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FatYoda

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is the game supposed to end mid scene with the redhead? i'm thinking not and it's a bug somehow.
 

NeoEros

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There're too many grammatical mistakes. I can tolerate most of them but I can't stand when the pronouns are misused. It makes the dialogues really confusing to read.
 
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Bobber Tail

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Leaving things like "Nervous" and other explainers in the sentences is bad form. The story has a lot of attitudes without understanding where they come from, thus making us out of depths with the story. It's like walking into the middle of a movie.
 

Osider

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Love those kind rework when it's make the game better, we can add this one in "successfully reborn"
 

Oberlix

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What else should I write, that's not progress, you could have saved yourself the upload, well, like with many games, you have to wait at least half a year, if not longer, to see real progress
 

BigJoe644

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What else should I write
Idk Maybe the Girls coming back from Melissia house early to surprise the dad but their the ones surprised instead.TM

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I guess Sage from "Being A Dik" isn't a indicter of my patients (for content)"huh"? The redhead at bottom of my last message.
 
3.10 star(s) 20 Votes