quorkboy
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At the beginning of the story Orion says he lived in Kredon until he was 8. The age for first year of middle school is 11 - 12. If Penny is 21 but close to 22, while Orion is very recently 18, they could easily have 18+ months between them. So that fits.
I'm not saying there aren't any continuity issues. There are other minor mistakes in the writing, so it's possible the timeline for his youth wasn't perfectly plotted, but it doesn't seem unreasonable to me.
That flashback is one of my favourite scenes. If anyone ever needed a reason to love Penny (or Nancy), this is it.
I'm not saying there aren't any continuity issues. There are other minor mistakes in the writing, so it's possible the timeline for his youth wasn't perfectly plotted, but it doesn't seem unreasonable to me.
That flashback is one of my favourite scenes. If anyone ever needed a reason to love Penny (or Nancy), this is it.