VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.8.0] [Caribdis]

[Zack keneth]

i think the flow of story is perfect and sex scenes are fine. i now understand what you find lacking, but i would strongly disagree that sex scenes are bad. Its just that they are more narrative than animatic and that is not to your liking. I am type of person who will always prefer book over live animation and i prefer manga over anime so this is definitely my choice of preference and i would argue that eternum have better sex scenes than most AVN games i played from this site. not the best though, i think my personal best game for this topic is seven realms (if you did not try it yet i really suggest it, you wont be disappointed with sex scenes like you are in eternum)
but still i dont think any effort is wasted,eternum is by far my favorite AVN i read and i cant wait to see how it ends

And also the part of the game being narrative in the sex scenes and not animatic I might disagree on that

It's literally 3D so it should do better easily

Have u heard of goodbye eternity? That one is a good VN it's 2d style with a mix of 3D

That being narrative makes absolute sense but this?

My guy this is not made in 2D it's 3D

The potential is absolutely wasted if that's the case

 

[cayseron]

My guy u could have not said it better! I prefer manga as well compared to the anime that I've read so many manhua manga manhwa that I almost have more than 800 in my record Ive seen bad stuff good stuff and even peak masterpiece overall

I'd have to disagree with the claim of your sex scenes being the best in this game

It needs improvement before I'd call it the best

Since I can literally list out each details that is so easy to spot as for what's wrong

But too much work I ain't here to make a paragraph of an entire sex animations for me to list

I just hope it gets reworked in the future and better angles as well

This can easily be integrated in the game it's not even that complex compared to what the creator did in making so many details in the buildings the rooms the clothes and all even the dialogue

Getting angles is not that hard compared to what he did

no i do agree in terms of animations eternum is lackin in sex department. its my personal taste that makes it among favorite to me cause i prefer narrative approach. As i said in terms of animations and effort in that regard in a way you mentioned i think "the seven realms" takes the cake

 

[Hobodouken]

The only thing that felt off to me with the newer sex scenes were the blowjob animations. They looked weird and off when compared to all the previous sex scenes. But then again, it could just be me though.

 

[Ray_D]

I Have a question to the author what is the purpose of this game?

All the Mechanics all the good animations and all designs and efforts went into the storyline

Yet for the Hentai part its just dull badly paced images no mechanics whatsoever no Effort nor the animations is so bad


And another thing is that THE STORYLINE IS WAY TOO MUCH

I've tolerated it so many times reading it all enjoying the story and all details but it's getting WAY TOO FAR I DIDNT SKIP ANY DETAILS ANY DIALOGUES

Because I was expecting that at the end of all this Story arc I will finally be able to see smth exciting is what I keep telling myself and

After finally reaching the spicy scenes what did I get? A half assed work barely any effort no mechanics nor anything it's so bad very bad



So my question to the creator is

WHAT IS THIS GAME?

U PUT TOO MUCH MECHANICS, DESIGN DETAILS, DIALOGUES IN THE STORYLINE WHICH IS GOOD

BUT FOR THE HENTAI PART?
BARELY ANY EFFORT OR SHOULD I SAY NO EFFORT AT ALL?

And in order to get the spicy scenes u gotta go through an entire ARC for HOURS just to get what?

A 30seconds sex scene with no effort just dumped on and even the animations sucks

There's no mechanics either


And compared to the story?

Oh would u look at that the animations is top quality the dialogue are smooth and so many details in each room each clothes each NPC


So what is it AUTHOR?

IS THIS EVEN A HENTAI GAME?

OR JUST A STORY GAME?

BECAUSE THE HENTAI PART IN THIS GAME DOESN'T EXIST
AS IF THEYRE NOTHING BUT MERE FILLERS

Oh damn the artificial intelligence got out of control. He's writing inconsistencies in the forum haha.

 

[Zack keneth]

Oh damn the artificial intelligence got out of control. He's writing inconsistencies in the forum haha.
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What does opinion not exist? What did I say in all of my comments? Huh?

 

[cayseron]

What does opinion not exist? What did I say in all of my comments? Huh?

your speech mannerisms are abbrasive and you come off as rude and needlesly aggresive so others tend to respond in ridicule and satire in return. Nothing you said is wrong, you share your opinion and you even seem to understand its hot take and you dont expect many people to side with you, you simply have things to say and you say it.
as i said nothing you said is wrong, its just the way you say it rubs off of people the wrong way cause it comes off as an attack on something they all love. I am not condoning that kind of behavior, just explaining whats happening

 

[Zack keneth]

your speech mannerisms are abbrasive and you come off as rude and needlesly aggresive so others tend to respond in ridicule and satire in return. Nothing you said is wrong, you share your opinion and you even seem to understand its hot take and you dont expect many people to side with you, you simply have things to say and you say it.
as i said nothing you said is wrong, its just the way you say it rubs off of people the wrong way cause it comes off as an attack on something they all love. I am not condoning that kind of behavior, just explaining whats happening

I love the game I absolutely love the story even I might say this has one of the best indepth story game I've ever tried

except for the spicy scenes it's totally lacking

 

[Zack keneth]

I mean to say the spicy scenes mechanics not the spicy scenes as a whole

The way it folds and goes are perfect it's the mechanic that is lacking as well as animations

 

[Zack keneth]

Including angles

 

[Hector Wimbleton]

I mean to say the spicy scenes mechanics not the spicy scenes as a whole

The way it folds and goes are perfect it's the mechanic that is lacking as well as animations

So, you mean to say you want more interactivity, improvement on animations, and better camera angles and more positions?

 

[Zack keneth]

So, you mean to say you want more interactivity, improvement on animations, and better camera angles and more positions?

Interactivity? I'm not saying I wanna touch her boobs or smth bro

The animations is totally lacking it literally use spliced images to go in and out (I already mentioned this in my other comments)

The looping is way too short I know it's common for VNs type of game but it's just a 5secs of looping animations and thats it (mentioned it as well on my other comments)

Need angles (which is easy to put since it's 3D not complex compared to what the creator is making) - mentioned it aswell

 

[Zack keneth]

But i wouldn't complain if u can actually interact with the characters..... Just sayin

 

[Hector Wimbleton]

Interactivity? I'm not saying I wanna touch her boobs or smth bro

The animations is totally lacking it literally use spliced images to go in and out (I already mentioned this in my other comments)

The looping is way too short I know it's common for VNs type of game but it's just a 5secs of looping animations and thats it (mentioned it as well on my other comments)

Need angles (which is easy to put since it's 3D not complex compared to what the creator is making) - mentioned it aswell

I see, I mentioned interactivity 'cause I'm confused when you said mechanics, but you're definitely better off heading to the suggestions tab in the discord channel since Mr. Carb's much more active there, heck I think he's very open to direct messages in patreon/discord.

 

[cayseron]

I see, I mentioned interactivity 'cause I'm confused when you said mechanics, but you're definitely better off heading to the suggestions tab in the discord channel since Mr. Carb's much more active there, heck I think he's very open to direct messages in patreon/discord.

why do i feel this chat just died because everyone saw your post and ran to caribdis dms XD

 

[Phase_01]

I Have a question to the author what is the purpose of this game?

All the Mechanics all the good animations and all designs and efforts went into the storyline

You answered yourself

This is a story visual novel (what you think the N in VN means?)
The end goal isn't to see a spicy scene, those are intertwined throughout the story.

If you want just a sex simulator, there's a bunch of other games to satisfy that craving on this site.
There are games where the entire story's point is to fuck girls and form a harem, I'd go check those out, if you want recommendations I can give you some.

If you have actual criticism of how the sex scenes were constructed, I'd go to Caribdis' discord and leave suggestions.

 

[Phase_01]

My Only wish is that The Author Shouldn't Make The Spicy Scenes to receive such mediocre treatment

The Creator just goes over the top in creating the storyline which is good since that is literally part of the game like VNs and such

Yet all that effort in creating such good storyline to create mediocre or even bad spicy scenes is just a dam disgrace to the game of how good it is


They should be balanced a good story details and a good spicy scenes details

You said you've played similar games that's why you checked this out, may I know which ones? I'm interested as well.


As for what you said about the scenes not being spicy enough/mediocre, I respectfully disagree. I haven't played the latest update but Alex's last scene was pretty hot for me personally, and from the teases I've seen of latest update those are as well. Nancy's scenes in this game are some of my favorite of all the adult VNs I've played.

So it is probably a matter of taste, which is why I want to know what other games you have played, if they're even more spicy than Eternum somehow then I am definitely interested.

 

[Phase_01]

Interactivity? I'm not saying I wanna touch her boobs or smth bro

The animations is totally lacking it literally use spliced images to go in and out (I already mentioned this in my other comments)

The looping is way too short I know it's common for VNs type of game but it's just a 5secs of looping animations and thats it (mentioned it as well on my other comments)

Need angles (which is easy to put since it's 3D not complex compared to what the creator is making) - mentioned it aswell

Have you caught up to the ending of 0.7? Where are you in the game? Because it is not just spliced images, there are a lot of actual animated scenes.

 

[Ungawa]

I'm kinda puzzled how anyone can think Maat's scene wasn't spicy enough...

 

[Opa Wants]

Nah Novas scene in this update is hotter than Mr. Hernadez's extra spicy tacos

 

[ThorinKing]

I'm kinda puzzled how anyone can think Maat's scene wasn't spicy enough...

Probably into futas or something...