[VN] [Ren'Py] [Abandoned] Exiles Lust Chapter 1 [v0.0.11] [FlipJoker]

UncleVT

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Overview:
Losing a wife and moving in with your rude cousins ain't something anyone would want happening in there life. Exiles Lust is a story/game about a young man loosing his wife currently in a state of no job. Moving in with his cousin he saw 9 years since they were in high school. You take control of his life until he finds his own apartment.​

Thread Updated: 2020-06-07
Release Date: 2020-06-05
Developer: FlipJoker -
Censored: No
Version: 0.0.11
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
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MrFriendly

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Okay, not a terrible premise. It's losing not loosing fyi
 

TL8ez

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All right what the fuck, it's so Engrish that in the first sentence, Jessica is written as it should be, then right in the following one it's written as Jussica. :ROFLMAO: Aside that, MC looks like a fucking UFO, the renders are very low quality, the front of her house looks more like an office space, and the story is inconsistent as hell, I mean the guys fiance died a few days ago, and he's already having romantic feelings towards his cousin. :ROFLMAO: Oh, and it's just my first 2 minutes of "playing".

Edit: 10 lines later it's already a month that has passed since the incident not a week, hilarious :ROFLMAO:

Edit 2: Working as a cameraman, for a camgirl, because "Am professional photoshooter". Then she has to see his "dik" of course. :ROFLMAO: Shit, at least it gave me a good laugh.
 
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PhoenixRage23

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Just from the preview pics of the game it looks pretty bad. Hopefully the renders and
dialogue improve greatly over the next 4 or 5 updates. This will be a "maybe I will play
later" game.
 

fkrfxr

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Off to a good start. English is not your native language so you might want to get a proofreader. I could still understand the meaning just fine but others will bitch wine and complain as they have nothing else to do. The story is something new and I like that. all in all it was worth the download. I hope you continue this project and await an update. yes wine is spelled wrong but everyone got the meaning just fine.
 
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I saw the first image unzoomed and i thought : '' wow nice short hair thick girl''. Then i looked at the other render's...
 

HorizonD

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Uhm... I think the story needs some improvement to be a story.
It feels quite jumpy. Also, it would be better to get the time straight (when did he lose his fiance? A week, month, days?).
And what about the relationship? Jumps from cousin to sister to cousin.

And I suppose, with that short amount of time you lost your beloved, I guess you would have other things on your mind.
But for a fictionary story the progress should be faster but this fast? Hm...

You might want to work on some things to not deliver a flop. Enough pointers are there already.
But for a first try actually not that bad. Keep trying. :)
 
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Fragmandk

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Man why not just use daz if he does not know how to use Blender it will take time to learn