RPGM Abandoned Faefire Fantasy [v0.1.2] [Dakodanova]

[bobdillan]

Can't agree more! I think this game was pretty much a voyeur themed game where we the players control the MC- who basically a loser with small dick that no girls like or want to hang around with, and to feel a little bit of something he's decided to spying on the girls and fapping to the sex scenes between them with other. Because there is no way the MC could have won over their heart after their vaginal getting used with big dicks (like 5-8 times bigger than him) from bird or that futa hyena, so in the end he was nothing but third wheel, don't know how the developer would change or adding romantic content after that anyway...Maybe he should stated that this game won't have any romantic relationship and just roll with whatever he like or seem fit at this point, cause he would overwork himself with so many things the people want and that would not be good for his health

Cause the MC isn't supposed to be that.... MC is supposed to be up and coming hero that will get the girls while watching some fuck..... Dev just fumbled and merged the two instead of keeping them separate. i.e. sister should never have had forced burb content, and been something the MC indulged in optionally. (and the same with any LI for MC).

Think the MC from roundscape, where he has big dick but is also a bit of a degenerate at heart so he likes to dp some of his girls with his horse (or simply watch). Dev seems to have been trying to have a similar style of MC... thus is more likely they glossed over the fact that an MC like that is the one who initiates that shit, and is in control.

 

[Greily]

I'm happy with the monster girl stuff so far, having presented a classic Imouto then showing her sucking off the bird...obvious landmine that could have been avoided. I totally dig The Aunt more though, could definitely find solace in her arms

I do wonder though, why have imouto go for burbdong when you already have a burbdong specialist if not to cause a stir eh?

 

[thevoid089]

Cause the MC isn't supposed to be that.... MC is supposed to be up and coming hero that will get the girls while watching some fuck..... Dev just fumbled and merged the two instead of keeping them separate. i.e. sister should never have had forced burb content, and been something the MC indulged in optionally. (and the same with any LI for MC).

Think the MC from roundscape, where he has big dick but is also a bit of a degenerate at heart so he likes to dp some of his girls with his horse (or simply watch). Dev seems to have been trying to have a similar style of MC... thus is more likely they glossed over the fact that an MC like that is the one who initiates that shit, and is in control.

I'm happy with the monster girl stuff so far, having presented a classic Imouto then showing her sucking off the bird...obvious landmine that could have been avoided. I totally dig The Aunt more though, could definitely find solace in her arms

I do wonder though, why have imouto go for burbdong when you already have a burbdong specialist if not to cause a stir eh?

I think the developer could still go around with having the sister as love interest by giving us the scenario is that she was curious and feel horny because she hit puberty(?) or some shit like that, but she was too shy to come asking any men for that so she choose the least obvious option AKA with the bird. He could still letting MC to wooing her by after witness the scene with the bird, the next time MC could choose to come out of his hiding place and confront her about that matter
Let him slowly pursuing the sister and corrupting her into accepting his dick, 1 of the problem solved. Not too early and not too late

 

[bobdillan]

Honestly in my opinion if I was the dev, I would stop working on it, and iron out what I actually want it to be and the type of player experience I want people to have, and go from there. (they may already be doing this).

And then instead of updates and fixes just work on the 0.2 update that adds enough content to make it clear what kind of game it is supposed to be (part of the confusion is likely how they have done it and the little amount of content to convey the type of game it is), part of that would be only doing 2-3 characters for that update. but with about 3 scenes each. (2-3 images per scene).

For example to fix the sister story what I would do is for now completely remove her blowing the burb, and instead have her story with MC develop, and later on when MC watches the other lady with burbs have MCs inner thoughs go "hmmm sis seems to spend time with theses burbs would I want her to do that?" and then have the player decide if they want to unlock that route, or the option to start it when interacting with sister during the day when she is feeding the burbs (this one if you want to give player even more choice and not have the burb content at all even with farm chick). Then have that content with player encouraging it. (thus no need for multiple modes).

Spoiler: Even more elaboration on how I would fix sisters story

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[bobdillan]

I think the developer could still go around with having the sister as love interest by giving us the scenario is that she was curious and feel horny because she hit puberty(?) or some shit like that, but she was too shy to come asking any men for that so she choose the least obvious option AKA with the bird. He could still letting MC to wooing her by after witness the scene with the bird, the next time MC could choose to come out of his hiding place and confront her about that matter
Let him slowly pursuing the sister and corrupting her into accepting his dick, 1 of the problem solved. Not too early and not too late

.... That would work if she came to MCs dick... she went to burb, so that justification doesn't exactly work. especially since the player is already cucked by that. the whole issue is that it is the first scene, and is not optional.

Going to a burb over brother at night is way more steps ahead, and the shy logic doesn't work there. because shy would be doing shit at night while MC is sleeping, not doing it with a live and possibly forceful animal. Not to mention she wasn't just toying with it, it was a full on bj, so again many steps ahead and implies it isn't the first time.

The flow before that is you talk to sis everyday she is kind and always prepares you food, and you the player have interest. your interest in her is rewarded.... with you getting cucked by burb bj....

 

[Greily]

Taking a step back, hammering out a road map and even going for a 2.O (concept wise) isn't unreasonable. I can also see the sister being super horny and opting for burbdong cause they won't tell too. That's worth considering.

EDIT: Being too shy to go to her brother seems to be a hinted at. She was MUCH more in awe of his wang then the burbdong. I mean, I feel like she was using burb, and she was damn near creaming herself just watching brodong in action. Subtle stuff is subtle.

 

[bobdillan]

Taking a step back, hammering out a road map and even going for a 2.O (concept wise) isn't unreasonable. I can also see the sister being super horny and opting for burbdong cause they won't tell too. That's worth considering.

.... again that logic wouldn't work, because why would the brother tell either? the logic you are using can easily and more logically apply to the MC. (especially if he is sleeping, hell you could have her spike his dinner or some shit).

if you want I wrote out a plausible fix that would satisfy all parties (imo) above, is in the spoiler. (I dabble in game design and did a diploma on it, am just yet to release my own shit :S )

 

[Greily]

.... again that logic wouldn't work, because why would the brother tell either? the logic you are using can easily and more logically apply to the MC. (especially if he is sleeping, hell you could have her spike his dinner or some shit).

if you want I wrote out a plausible fix that would satisfy all parties (imo) above, is in the spoiler. (I dabble in game design and did a diploma on it, am just yet to release my own shit :S )

As someone who's not big on drugs and mind control, I would have nvr even thought of her doing that. I mean the birds won't tell anyone her secret when I say "they won't tell too."
This is a pervy game, and "I can see" is a nice way of saying, there's more choices she could take. It's up to the writer to decide if she wants to drug and rape him or anything else that could be thought of. May just be that, she is too shy to approach ppl but the simple and notably silent companionship of an animal was something she could handle.

Immersion has its value, and we all measure that value differently. But at the end of the day I couldn't possibly be jealous of a bird unless said bird is intelligent...then it's a person. Or imouto is a psycho and she wants you to be jealous...then I would want to move to a new town and pretend I'm an only child.

EDIT: Let's not forget that note in MC's house too. It's still early in the story. There could be more family fun that doesn't involve breaking our poor vanilla hearts on the way.

 

[thevoid089]

As someone who's not big on drugs and mind control, I would have nvr even thought of her doing that. I mean the birds won't tell anyone her secret when I say "they won't tell too."
This is a pervy game, and "I can see" is a nice way of saying, there's more choices she could take. It's up to the writer to decide if she wants to drug and rape him or anything else that could be thought of. May just be that, she is too shy to approach ppl but the simple and notably silent companionship of an animal was something she could handle.

Immersion has its value, and we all measure that value differently. But at the end of the day I couldn't possibly be jealous of a bird unless said bird is intelligent...then it's a person. Or imouto is a psycho and she wants you to be jealous...then I would want to move to a new town and pretend I'm an only child.

Look like the new update finally change the sister role, she aren't after the bird's dick anymore but MC when the guy masturbating she sit beside him to watch and let him cum on her face. And I think Cass the captain was the second LI, the 3 and 4 was Liza and that big titty blonde in the future I think
Right now the only 4 girls look like won't be in harem so far was Piper, green haired knight girl (goddamn shotacon), the dark elf and that Hyena furry girl...After playing the new one I must say it was a little okay than the previous one

 

[Greily]

You could get the scene with imouto watching you wank in the first version of the game.
I think even just toning down her bird scene would have done alot. Make her surprised when he sprays her in the face...I'd laugh specially if she runs home in a panic. If it looks like she's curious and willing to experiment all it takes is a little work from the player to get her on his dick instead of the birds. For those that might wanna see her go all ham on burbdong they can just keep up the voyeur thing.

 

[bobdillan]

Look like the new update finally change the sister role, she aren't after the bird's dick anymore but MC when the guy masturbating she sit beside him to watch and let him cum on her face. And I think Cass the captain was the second LI, the 3 and 4 was Liza and that big titty blonde in the future I think
Right now the only 4 girls look like won't be in harem so far was Piper, green haired knight girl (goddamn shotacon), the dark elf and that Hyena furry girl...After playing the new one I must say it was a little okay than the previous one

that was in the first update, but was hardlocked behind burb scene.

As someone who's not big on drugs and mind control, I would have nvr even thought of her doing that. I mean the birds won't tell anyone her secret when I say "they won't tell too."
This is a pervy game, and "I can see" is a nice way of saying, there's more choices she could take. It's up to the writer to decide if she wants to drug and rape him or anything else that could be thought of. May just be that, she is too shy to approach ppl but the simple and notably silent companionship of an animal was something she could handle.

Immersion has its value, and we all measure that value differently. But at the end of the day I couldn't possibly be jealous of a bird unless said bird is intelligent...then it's a person. Or imouto is a psycho and she wants you to be jealous...then I would want to move to a new town and pretend I'm an only child.

EDIT: Let's not forget that note in MC's house too. It's still early in the story. There could be more family fun that doesn't involve breaking our poor vanilla hearts on the way.

eh I disagree, the stuff at night would still make more sense and could be used as the tool to get MC going after sister instead of the burb scene, i.e. surves the same purpose without cucking the player in any way. The drugging suggestion was more if you want to take it a step further.

Also not saying it needs to be vanilla, just don't pretend to be romantic when the sis needs to suck burb dick in order for anything to happen XD

The issue is the flow and the logic of it, this game isn't as far as I know from dev and the tags they gave this game supposed to be NTR in any way shape or form, which makes that scene and the current flow go against that premise as that is how you would do it in a game leading into NTR and shit, if doing it in a game with voyeurism and romance without NTR but possible sharing then you would do it the way I suggested earlier, with MC being the one to initiate the burb stuff.

Natural flow and logically progression is important, and for the way the sis story started out it was progressing and flowing into MC being a cuck and a toy for the sister to fuck around with but not really care about i.e. just another dick for her to play with. (whether the dev intended that or not that is the current flow and structure it is following).

 

[Greily]

Logic is important. I don't dig the type of game that comes with descriptors like "cuck" and "netori" and I appreciate when that stuff is tagged and the synopsis gives ample info in that regard. I guess, it might be because I'm jaded with the "pure" aspect when it comes to imouto content. I'm not saying she needs to be a slut. But it's refreshing when a girl just calls a dick a dick, and she knows what masturbation is and stuff. Extra pronounced innocence is as appealing to me as ntr. The fact that she was curious is great, the fact that she stuffed her face in her first scene...like you said there needs to be a flow. I can agree with that for sure.

 

[toastedporn]

I know MCs mom is dead, but is there a chance that you could undead her so we can get some mom son action?

 

[Ponyniac]

Are you dumb or playing a role? The game has no problems with the plot, character motivation, NTR or netori. The game has a problem with gameplay, there is no gameplay. (Running around a monotonous and half-empty map with random events is not gameplay).

 

[toastedporn]

Who are you talking to?

 

[EdgeOfShadow]

This game looks just amazing from the art and tags standpoint, just up my alley. Now i just need to wait a few months for more content.
bobdillan isn't it just you not liking the content tho? I mean, making this part of the game optional would be nice for some people of course, but that would also apply to 60% of scenes in basically all games on this site.

 

[boobman7]

DAMNIT. THEY CHANGED THE LOOK OF PIPER!! does anyone still have version 1 and an original image of piper. pleas i really want it and to compare it to the new one. i literally just recycled the folder for the initial version cause i saw an update was out. omg. she looks good but midas well be a new character the body of the old one was so great.

 

[Mistervd]

"Added "One True Dick Mode", to toggle off MOST non-player sex scenes. EDIT: Suitable replacements for some scenes will be added as the game develops."

I haven't played the game, and i don't intend to after seeing the comments, the graphics are top notch tho, but good luck trying to make 2 crowds happy while balancing enough content between the two, that never ends well with a solo artist.

Touché

 

[bobdillan]

This game looks just amazing from the art and tags standpoint, just up my alley. Now i just need to wait a few months for more content.
bobdillan isn't it just you not liking the content tho? I mean, making this part of the game optional would be nice for some people of course, but that would also apply to 60% of scenes in basically all games on this site.

uhhh no.... more than just me lmao, also like I said before, the content isn't the issue, it is how it was presented and being mislead. (had romance tag initially for example). apparently it was worse on itch.io someone said a few pages back.

As for the optional thing, that is more because the audience the dev is trying to go for (the non-ntr one) however the game starts out as if they are going for the polar opposite audience (the ntr one), with how the sisters story goes, i.e. a romance story doesn't start with finding your LI sucking a massive burb dick, once the player already is interested in them, that is how you start an NTR story (which well the dev isn't doing).

Hence my suggestion of moving the scene and making MCs idea for them to do that. (changes the dynamic and the context, thus better suiting the audience they are going for).

If it was a simple straight up this is going to be NTR game, i would have shut up already, but given that it isn't I throw in my 2 cents, and discuss possible issues/solutions.

They clearly want a certain audience as they have added in the "one true dick mode" but imo that is sloppy and merely a band-aid on the larger issue which imo should be the focus and remove the one true dick mode.
Cause the issue isn't that other characters fuck, the issue is that the LI sister giving Burb bj is forced on MC and we supposed to still believe the whole innocence act? where as if it was something like they tried to see MCs dick and then same act that would make more sense, and then MC pushing for the burb stuff. (more natural flow and suits the genre and audience they are going for).

Basically context is important. For example her calling your dick big on its own is a great compliment, but when it comes after them giving the massive burb dick a bj, it comes across as more of an insult/sarcastic joke/lie. Where as if it came before they touched burb dick would be great compliment still.

 

[Doc_main]

Boi's ya'll talking about burb on sis action but i haven't seem to have find it quite yet. I've played through this game about a handful of times now and i still don't know wtf to do. With this latest update I've been able to find the bro on sis action (both scenes) but not quite yet the burb on sis. Its the only thing i haven't yet unlocked throughout my play throughs. Anyone care to enlighten me on the steps i gotta take? -Thanks to anyone in advance-