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if you don’t want… well, write to some of the uploaders. They deleted my links centuries ago and put their.
Hi , Milo Haze FF. How are you doing? Can we get new version of Enslaver (ver.0.50) with some mindblowing sexy shit in 2024? Thanks a lot for your attention in community and neat work with your projects
Not complaining or rushing ( and only look here for new contents ) but any news on when next update will be? And is there ever going to be some mention of preg risk or impregnation?
Hello, friend. I’m working on “The Blue County” - 0.2.0.
Damn. Look I try to be positive but this I simply cannot. So I am going to be wordy but it comes 100% from a place of constructive criticism.
This is not corruption at all. Its just being a bossy rapist. HUGE difference. (not that is entirely bad. This is definitely the place for that. It should just be recategorized explicitly as rape simulator instead of corruption) Corruption isnt about force as much as it is eliciting a state of compliance through manipulation. Just insulting a girl, calling her a cow and constantly saying "DO IT" is NOT corruption in the slightest. This doesnt play like corruption. It plays out like a first time Dom who doesnt really understand what to do with a sub.
An example of corruption would be like being generally pretty nice to a girl but repeatedly bringing up how lonely she is, That she isnt going to do better. Its not about badgering someone just to get you to shut the fuck up. Its about making them willingly, albeit begrudgingly changing their own mind. Which is also why drugging girls doesnt really count as corruption. Convincing a girl to willingly drink or do drugs is closer to corruption.
Which corruption is not even the biggest issue here. This game feels like some 14 year old Sikh who has never had sex without drugs/alcohol/rape being involved. Its like a fundamental lack of understanding of what the concept is and it shows in how the games narrative plays out.
And the narrative is just so .... beyond words.
First and foremost, What is with the pacing?! 10k clicks only works in a renpy VN if there is meaningful content. Clicking to walk isnt meaningful. Rerendering frames to mimic walking is wasteful. And then there is the dialogue. It takes WAY too many pages of renders and inane text that most players are going to be rapid fire clicking through and not reading cause they can get the jist in 10 frames what this game allots 1000 frames for. Rapid fire Diablo style clicking to get through and not read the narrative negates the enjoyment one can have from rule 43 (The more innocent and pure a thing is, The more satisfying it is to corrupt it.) Having that much exposition is actually a good thing given corruptions nature. Yet people dont get "one and done" corrupted. It is a VERY gradual process and the story should reflect that.
The biggest problem clearly residing in an author trying to write about things he does not actually know. Just as a petty example, The early setting sees the MC trolling high school girls, But one of the girls at least is housed in college dorms?! Which it feels like a cultural thing that doesnt fully understand the differences between high school and college, especially in the westernized setting that this is portrayed as.
There is also the bizarre design choice of making the MC scaled at least a foot shorter than the girls he is pursuing. Why was this done? Is it to imply Haze Jr is substantially younger than these girls? If they are HS/College (lets just say 18-20) is it trying to imply hes a middle school kid? With how it drones on about how great he is like the sexual second coming yet he is clearly inept at even talking to girls. He reminds me of the middle school boy who first discovers he likes girls and shows it by punching one. That is consistently the level of maturity the MC displays. Not only is his mental maturity that of a teenager punching WAY above his weight, so too is he scaled as physically immature. (even though its clearly a down scaled adult male that would be roughly 4`7- 5`2 when compared to the girls in the game.
Also. The Lydia scene was just nasty. Not that it was all together horrible in concept, A strung out junkie is NOT a candidate for corruption and submission as shes already been corrupted into submission.
Look, there is a framework here. Something that COULD be good if executed far better than this. There is just so much real world experience or at the very least extensive research needed to course correct this into something viable. Given that this amounts to jack fodder, to have these glaring of flaws that render it too distracting to nut to is an impressive fail in its own regard. Which is why It feels like constructive criticism is the most productive route here. Even if this is for a quick nut, It needs to be taken with at least a grain of seriousness. The audience should not be expected to exhibit this much suspension of disbelief.
I encourage you to keep working and refining, because this is an area that NEEDS more development as theres just not enough good corruption in these kind of VNs. I would recommend doing some research. Go play Knights of the Old Republic. Try to turn Bastilla to become a Sith and see the value of your view of the dark side. Get Mission Vao to side with you without her just resigning herself to her fate. THAT will give you a better idea of what corruption is.
An extensive crash course into BDSM and Dom dynamic SHOULD be your foundation to work from.
Its not about forcing them to do what you want. Its about convincing them to WANT to do what you want them to.
Keep at it. The audience will definitely still be here. Best of luck and thank you for your contributions so far.
This is not corruption at all. Its just being a bossy rapist. HUGE difference. (not that is entirely bad. This is definitely the place for that. It should just be recategorized explicitly as rape simulator instead of corruption) Corruption isnt about force as much as it is eliciting a state of compliance through manipulation. Just insulting a girl, calling her a cow and constantly saying "DO IT" is NOT corruption in the slightest. This doesnt play like corruption. It plays out like a first time Dom who doesnt really understand what to do with a sub.
An example of corruption would be like being generally pretty nice to a girl but repeatedly bringing up how lonely she is, That she isnt going to do better. Its not about badgering someone just to get you to shut the fuck up. Its about making them willingly, albeit begrudgingly changing their own mind. Which is also why drugging girls doesnt really count as corruption. Convincing a girl to willingly drink or do drugs is closer to corruption.
Which corruption is not even the biggest issue here. This game feels like some 14 year old Sikh who has never had sex without drugs/alcohol/rape being involved. Its like a fundamental lack of understanding of what the concept is and it shows in how the games narrative plays out.
And the narrative is just so .... beyond words.
First and foremost, What is with the pacing?! 10k clicks only works in a renpy VN if there is meaningful content. Clicking to walk isnt meaningful. Rerendering frames to mimic walking is wasteful. And then there is the dialogue. It takes WAY too many pages of renders and inane text that most players are going to be rapid fire clicking through and not reading cause they can get the jist in 10 frames what this game allots 1000 frames for. Rapid fire Diablo style clicking to get through and not read the narrative negates the enjoyment one can have from rule 43 (The more innocent and pure a thing is, The more satisfying it is to corrupt it.) Having that much exposition is actually a good thing given corruptions nature. Yet people dont get "one and done" corrupted. It is a VERY gradual process and the story should reflect that.
The biggest problem clearly residing in an author trying to write about things he does not actually know. Just as a petty example, The early setting sees the MC trolling high school girls, But one of the girls at least is housed in college dorms?! Which it feels like a cultural thing that doesnt fully understand the differences between high school and college, especially in the westernized setting that this is portrayed as.
There is also the bizarre design choice of making the MC scaled at least a foot shorter than the girls he is pursuing. Why was this done? Is it to imply Haze Jr is substantially younger than these girls? If they are HS/College (lets just say 18-20) is it trying to imply hes a middle school kid? With how it drones on about how great he is like the sexual second coming yet he is clearly inept at even talking to girls. He reminds me of the middle school boy who first discovers he likes girls and shows it by punching one. That is consistently the level of maturity the MC displays. Not only is his mental maturity that of a teenager punching WAY above his weight, so too is he scaled as physically immature. (even though its clearly a down scaled adult male that would be roughly 4`7- 5`2 when compared to the girls in the game.
Also. The Lydia scene was just nasty. Not that it was all together horrible in concept, A strung out junkie is NOT a candidate for corruption and submission as shes already been corrupted into submission.
Look, there is a framework here. Something that COULD be good if executed far better than this. There is just so much real world experience or at the very least extensive research needed to course correct this into something viable. Given that this amounts to jack fodder, to have these glaring of flaws that render it too distracting to nut to is an impressive fail in its own regard. Which is why It feels like constructive criticism is the most productive route here. Even if this is for a quick nut, It needs to be taken with at least a grain of seriousness. The audience should not be expected to exhibit this much suspension of disbelief.
I encourage you to keep working and refining, because this is an area that NEEDS more development as theres just not enough good corruption in these kind of VNs. I would recommend doing some research. Go play Knights of the Old Republic. Try to turn Bastilla to become a Sith and see the value of your view of the dark side. Get Mission Vao to side with you without her just resigning herself to her fate. THAT will give you a better idea of what corruption is.
An extensive crash course into BDSM and Dom dynamic SHOULD be your foundation to work from.
Its not about forcing them to do what you want. Its about convincing them to WANT to do what you want them to.
Keep at it. The audience will definitely still be here. Best of luck and thank you for your contributions so far.
I get it, you like corruption fetish. Ok. Great. Me too. But the issue is That’s not branded as corruption game. You scratch only its failure as a corruption simulator. We have a plenty more fetishes, here:
3DCG, Male protagonist, Rape, Mind control, Masturbation, Blackmail, Corruption, Drugs, Humiliation, Forced, Incest, Male domination, Stripping, Forced Stripping, Hard spanking, Mobile game.
Upcoming fetishes: Foot worship(kind of), Scat/Forced scat(Avoidable), Pissing/Forced pissing(Avoidable), Bestiality(Avoidable)
The purpose of the game is clear - take a sit, rest and start fapping. If some of this exercises don’t make you comfortable while playing - it’s clear: that game is not for you.
thank you for the feedback. I’ll reread it.
Fair point. You are right. Those are simply tags and not genres. Those tags do in fact overlap. As for corruption, that is the reason why I posted a length critique of the corruption in the game. Cause either I am just missing what is being considered to be corruption or its essentially not there and its relying too heavily on other tags and treating corruption like a meta tag instead of a meaningful trait of the game. Examples of corruption in the game are not really corruption even when its trying to be. Which I know I found this from a post referncing games specifically as being prime examples of corruption. So that might explain my focus on it a bit better. My apologies.
Now I will also confess.. I DONT play these to fap to. I play these to see the exploration of the behaviors they present which are typically behaviors too taboo to be seen or even hinted at in most mainstream media. I look for what is seen as the fringes and that is in part to better understand the philosophical, sociological and psychological aspects of peoples creations and how different people and different cultures see such fringe behaviors. If I wanted porn honestly there is FAR easier ways to get it with FAR less risks to various things like hardware. Dont get me wrong. I am not seeking Shakespeare on the human condition out of jack fodder, but a glimpse of where the line is socially and understanding how that line moves respective to culture, law and the individual. Just like many cheap, trashy romance novels inadvertently give a glimpse into the mind of those who commit crimes of passion
Regardless, Take my words for the current going rate for unsolicited opinions from random asshats online
It doesnt really matter. Its your project. It is just food for thought and sharing my experience with the content as presented.
Now I will also confess.. I DONT play these to fap to. I play these to see the exploration of the behaviors they present which are typically behaviors too taboo to be seen or even hinted at in most mainstream media. I look for what is seen as the fringes and that is in part to better understand the philosophical, sociological and psychological aspects of peoples creations and how different people and different cultures see such fringe behaviors. If I wanted porn honestly there is FAR easier ways to get it with FAR less risks to various things like hardware. Dont get me wrong. I am not seeking Shakespeare on the human condition out of jack fodder, but a glimpse of where the line is socially and understanding how that line moves respective to culture, law and the individual. Just like many cheap, trashy romance novels inadvertently give a glimpse into the mind of those who commit crimes of passion
Regardless, Take my words for the current going rate for unsolicited opinions from random asshats online
It doesnt really matter. Its your project. It is just food for thought and sharing my experience with the content as presented.
Thanks again. It become nice conversation.Fair point. You are right. Those are simply tags and not genres. Those tags do in fact overlap. As for corruption, that is the reason why I posted a length critique of the corruption in the game. Cause either I am just missing what is being considered to be corruption or its essentially not there and its relying too heavily on other tags and treating corruption like a meta tag instead of a meaningful trait of the game. Examples of corruption in the game are not really corruption even when its trying to be. Which I know I found this from a post referncing games specifically as being prime examples of corruption. So that might explain my focus on it a bit better. My apologies.
Now I will also confess.. I DONT play these to fap to. I play these to see the exploration of the behaviors they present which are typically behaviors too taboo to be seen or even hinted at in most mainstream media. I look for what is seen as the fringes and that is in part to better understand the philosophical, sociological and psychological aspects of peoples creations and how different people and different cultures see such fringe behaviors. If I wanted porn honestly there is FAR easier ways to get it with FAR less risks to various things like hardware. Dont get me wrong. I am not seeking Shakespeare on the human condition out of jack fodder, but a glimpse of where the line is socially and understanding how that line moves respective to culture, law and the individual. Just like many cheap, trashy romance novels inadvertently give a glimpse into the mind of those who commit crimes of passion
Regardless, Take my words for the current going rate for unsolicited opinions from random asshats online
About your journey - I’m afraid you won’t find here(I mean in the whole AVN scene) what are you looking for. Maybe(just maybe) you can find some quality writing and storytelling about your fetishes in the most famous and mainstream games here, but they’re too vanilla for my taste and I don’t play them, so take a my word with a grain of salt. I just assume.
Our more… controversial games(including mine, of course) are more… fetish-orientated. The purpose of them are clear - give the players that, what the better games(more professional made games) don’t give them - harder fetishes. I start making games because I couldn’t find that, what will scratch my itch in this industry.
My games are mostly for me(I earn peanuts from sales and patrons), but don’t get me wrong - I’m extremely happy when someone likes my games, write something encouraging, etc…as any other artist, I guess…
But still - my games clears up my fantasies and helps me to live the real life better. Some kind of therapy, lol.
long story short - don’t search Shakespeare in low-quality AVN(which is 95% of our scene)
be safe
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I keep getting a crash to desktop in the scene where you have sex with Kate while tutoring her, and the scene where Roxy masturbates in her room. I can't progress the story because of it. Is this happening to anyone else? Does anyone know fix?
Never heard of this. Try to delete the folder with the game(the saves won’t be affected) and install it again. That might be help.
Thanks for making these game Milo, love them. Can't wait for more content with the teachers, I'll be patiently waiting =)
Might be a good idea to put a link to that into an "other games" section of OP and/or your sig?
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I think it's just building up, everything is still upcoming.
Although, I'm looking forward to the Dark Path update too
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milo you know that enslaver is more liked than your new game huh?