VN Ren'Py Elmwood University [Ep.3 Fix] [WickedWare]

[TonyMurray]

The grammar and spelling has come up before to be honest. Spellings and Typos some slip through every now and then. They soon get fixed.
The grammar, while I've not really seen anything wrong wrong with it. I'm a lad from the UK so his conversation flow is natural to me, but people have pointed out it is indeed wrong. I think this is a "lost in translation" thing. That is to say it may work over here and generally be accepted, but when and English speaker from outside looks at it, it's wrong.

The example I gave last time, though it's not in the game, is when Americans use the phrase "could care less" this is wrong as it implies you care levels have room to drop. The correct phrase is couldn't care less. But the incorrect phrase has been used so much and often that's it's just the accepted norm.

I'm a professional proofreader and I'm English, and I can't think that I've noticed anything much to comment on here – I haven't played Ep3 and it was a little while ago that I played Ep2, but nothing came up from the first two eps that would make me take note (you'll always get some typos/minor errors, but that's not a problem in itself).

 

[Lagunavii]

Ah Tony, pleasure to see you again...

You were actually around the last time this was brought up, it was a spoke vs spoken argument. Well not really an argument. More a very short discussion.

It's as I said, things others are considering grammatical errors, (while they are errors) they are use that way everyday in English it's become the norm so to a UK resident it just doesn't seem wrong, where as to others they are like what?!

 

[TonyMurray]

Ah Tony, pleasure to see you again...

You were actually around the last time this was brought up, it was a spoke vs spoken argument. Well not really an argument. More a very short discussion.

It's as I said, things others are considering grammatical errors, (while they are errors) they are use that way everyday in English it's become the norm so to a UK resident it just doesn't seem wrong, where as to others they are like what?!

Ah yes, I remember that! And yeah, the other thing to note is that most of the text in these games is dialogue, and that doesn't follow the same rules. Well-written dialogue would be written "as we speak it", because if it was held to the same rules of grammar, it would sound unnatural a lot of the time. That's where your US favourite of "could care less" comes in - it's wrong, but people do (incorrectly) say it, so using it in dialogue is not always wrong. Typos should still be eliminated as much as possible though, unless used to suggest accent or similar (like using "nuffink" instead of "nothing" as an extreme example).

 

[Bondage - James Bondage]

Well, I was to blame for that argument (mea culpa and sorry again) but here is a typo, persepctive has to be perspective.

But Florence is beautiful.

Edit: I mean Dr. Riley, I am not that close to her (yet ).

 

[Lagunavii]

it's wrong, but people do (incorrectly) say it,

It's the same as literally. That one winds me up more than "could care less" oh she literally laughed her head off. Well she didn't she. She's over there head still attached.

 

[wns517]

Engrish? I had the impression that the Dev was from the U.K. But maybe I am wrong.

idk for sure i know hardly anything ab the creator but there's a few spots that were sentence errors at least and you had to use context clues lmao . Its such a nitpick tho. Nothing nearly as bad as lust academy. Overall really great ep if you enjoyed 1 and 2

 

[TonyMurray]

Well, I was to blame for that argument (mea culpa and sorry again) but here is a typo, persepctive has to be perspective. But Florence is beautiful.

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She might be the one I'm most looking forward to seeing more of.

 

[Lagunavii]

She might be the one I'm most looking forward to seeing more of.

Oh it's the other teacher I'm most excited for. Forget her name,but I'm can see her being into a little bdsm.

 

[TonyMurray]

Oh it's the other teacher I'm most excited for. Forget her name,but I'm can see her being into a little bdsm.

Veronika (Dr. Novotna) doesn't do it for me. I'll give her a try for completion's sake though, and see if she wins me around.

 

[Lagunavii]

Veronika (Dr. Novotna) doesn't do it for me. I'll give her a try for completion's sake though, and see if she wins me around.

Yeah I get that, I feel the same about the succubus girl (god I need to play this again to get the names back) obviously I still view the scenes for reasons

 

[TonyMurray]

Yeah I get that, I feel the same about the succubus girl (god I need to play this again to get the names back) obviously I still view the scenes for reasons

They don't quite look the same, but you have this (or I refer to my cards, or Milton's thread if I've not got cards ready for other games):

TBH, if Novotna was closer to this look, I'd be a lot more interested!

 

[lorkdubo]

Yeah I get that, I feel the same about the succubus girl (god I need to play this again to get the names back) obviously I still view the scenes for reasons

Succubus girl???
...
You mean the redhead? Selina?
The Chinese girl is quite nasty too. But it is intended like that.

 

[Lagunavii]

They don't quite look the same, but you have this (or I refer to my cards, or Milton's thread if I've not got cards ready for other games):
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TBH, if Novotna was closer to this look, I'd be a lot more interested!

Oh wow, they do look different. Thanks for this.

Succubus girl???
...
You mean the redhead? Selina?

Yeah I meant selina.

 

[wns517]

I'm a professional proofreader and I'm English, and I can't think that I've noticed anything much to comment on here – I haven't played Ep3 and it was a little while ago that I played Ep2, but nothing came up from the first two eps that would make me take note (you'll always get some typos/minor errors, but that's not a problem in itself).

yeah it was probably just my 'muricanism having to do some double takes and me making a bad joke earlier. Ep 3 was great tho after fully finishing it. As an advocate of full sending on the first run this one made me laugh (and kind of feel like an asshole ) at the consequences and impending doom like another certain college game. Y'all will like it...preemptive sorry...ill see myself out for awhile

 

[Freaqy]

yeah it was probably just my 'muricanism having to do some double takes and me making a bad joke earlier. Ep 3 was great tho after fully finishing it. As an advocate of full sending on the first run this one made me laugh (and kind of feel like an asshole ) at the consequences and impending doom like another certain college game. Y'all will like it...preemptive sorry...ill see myself out for awhile

You should totally share Ep3 so the rest of us can play

 

[Lagunavii]

You should totally share Ep3 so the rest of us can play

We definitely need a hero like,

 

[w123t4]

Finished the current update and want to ask some question.
1, How is the love and lust point work? By looking at the word I think love point will unlock relationship and good ending and lust point will unlock sex scene, but in the skill "blind lust" it said "ignore love requirement for sex, so both love and lust can unlock sex scene? What if I have a high lust but low love? Will there also unlock a sex scene or the mc will do something like rape to cause the sex scene happened? Kind of confused about how these two works.
2, How will the pregnancy system work? Does it count every creampie times that the possibility of Lis getting knocked up by random generation(As the skill "potent cum" description is "increase the chance of pregnancy") or there will be a certain choice that player can choose to let mc impregnate the Li at that moment?
3, How can we identify which girl is the main Li and the which girl is the side Li? For now there are 18 Lis on the same page, are they all main Lis? I remembered someone said in previous post that it has 4 main Lis but who is actually? Also, there are only 2 women is over 25 in currently update, since in the milf skill's description there will be side character "milfs", is that mean the side character will be another page or maybe even not showing up in the character list?
4, In the current content there are a lesbian couple, will it be possible to make one of them or both of them cheating with mc which make them turned from lesbian into straight or bi-sexual? Since their lust can only be raised by each other and their trait said they hate straight men, I think it will be very difficult or impossible?
5, How often can we get skill point from lecture? Will it be possible to learn all perks or almost all of them in a single playthrough?

 

[Lagunavii]

Finished the current update and want to ask some question.

Which current update are you talking about? the one on here or the one we are still awaiting a hero for?

1, How is the love and lust point work? By looking at the word I think love point will unlock relationship and good ending and lust point will unlock sex scene, but in the skill "blind lust" it said "ignore love requirement for sex, so both love and lust can unlock sex scene? What if I have a high lust but low love? Will there also unlock a sex scene or the mc will do something like rape to cause the sex scene happened? Kind of confused about how these two works.

It tells you in the game
Lust represents how much a character desires you sexually right now, it has a limit of 10 and resets each day. If a characters Lust would be increased above 10, it is instead set to 10 and the excess is granted as Love, it is increased and decreased through dialogue choices
Love represents how much a character likes you, It has no upper limit, it is usually increased through dialogue choices.
Basically uoi are right, in order to sleep with a character, there lust points must be a certain level, in order to be in a relationship with them and potentially do other sex acts. you're gonna need those love points up.

2, How will the pregnancy system work? Does it count every creampie times that the possibility of Lis getting knocked up by random generation(As the skill "potent cum" description is "increase the chance of pregnancy") or there will be a certain choice that player can choose to let mc impregnate the Li at that moment?

We have got no idea to be honest. still early days in the game. but the game is tracking creampies for a reason

3, How can we identify which girl is the main Li and the which girl is the side Li? For now there are 18 Lis on the same page, are they all main Lis? I remembered someone said in previous post that it has 4 main Lis but who is actually? Also, there are only 2 women is over 25 in currently update, since in the milf skill's description there will be side character "milfs", is that mean the side character will be another page or maybe even not showing up in the character list?

At the moment all 18 of the girls are LI's that's why they all ger there own page when you click the heart. for now there are only 2 older characters, but we don't know what side girls are to be introduced

4, In the current content there are a lesbian couple, will it be possible to make one of them or both of them cheating with mc which make them turned from lesbian into straight or bi-sexual? Since their lust can only be raised by each other and their trait said they hate straight men, I think it will be very difficult or impossible?

Again, you are asking shit we simply have no idea about and have to guess. they both have there own page and therefore points, so it might be possible to split them up, who knows?

 

[w123t4]

Which current update are you talking about? the one on here or the one we are still awaiting a hero for?

Thanks for answering! Just new to this game, I am afraid I am not the hero you are asking for.

It tells you in the game
Lust represents how much a character desires you sexually right now, it has a limit of 10 and resets each day. If a characters Lust would be increased above 10, it is instead set to 10 and the excess is granted as Love, it is increased and decreased through dialogue choices
Love represents how much a character likes you, It has no upper limit, it is usually increased through dialogue choices.
Basically uoi are right, in order to sleep with a character, there lust points must be a certain level, in order to be in a relationship with them and potentially do other sex acts. you're gonna need those love points up.

Wtf it can click on that word to show more detail?! Don't know about that until you say so, the developer really need to make a tutorial about these.

 

[Lagunavii]

Thanks for answering! Just new to this game, I am afraid I am not the hero you are asking for.

Well how dare you get our hopes up like that. Disgusting behaviour from yourself"

Wtf it can click on that word to show more detail?! Don't know about that until you say so, the developer really need to make a tutorial about these.

To be fair, he might have told about these over on Patreon, I don't know. But you're not likely to get a user guide on a piracy site