well this was a surprise... I honestly didn't expect much from the description but just another horny game so I'd suggest to make some changes to that to make the game more appealing... but I gave it a try anyway. Pretty good writing and story, and likeable characters. Building of relationships is also great, the duality of the MC (while not unique) is a very good take on the trope. I went into this expecting MC to try and fuck everything that moves after two minutes, thankfully that didn't turn out to be the case.
Renders are not the greatest, bu I can overlook that. Some minor grammar issues, those can be fixed later. Not a huge fan of the sandbox element, don't like it in general, but this one is quite simple (so far), so if it won't get more complicated than as it is right now, I can live with it. However there were some elements indicated earlier regarding adding a management style aspect with a few different stats, and I'm hoping the dev would rather focus their effort on the story and characters than turning this into a management game... can't stand those (or at least make it optional please if you are dead set on implementing that). I'm not even going to comment on the horse sized cock of the MC, at this point it's just a given