Sure, if you are still stuck in your angsty teen phase and don't ever read anything more sophisticated than avengers comics, then this might come off as "good writing". But by any objective standard it isn't, it's the typical nonsense that you would expect from a pretentious high school senior. Read my review to see the obvious issues with the writing.
A good question to ask yourself is: "if I had to explain this story to another person, what would you tell him/her?". If you can't come up with anything remotely cohesive or interesting, then it's hardly a good story. In this case the answer would be "angsty teen wants to fuck his depressed family, and random events like rapes happen without explanation". Even the game itself admits that in the very first screen (see my review). There is no structure or plot whatsoever here. Hence I can't believe how many people still insist on calling this mess "good writing". But then you realize there are still people here defending a scam, and it all makes more sense.
The fact that he set up a supposed alternative payment system which we now know was created while having virtually no idea about what to do in the future (he went on to do nothing for a year and counting) is indeed suspicious.
