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- Thread starter NevenVN
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- Apr 29, 2021
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Do you have a compressed android version too? So many games recently have stopped using Mega and it's really annoying.
- Dec 26, 2022
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It's on the itch.io page probably just forgot to add it hereSo no harem tag?
- May 6, 2020
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Fuck yeah great start, we watch your progress with great interest
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- Jan 17, 2018
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The game started out good enough but the way the protagonist turned into a drooling idiot during the meeting with the people that just had him assassinated(!) was extremely frustrating. Why would he believe anything they told him, never mind join them when they just attacked him!? Why would he apologize for "traumatizing" one of the girls that just murdered him, something obviously far more traumatizing!? Why did he not call out the mother on her blatant hypocrisy, claiming that she hated the inhuman experiment performed at the lab yet she was willing to order her own daughters to murder a person in cold blood just so she could exploit his power!?
Frankly the entire sequence from the conversation with the daughters to the end of 0.1 felt like it relied purely on the MC holding the idiot ball rather than any kind of in universe logic, the way just shrugged of the attack and immediately trusted his attackers for no reason felt unbelievable to a completely immersion breaking extent.
Frankly the entire sequence from the conversation with the daughters to the end of 0.1 felt like it relied purely on the MC holding the idiot ball rather than any kind of in universe logic, the way just shrugged of the attack and immediately trusted his attackers for no reason felt unbelievable to a completely immersion breaking extent.
- Jun 20, 2023
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Very promising start and ambitious one too. Creative as well, I wish the developer success and recognition, for it is very impressive start so far, good luck with future updates
- Jun 4, 2018
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Ahhhh fuck.
Just started playing the game as it seemed interesting. Ironically enough some of my BIGGEST pet peeves in any form of media is the whole deus ex machina plot shit where the MC is caught in a trainwreck without any player agency, I despise idiotic MC's and I very much despise obviously two-faced characters who face no consequence or lashback from the MC.
From this post, I think I'll likely be pretty pissed off when I'm finished playing. I'll update with my reaction later.
EDIT: Honestly just from the get go where he decides to break up then.. un-break up? Fucking why? Just stick to your decision (because let's face it, going back and fucking your ex and giving her a "maybe" isn't cutting ties). Goddamnit I do not see good things in the future for my blood pressure.
EDIT2: Yeah nah I can't even finish this, absolutely triggered surprisingly ALL of the things I hate more than anything. Dude got fucking killed because of some scheming cunts' selfish whims?
Unless there's a choice down the line where you kill everyone involved, I'm just done here. And no I'm not saying that the dev should listen to me, the dev can do whatever he wants and he clearly is good at what he does, the writing and framing of shit being objectively pretty good, I just despise the subject matter with an absolute ridiculous amount of hatred.
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- Jun 5, 2021
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Sorry you had a bad time.
Thank you for trying it out though.
- Jun 4, 2018
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No worries, it happens, I don't have much I dislike but the few things I do dislike I tend to feel very strongly about, so it is what it is.
As said you're quite good at framing and the general writing is solid, so for a first release I'm pleasantly surprised at the quality. The only thing I could think of that might be tweaked (of course not counting my subjective pet peeves) is that the pacing is a bit fast. Granted, might just be what you intended with the narrative, but I feel like there could have been some breathing room between MC spotting the tripping girl and the actual event, maybe with a bit more suspense (i.e asking more people about the tripping girl and finding out that none of them saw anything or looks at the MC like he's weird) and some of the exposition and character reveals.
Best of luck to ya, if you end up finishing this and making a new game, I'll likely check that out aswell.
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That was good until we meet the mom of the twins. Guy get killed and almost took a baseball bat to the head but it's no bigggie. Let's work and die for the people that just killed me. Couldn't care less about the story after that. Will still download but skip story and play animation.
- Aug 8, 2024
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This a great game I'm rooting for the childhood friend . Anyway, you can give me any tips on how to unlock the final achievement i really want to complete it.
- Jun 20, 2023
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Again and again tragedy continues. Childhood friends never win, friend.