Not only for this video, but for your content in general.
1. Wide resolution instead of 1920x1080 with a watermark almost at the center of the screen instead of the corner.
2. Watermarks in premium videos.
3. Too long (and unnecessary) intro.
4. Too much attention to playing with male genitalia instead of focusing on the girl.
5. Not faceless males.
6. To much snake girls (no ass(hole), no legs(feet)) with 80% of attention to their tails (when male characters aren't included), when you could make more lesbian/solo videos with Rachnera, Papi, Centorea (I know you haven't made videos with her, but why not), the fox girl, or the kraken girl.
7. You spending too much time to making videos mostly because they include an unnecessary amount of seizure-inducing snake coils or spider webs, which have nothing to do with the porn part of the video.
There's only 4 of your videos, which I keep on my device and don't want to delete: Rachnera's Ropes, Rachnera's Roles Reversal, Stick-In Slime, and the beginning of the Rachnera's Reprise, when she using Miia's tail to fuck herself.
Thanks for the feedback. I think this is the most thorough feedback I've ever received. A lot of the criticisms are related to specific tastes. Most issues are due to design decisions geared more towards a general porn audience.
1) The resolution is 21:9 instead of 16:9 to exaggerate the cinematic theme.
I put the watermark near the middle of the screen to stop people who repost this cropped to 16:9. The public version is 16:9, and it's the same watermark. I've even animated the watermark to move on different shots to combat watermark removal.
2) This is actually because of you. Earlier this year, my pirated animations were being posted across Reddit and Discord servers. I wanted to provide a non-watermarked premium version for supporters, like some of my old animations like Release the Kraken. But it got to a point where a huge majority of people are seeing my supporter versions more than my public ones for free, because of the huge leaks.
So I added my watermark and credits at the end to all versions. You can't complain about a watermark on a premium video when you didn't actually pay for it. Deal with it. You can't blame me for putting my name on a project of this caliber.
3), 4) and 6) Have to do with specific tastes and who the video is targeted towards. I've run polls and a majority of people really like and prefer the extra story and character development. For some, it's their favourite part. That's actually one of the things that makes my content special. Not just the same old sex animations on loop.
I know there's the stupid helicopter scene that I just can't help myself with. But to be fair, it took no more than an afternoon to animate that it's all Mixamo mocap presets. In comparison, the large coil scene took me two weeks to animate just over a minute. Scenes of the intro with people talking don't take anywhere near as long as the sex. It really isn't taking away much.
I do mostly snakes, because that's what people voted for. I could do more different monstergirls, but that's not what this video is and it's not what people want as much of. It's lucky I even featured any extra women in this at all. Though I do have plans to feature a more primary female human animation, in the future.
5) I don't actually know if this is a good or a bad thing, it doesn't say. A huge amount of people want kissing and faces, a huge amount of people don't want to see the faces at all (or voices, like moaning). So it's impossible to tell. I have a mix between animations.
7) Again, more of a target audience thing. I've essentially made an animated ASMR video. An absolutely huge amount of people consume that content and love to hear the monstergirl teasing and dirty-talking about their body, themselves, how it feels.
All in all, I'm glad that out of any critisism I've received, it doesn't have anything to do with the animation itself. There are so many problems in this animation, and it's all I can see. Due to my inexperience, this whole video is taped together with hopes and dreams XD
There's so much clipping everywhere and I didn't have enough time to fix them properly. Sierra's hands are so bad. My faces are terrible. I guess people don't really care THAT much. Being the chef, all I see are the ingredients.
Thanks for the feedback tho, I'll definitely try and focus on what you mentioned in the future.
Release the Kraken 2 is on the table. No intro, no script, primarily lesbian. Lesgetit.