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maroder

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i expected dumb sex story with latex fetish and happy to say that i was wrong. i really liked atmosphere of story and character's there are interesting mystery's and world building is good. fights are realistic. military's aren't just bead guys but just people doing there best.

only problem which i have for now is if i choose childhood friend backstory mc still in many places talks about her as his sister so that's should be fixed or choice should be taken out.
 
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Drakenite

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That just makes a cheap parody out of a game that seems to have a serious tone to it.
I'm glad you are not listening to this. So sick and tired of these games having women with inflated balloons that are so much bigger than their heads it boggles my mind how it's considered norm here. Finding a game dev that respects accurate proportions is like a breath of fresh air that doesn't come often.

Keep it up. Hoping this project goes well!
 

Skylark3

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Nov 29, 2021
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The story/lore is interesting, I'll put this on watch and come back few months from now for more content. I seriously hope this game would not get abandoned.
 

tatters

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It's a really great VN so far can't wait until the next update so keep up the good work. But their was only one little mistake that was some of the writing was messed up but other then that its was great.
 

The ArcKnight

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The body horror is real. Reading about girls being turned into semiconscious incubators rolls my stomach something fiece. Especially knowing there is no escape for them.

Hopefully MC will get some action soon with a non pure nox. I really hope we see the prospector again if we save her.
 

PipPoad

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Hmm...I wonder if MC's blood will become an important factor that could aid with Jax's injuries, or with the hybrids nox affliction on the neutral path?
Interesting theory :unsure:
Who knows, story will show.
 

PipPoad

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The body horror is real. Reading about girls being turned into semiconscious incubators rolls my stomach something fiece. Especially knowing there is no escape for them.
Nice, that was the main goal! :sneaky:
Hopefully MC will get some action soon with a non pure nox. I really hope we see the prospector again if we save her.
There will be more interactions with humans in the next update. As for the prospector girl - she will take her time before
appears again (in human and infected form)
 
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PipPoad

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It's a really great VN so far can't wait until the next update so keep up the good work.
Many thanks! :love:
But their was only one little mistake that was some of the writing was messed up but other then that its was great.
Feel free to post it here or on my discord server, pms on F95 will be fine too.
 

PipPoad

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I'm glad you are not listening to this. So sick and tired of these games having women with inflated balloons that are so much bigger than their heads it boggles my mind how it's considered norm here. Finding a game dev that respects accurate proportions is like a breath of fresh air that doesn't come often.
I'm a fan of big booba, but the girl running around and parkouring with 2 watermelons looks pretty absurd.
If there will be such breasts - perphaps on monsters or infected to emphasize their unnatural proportions and cause subconscious rejection for the player. (But there might be those who find it attractive, haha.)
Keep it up. Hoping this project goes well!
Will do my best! (y)
 

PipPoad

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i expected dumb sex story with latex fetish and happy to say that i was wrong. i really liked atmosphere of story and character's there are interesting mystery's and world building is good. fights are realistic. military's aren't just bead guys but just people doing there best.
Thank you, I'm glad I managed to make the story and characters interesting. :)
only problem which i have for now is if i choose childhood friend backstory mc still in many places talks about her as his sister so that's should be fixed or choice should be taken out.
That's serious flaw. Can you show exactly where it happens?
 

RandomGuy99

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Nov 11, 2018
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This game is basically Porn Star Craft 2. Nox = Zergs, Queen = Hive Mind, Hybrids = Kerrigen.
Hope we get a cut option so we know in future what we missed out.
 

kwazi

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cant play it no android Port but game looks interesting best of luck to u dev
 

JJJ84

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Just caught up to the game after finding out about it today.

I loved it a lot.
Very expansive in the whole world building, with very compelling characters.
Another, Ivi, Jex, Kaley, & Elina; all the girls so far seem very distinct and unique in their personalities that kept me engaged, not to mention good characterization for all of them.

And I'm really digging the whole sci-fi horror/suspense tone it's setting with the exploration into what is unknown.
So Kudos PipPoad for a job well done in crafting a really enjoyable game.

Definitely will be looking forward to the future releases.
 
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Gorse

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PipPoad, that was a really good update!
Thanks for your work and efforts to build up on an interesting plot, terrific (but also horrific) atmosphere from renders of an intriguing apocalyptic world, compelling characters and some nice spice of mystery. Very solid so far!

Only a few observations from my side after my playthrough:

There are a few spelling mistakes here and there (my "favorite" so far was 'coppupted by Nox'), one sentence is doubled and even some words are missing sometimes, so you might need to proofread your text and dialogues again. It's not a huge issue, cause your writing feels fine, but you may want to check these again.

As mentioned by maroder before, there is indeed the flaw of calling Elina the "sister" instead of "childhood friend" (after the choice in v0.01) at two times in the MCs' thoughts - but unfortunately I can't pinpoint you to the exact textline (even I tried to find these after my playthrough again). But maybe other players can support you to find these more easily?!

Most of the renders in the Nox 'dream world' are a little too dark and could need a bit more brightness, contrast and 'spatial effect' for a deeper dimension (in particular when showing the tentactles or sketelons). For my eyes a bit too hard to see, spot the details. Otherwise your renders are stunning!
You may only consider to unify all of them into one image format (instead of using a mix of .jpg and .png), probably converting them even into HQ .webp format for reducing the file size significantly?!

Apropos renders: as stunning as they are, the original textbox.png unfortunately hides quite a lot of them.
So to just avoid having to press 'H' or the middle mouse button very often...
I attached a much more transparent textbox.png as a replacement of the original one for all players:
textbox replacer for Etlina's Priciple
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Looking forward to the continuation of your thrilling story, PipPoad. All the best!
 
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