I enjoyed this update, here is a quick spoilery review:
The Elf part was too long - by far. Too many new characters I don’t care about, too many new subplots I don’t care about. I don’t like Calypso, but even if I did I‘d still say this section should have been cut by 50% or more. The main LIs aren’t getting enough character development - as commented on by numerous people in this thread - and we didn’t have a lewd with Annie, Nancy, or Nova, but we fucked a random maid? Cmon!
The Christmas getaway was great - but it should have been longer. Penny‘s scene was good, I think much better than Motor Madness. The hot tub game was great, could have been spicier, but the concept is fantastic and I think there should be more mini games like this. The Dalia - Alex threesome was S+ tier! Best money shot in the game, which helps to get over Dalia’s last scene which was a travesty, especially the money shot. Lots of great shots of the two girls, we actually got to see their faces (again, so much better compared to Dalia’s last scene). Only wish would have been for some animations of Dalia being penetrated.
I enjoyed the HQ mission well enough, it was good to have Chang come along. Again, this could have been a little longer, and actually advance the main plot, if only the Elves hadn’t taken up 2/3 of the entire update.
Luna’s date was good. Good length, and a great scene to finish off the update. I wish Dalia’s first sex scene was crafter as well as this one - great foreplay, great action, good cinematograph, great animations. I wasn‘t a Luna fan till the barn BJ scene, but now she’s firmly in my second tier of girls, tied with Alex, Annie, and Nancy, right behind Dalia as number one.
Cliffhanger is good - I don‘t need it to be a nail biter like Orion getting shot. I think it will actually move the plot forward.