Well damn. In my opinion the concept of the game will throw away many players. You get some tease of freedom inside the city while collecting gems and after time runs out you have to start reading comics again. The story is "interesting-ish" but the gameplay is simply boring, confusing and not holding together.
About the scenes, they are not bad at all. I love the idea of more camera angles but they need to be improved. Some of them are just zoomed in too much, some of them needs to be redone. They would be much more enjoyable if you actually have to interact with girls before the scenes starts because right now they are simply looped animations which everyone can easily find on the internet with much better quality.
What i would recommend is to actually focus on one thing first, either gameplay of adult stuff. As a player i wouldn't like to feel like i'm playing two separate games at the same time (some crappy sim or 3d sandbox game).