VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.7.5 Public] [Caribdis]

[Pervo]

I'm gonna show my appreciation for the game in the form of a mini review/feedback.

I'm already biased since I loved once in a lifetime. I am excited as the dev has already proven his chops in terms in writing a compelling story and breathing life into characters.

For eternum, there are many right elements to hook interest right at the start. The universe of VR gaming/metaverse is always an interesting concept, if the popularity of SAO is anything to go by. The characters so far are pretty, albeit a few of them appearing generic. But one can have only so many different elements before things start coinciding with other works.

One critique i would mention is the dialogue of the MC. The ever so polite, NPC form of speech he has displayed is failing to develop a core character so far. The MC from OIAL had witty humor and charm to him. The current MC feels like a customer sales rep. Certainly his overly friendly demeanor despite being fobbed off is off putting at times. I do wonder if it is meant to portray his European upbringing .

The renders are high quality. The amount of content more than I anticipated. The interest is there and I'm batting for an all out harem as we have previously seen.

Good look Caribdis. Hoping this one is a knock out of the park too!

 

[GarbageCat]

.....If there is a Praetorian route in this, I'm sold... had me the second she

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[GarbageCat]

Caribdis, having played Once in a Lifetime, I have only one question.
Will there be a cameo of a certain stabby fella?

There was a reference to "President Stabb" at one point.

 

[crotch69]

Great stuff, can't wait till v0.2 and to see what awaits us in 2022.

 

[Therod]

Don’t take what I’m suggesting the wrong way but, the Description of the story and setting sounds like an opportunity to add lolis to this game, feel free to reject this.

 

[Gladheim]

Man... fuck, I'm really caught, I love this story, the characters are very sexy/hot , the music is great and the setting. I have no words, just amazing

 

[thorin0815]

Don’t take what I’m suggesting the wrong way but, the Description of the story and setting sounds like an opportunity to add lolis to this game, feel free to reject this.

Maybe you should be a little more careful with your wishes, afterwards you could get something like...

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[Therod]

Maybe you should be a little more careful with your wishes, afterwards you could get something like...

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Ha ha ha, okay, alright, no trouble. Unless it’s a separate patch.

 

[greenlittleman]

You already named six others beyond incest and corruption. There's also, off the top of my head, bdsm, exhibitionism, urine play, and group sex. I have no doubt there are more.

You both missed three very popular kinks among Japanese games and otherwise - monster girls, femdom, and ntr/cuckold.

 

[Jaam]

Haven't played the game yet, it looks really good but im curious, based on the tags it seems a bit vanilla. Is that really the case and if so, what would you say are the main redeeming qualities of it ?

 

[greenlittleman]

Haven't played the game yet, it looks really good but im curious, based on the tags it seems a bit vanilla. Is that really the case and if so, what would you say are the main redeeming qualities of it ?

You should read Once in a Lifetime - another game from the developer - first. It's completed and a good read overall. The main qualities of both games are the fact that they are actually well-written (except for the ending, it was rather rushed in OiaL), and have nice humor. It's better to wait until the author releases a more advanced version, though. There's not a lot of fap content in 0.1, which is to be expected.

 

[Jaam]

You should read Once in a Lifetime - another game from the developer - first. It's completed and a good read overall. The main qualities of both games are the fact that they are actually well-written (except for the ending, it was rather rushed in OiaL), and have nice humor. It's better to wait until the author releases a more advanced version, though. There's not a lot of fap content in 0.1, which is to be expected.

Thanks ! Didn't notice that this was made by the same creators

 

[nightmare087]

Nice game bro, i like it

 

[Faloughasch]

I came here immediately upon completing the masterpiece known as "Once in a Lifetime", and this new game does not disappoint. Super excited to see where this goes! Thank you for all the effort you put into your games!

 

[Niahrleak]

What is this quality doing in renpy?, Once in a lifetime was good, but this is going 2 steps further, everything is so cool, story, music, animations, 10/10. I really, really want to see what is next.

 

[madman11122]

Does anyone recall the update freqency of once in a lifetime? I'm wondering what eternum's update cycle might be.

 

[JJJ84]

Does anyone recall the update freqency of once in a lifetime? I'm wondering what eternum's update cycle might be.

Don't remember how often he updated OIAL, but he always uses a progress bar, and below is the current progress bar for the next update:

 

[madman11122]

Don't remember how often he uploaded OIAL, but he always uses a progress bar, and below is the current progress bar for the next update:

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Good to know, thanks for sharing. It looks like probably 3-4 months a pop for now.

 

[The_Hybrid]

Don't remember how often he updated OIAL, but he always uses a progress bar, and below is the current progress bar for the next update:

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62%!!!!!! BOOYAHHHHH

High chance that Caribdis is trying to finish and release 0.2 before Christmas

 

[brknsoul]

Just started playing, a quick grammatical suggestion; if Eternum was developed in USA, they'd use a comma as a thousands separator, not a period.

"Player number 421.200.234 successfully registered" should be "Player number 421,200,234 successfully registered".

That aside, pretty cool concept.. models are awesome! Great work so far!