zybis

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No worries, it was an interesting read! The suit-as-a-character concept sounds the most logical, and it's probably quite "interesting" to have another person essentially worn on your body. If you make that character not annoying, it could even turn into a decent companion.
You described how it would look from Another's side, but I assume Siena's path to obtaining such a hybrid suit would be roughly the same?
I would think both paths like this, as described Another path would be like some more elegantic way of suit, while Siena path would be more like raw power like, like for Siena path Venom like suit is more suitable. It would cover almost all body leaving maybe face only, suit would be bulky, maybe so claws :)
 

JJJ84

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I was thinking the same thing. Making the hero a super-cool Venom or Carnage would break the entire balance of the story and turn the MC into a cringe-worthy imbalanced character like the protagonist from Solo Leveling. If he had superhuman abilities and a squad of similarly powerful girls, you'd have to create enemies of corresponding power levels to keep the battles interesting. And while you could come up with a lot for Nox — like hybrids or powerful infected monsters, the soldiers could only get, I don't know, some new weapons and equipment?

Anyway, I wouldn't want to turn the story into an anime with an overpowered main character who runs around the map and fucks everything in sight. Probably, most people would like that, but such a concept doesn't appeal to me.
I'm not a fan of MC suddenly getting stuff like bio-suits or some kind (no offense to people who suggest such ideas, but they remind me too much of like Venom or Power Rangers lol).


I think my (and a friend's) idea of it would be something like the following:

Instead of MC getting a bio-suit, have him obtain a Nox-infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
This weapon is quite unique in that it can transform into smaller weapon of size; whether it's pistol, sword, dagger, axe etc.
So depending on what the user chooses, it can transform into any of the above (or other smaller weapons).

But it can't transform into something like a suit or armor due to the sheer size.

Why am I not keen on the whole suit or armor idea?
Well, it's simple.

It's gonna make MC too powerful all of a sudden (Gary Stu lol), there will no doubt be several moments like the following line:

"That Hybrid would have killed me had I not got my Nox armor on."

I've seen way too many stories where it went that route and I'm not keen on seeing that again.


Instead, I'm hoping for a weapon instead, cause I'm reminded of an example, King Arthur and the famed sword Excalibur, in the Arthurian Legends.

In the legends, Excalibur is the most powerful sword in Britain but it's not like it made Arthur unbeatable.
King Arthur was still a mortal despite the sword & dies in the end (in his final fight against Mordred) despite having it with him.

So idea is, that our MC gets this new unique Nox infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
However, despite the weapon making our MC stronger than a normal human being, compared to Hybrids' own weapons and powers, this Fer-Tec Nox-enhanced transforming weapon is only like 35~40% as powerful as actual power/capabilities of Hybrids' own weapons.

When he meets physically Another (or Sienna, I guess dependent on choice) later, she unlocks the weapon's potential (and possibly MC's potential regarding it) towards 100% so that MC can stand toe-to-toe with hybrids (not outright slaughter them, but give them a good run for their money in terms of fighting).

But until then, with the 35~40% capability, MC is still much weaker than Nox or Hybrids (and still in danger of being very much killed, maintaining the tension).
Yet at least he won't be hopelessly outmatched as like it would literally almost be a suicide without it.

As for why the weapon can't transform into something bigger (humungous weapon or bio-suit/armor) as well as why it only has default 35~40% capability, you could use lore reasoning to explain it (whether its Fer-Tec's own technological limitations or other narrative plot device).

But yeah.
That's me and my friend's two cents about it for you to consider (sorry for the long rant :HideThePain:) ; building up a capable MC, without getting him become too OP.
 
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ChubbyFatBoy

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I'm not a fan of MC suddenly getting stuff like bio-suits or some kind (no offense to people who suggest such ideas, but they remind me too much of like Venom or Power Rangers lol).


I think my (and a friend's) idea of it would be something like the following:

Instead of MC getting a bio-suit, have him obtain a Nox-infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
This weapon is quite unique in that it can transform into smaller weapon of size; whether it's pistol, sword, dagger, axe etc.
So depending on what the user chooses, it can transform into any of the above (or other smaller weapons).

But it can't transform into something like a suit or armor due to the sheer size.

Why am I not keen on the whole suit or armor idea?
Well, it's simple.

It's gonna make MC too powerful all of a sudden (Gary Stu lol), there will no doubt be several moments like the following line:

"That Hybrid would have killed me had I not got my Nox armor on."

I've seen way too many stories where it went that route and I'm not keen on seeing that again.


Instead, I'm hoping for a weapon instead, cause I'm reminded of an example, King Arthur and the famed sword Excalibur, in the Arthurian Legends.

In the legends, Excalibur is the most powerful sword in Britain but it's not like it made Arthur unbeatable.
King Arthur was still a mortal despite the sword & dies in the end (in his final fight against Mordred) despite having it with him.

So idea is, that our MC gets this new unique Nox infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
However, despite the weapon making our MC stronger than a normal human being, compared to Hybrids' own weapons and powers, this Fer-Tec Nox-enhanced transforming weapon is only like 35~40% as powerful as actual power/capabilities of Hybrids' own weapons.

When he meets physically Another (or Sienna, I guess dependent on choice) later, she unlocks the weapon's potential (and possibly MC's potential regarding it) towards 100% so that MC can stand toe-to-toe with hybrids (not outright slaughter them, but give them a good run for their money in terms of fighting).

But until then, with the 35~40% capability, MC is still much weaker than Nox or Hybrids (and still in danger of being very much killed, maintaining the tension).
Yet at least he won't be hopelessly outmatched as like it would literally almost be a suicide without it.

As for why the weapon can't transform into something bigger (humungous weapon or bio-suit/armor) as well as why it only has default 35~40% capability, you could use lore reasoning to explain it (whether its Fer-Tec's own technological limitations or other narrative plot device).

But yeah.
That's me and my friend's two cents about it for you to consider (sorry for the long rant :HideThePain:) ; building up a capable MC, without getting him become too OP.
But who said anything about suddenly? R&D comes in stages. Similar to how when a lot of heroes get a power up. They don't all just get strong enough to instantly stomp the big bad. As with your idea with the weapons, which I also touched upon because murica! A suit can be tweaked as needed. It doesn't just inherently make him into a God unless it was written that way.

But so it's said, the suit idea wasn't brought up just to bring it up. It was an alternative idea to the MC going hybrid. Because considering the hybrids shown so far. As much as I am a fan of some good ol fashion hot lead. He is going to eventually need a boost. Especially in the speed and power department.... and durability since at some point, someone is going to try and hit him with something big and heavy. We got an example of a difference in power dealing with Sparkle. And although it worked out, fight was handled quite well imo. It's still a thing to contend with. And she didn't even come off as a heavy hitter. God knows what that juggernaut looking chick is going to do when she gets her time in the spotlight. Probably going to be the one trying to hit us with said big and heavy thing... wait a minute. Dev don't fail me on this! Make her a hawt muscle/fit thicc chick.

....please!
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I beg of you.
 

Pinnedyr

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I'm not a fan of MC suddenly getting stuff like bio-suits or some kind (no offense to people who suggest such ideas, but they remind me too much of like Venom or Power Rangers lol).


I think my (and a friend's) idea of it would be something like the following:

Instead of MC getting a bio-suit, have him obtain a Nox-infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
This weapon is quite unique in that it can transform into smaller weapon of size; whether it's pistol, sword, dagger, axe etc.
So depending on what the user chooses, it can transform into any of the above (or other smaller weapons).

But it can't transform into something like a suit or armor due to the sheer size.

Why am I not keen on the whole suit or armor idea?
Well, it's simple.

It's gonna make MC too powerful all of a sudden (Gary Stu lol), there will no doubt be several moments like the following line:

"That Hybrid would have killed me had I not got my Nox armor on."

I've seen way too many stories where it went that route and I'm not keen on seeing that again.


Instead, I'm hoping for a weapon instead, cause I'm reminded of an example, King Arthur and the famed sword Excalibur, in the Arthurian Legends.

In the legends, Excalibur is the most powerful sword in Britain but it's not like it made Arthur unbeatable.
King Arthur was still a mortal despite the sword & dies in the end (in his final fight against Mordred) despite having it with him.

So idea is, that our MC gets this new unique Nox infused weapon from Fer-Tec.
However, despite the weapon making our MC stronger than a normal human being, compared to Hybrids' own weapons and powers, this Fer-Tec Nox-enhanced transforming weapon is only like 35~40% as powerful as actual power/capabilities of Hybrids' own weapons.

When he meets physically Another (or Sienna, I guess dependent on choice) later, she unlocks the weapon's potential (and possibly MC's potential regarding it) towards 100% so that MC can stand toe-to-toe with hybrids (not outright slaughter them, but give them a good run for their money in terms of fighting).

But until then, with the 35~40% capability, MC is still much weaker than Nox or Hybrids (and still in danger of being very much killed, maintaining the tension).
Yet at least he won't be hopelessly outmatched as like it would literally almost be a suicide without it.

As for why the weapon can't transform into something bigger (humungous weapon or bio-suit/armor) as well as why it only has default 35~40% capability, you could use lore reasoning to explain it (whether its Fer-Tec's own technological limitations or other narrative plot device).

But yeah.
That's me and my friend's two cents about it for you to consider (sorry for the long rant :HideThePain:) ; building up a capable MC, without getting him become too OP.
Fk the Guns and Swords BORING. think bigger what Most of the people would want i would take a Pretty big guess Most would want Nox powers or a Suit and let me make it perfectly Clear what i am seeing when i think of a Suit i think of a Nox in a form where it bonds with the Host or some kind of suit the nox itself is bonding to so it isent directly on the skin and and it would be totaly amazing if it could make you look like the Hybrids and it should be Durable able to take blows damage and the nox-suit should have attack possibilites like tentacles and conjuring weapons made of nox from the suit itself. and it do not have to be that the MC is unbeatable Just so that he can defend himself his friend and actualy win som fighets on his own and that he dont need his friends to hold his hand on every combat scenario,
 
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Anteron

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Fk the Guns and Swords BORING. think bigger what Most of the people would want i would take a Pretty big guess Most would want Nox powers or a Suit and let me make it perfectly Clear what i am seeing when i think of a Suit i think of a Nox in a form where it bonds with the Host or some kind of suit the nox itself is bonding to so it isent directly on the skin and and it would be totaly amazing if it could make you look like the Hybrids and it should be Durable able to take blows damage and the nox-suit should have attack possibilites like tentacles and conjuring weapons made of nox from the suit itself. and it do not have to be that the MC is unbeatable Just so that he can defend himself his friend and actualy win som fighets on his own and that he dont need his friends to hold his hand on every combat scenario,
Except in this version of Capitalist America - suit runs you.
 

GokutheG

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Yeah I. Not a fan of the suit idea either. The only way I can see it being interesting is if it came with an obvious downside that will have massive consequences. I think the mc is already immune/resistant to the ooze already so if you add that he can also use powers with no downsides whatsoever he'd turn into a extremely boring "op" character and damage the game overall.
 
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