupid MC fell for it, but I got over it, it's a horror theme, characters are supposed to be stupid))) (though I still don't like it)



well, I mean, it's good that you are not interested in Alex, right?


Seriously though, I think it's too early to judge, but you do you of course.
And on another note, I think it will take a lot of time fot the game to get serious progress, cause Dev works on it on his free time only.
And I still didn't get any updates on steam, only 1st chapter, that's just sad(

Nope, mate. Not to soon. The Dev only has ONE chance on a first impression, and they blew it. They HAD to interfere, they HAD to show that we as players are nothing, they are in control. So you choose Mia, but what you get is a MC thinking of Jacklyn. "I love you Mia" but I want Jacklyn... fuck it then... Why do I say it's interference, because the Dev doesn't want you with Mia.

But it's OK, there's other girls, right? Wrong. The only LI that I can respect is Mia, since I would only play this once, and it's a one girl game, I chose the only one that meant something to me. I'm blocked by the Dev on the FIRST date? I'm done.

For me, the game is over. And done. I was here to Play a Game, not to be Played by the Dev.

Peace :/

 

[Leonardb2fly4u]

how to apply mod on mac?

 

[den_tiger]

I finally found it. It is at the Mei path, right after her flashback of meeting Jason at college.

thanks. weird that the alice card is with a mei scene and not an alice scene.

 

[bigdick289]

To recapitulate:

FatGiant

1- Mia, the Dev doesn't want you to have her. Done.
Dude, even though the ex would show up, I'm pretty sure you'll have the choice to remain loyal to Mia.
2- Summer you say she's in love but she chooses to humiliate you for no reason. Done.
?????? You are in a forest, having fun with two sexy girls..oh no, they took your Trunks, but who cares, they already saw you naked and There is nobody in the forest. Not a big humiliation imo lmao
3- Lea wants to drug you, doesn't care what dick she fucks, is the instigator of the prank. Done.
?????? Bro, it's not like you were on Fentanyl lmaoo, it's just "fun Drugs" for good sex... In a video game. Your IRL virtue is still there
4- Danielle just wants to fuck, today is you, next day someone else. Done.
?????? She wants to be exclusive if you follow her path

 

[FatGiant]

FatGiant

1- Mia, the Dev doesn't want you to have her. Done.
Dude, even though the ex would show up, I'm pretty sure you'll have the choice to remain loyal to Mia.
2- Summer you say she's in love but she chooses to humiliate you for no reason. Done.
?????? You are in a forest, having fun with two sexy girls..oh no, they took your Trunks, but who cares, they already saw you naked and There is nobody in the forest. Not a big humiliation imo lmao
3- Lea wants to drug you, doesn't care what dick she fucks, is the instigator of the prank. Done.
?????? Bro, it's not like you were on Fentanyl lmaoo, it's just "fun Drugs" for good sex... In a video game. Your IRL virtue is still there
4- Danielle just wants to fuck, today is you, next day someone else. Done.
?????? She wants to be exclusive if you follow her path

Look, I see that, all that.

The thing is... after the Dev interjects themselves in the story, I no longer trust them. So, what was a innocent prank, that could even be a fun revenge later, without that trust, becomes the beginning of a humiliation path, that I don't want, that I will not follow. Then comes the drugs... could be innocent... just for fun and games... but after you lose the trust, it is now a full-on attempt to frame you for something, to put you in some compromising position, to start a blackmail scheme, to simply make you addicted, to rape you, or even worse... All it took was a simple change, the no longer trusting the Dev.

After that interference, the story (what little there is) became instantly VERY dark. There's no longer a sense of thrill, but one of full on horror. The fact that the Dev can and will turn the MC into his puppet AGAINST your will, taints the whole thing. There's nothing innocent anymore. Sure, it is only my perception, nothing like that happened (it would be in the TAGs) but the thing is, that is how I am reading the story now. Second guessing everything, it is NOT a good feeling, it is NOT a good story anymore.

And, don't forget, I don't trust the Dev anymore. Whose fault is that? I chose Mia, 4 times. The Dev goes and makes the MC be all about the EX while "trying" to fuck Mia... nope, no, this is NOT what I chose. So, okay, message received. No Mia. No Mia, no me. Then I start to re-examine everything... everyone... oh the Dev is trying to make me NOT chose Mia, why?

And here we are. I'm fully convinced that the Dev will interfere again, and again. So, I see no point in playing, or better, be played.

I don't deny that the game is quite beautiful, the character assets are gorgeous. But, the writing is now, after I lost trust, very much a problem. I still wish them good luck, while they keep all of you hoodwinked and trusting. Not me.

Peace