VN Ren'Py Fake Father [Second v0.4 Full] [Netero3009]

[FookU2]

I'm guessing, by the end of this story, it's the obvious "long lost twin" and he's the Uncle.

Incest still prevails lol

So, it's set in either Alabama, Kentucky or West Virginia?

 

[Crazonian1]

These 'daughter' sex lessons are the best. What great content.

 

[HentaiKami]

Damn that extra pic you get for gallery on the oldest daughter in this update, she is one fine looking lass. Also hope we get to bang the mother of those girls.

 

[Sonico]

So, any difference in buying or not buying Alice those clothes?
Baside burning 10K in moolah, that is....

 

[HentaiKami]

So, any difference in buying or not buying Alice those clothes?
Baside burning 10K in moolah, that is....

Only a short scene after they leave the store and talk a little so far, but i bet it will be important for potential love route with her.

 

[Xaninha]

I have it so not that he go the menu only that I see the scene and can play further.

Maybe it is because you have choosed other options before as I did. Like other games with dead ends when you don`t choose the "walkthrough way" you have bugs "like this".

I wrote the correct way above because it was to strange that he switch to it and you don`t know why you spank her (the talking way and so on was missing and the reason is it is a bug that I get it so I was searching for the correct choice).

I am on the "love route" (and play further for the future) so it is correct that I unlocked it not before in the Gallery.

there any bugfix yet ? got the same bug

 

[Alanray64]

It is an interesting game though the translation leaves a lot to be desired for. Tidy that up and it should be a huge improvement.

 

[Sharingan33]

netero3009 change she in HE. The uncle is a male not a female.

Spoiler: She -> He

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[botc76]

I got to say, Dora and her behaviour are starting to become ridiculous even for porn standards.
She's way too naive, way too stupid, someone of her age, in this time, it's just not possible like this.

I am not saying don't go that route, but fucking do it better.
Fucking seriously? That excuse for seeing her pussy is so absolutely ridiculous, she must be brain-dead to accept it.

I like this game, I don't have a problem with that route and I understand that it's not easy to write a quasi-incest story like this and keep it both sexy and believable, but this just constantly jumping the shark.

 

[botc76]

And I agree with other comments, grammatically and punctuation-wise, this update was horrible and definitely needs to be edited a lot.
Constantly switching genders and using wrong tenses, and even things like having the first word in a sentence without a capital letter. That's not excusable due to English not being your first language, it's simply not caring enough and not doing the necessary quality control

 

[guardianfather]

netero3009 change she in HE. The uncle is a male not a female.

Spoiler: She -> He

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I think the dev is from spain.

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[Sharingan33]

I think the dev is from spain.

Yes, and i'm from Italy so English is not my first language just like him; i just wanted to show the developer the error so he can hopefully fix it in the next update.
Anyway he should hire a proofreader: these are minor mistakes that can be fixed quickly.

 

[Sharingan33]

netero3009 other things to fix:

Spoiler: Fix 1

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Spoiler: Fix 2

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Spoiler: Fix 3

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Spoiler: Fix 4

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Spoiler: Fix 5

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Spoiler: The blouse is a thing

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[Dole]

there any bugfix yet ? got the same bug

No, the producer thanked me for the bug report he thought that he fix it already.

When you want play the correct way look here

https://f95zone.to/threads/fake-father-v0-5a-netero3009.129741/post-10228727

 

[DanThaMan]

I honestly don't know why devs try to write VN's in English if they don't properly know the language, it makes no sense to do it.. and it really ruins the VN, it's all too common these days. What a shame.

 

[HentaiKami]

I honestly don't know why devs try to write VN's in English if they don't properly know the language, it makes no sense to do it.. and it really ruins the VN, it's all too common these days. What a shame.

Simple answer for that question, bigger market. Even if it was free game, you want most available players to play it, so you can get more visibility and perhaps at some point start making money out of games. And if there's people that really like the game and know the language better than you, they might offer help by proofreading/translating things.

 

[netero3009]

And I agree with other comments, grammatically and punctuation-wise, this update was horrible and definitely needs to be edited a lot.
Constantly switching genders and using wrong tenses, and even things like having the first word in a sentence without a capital letter. That's not excusable due to English not being your first language, it's simply not caring enough and not doing the necessary quality control

It's true, it's my fault. Sometimes I forget to check Google translations. I can't dedicate all my time to the game, so I apologize, sometimes I forget things.

 

[PainKnight]

fresh and good game, keep forward

 

[tripod70]

I'll give this one a try. It can't be any worse than my spelling.

 

[NewTricks]

I'll give this one a try. It can't be any worse than my spelling.

It is worse, but just like your game it remains pretty fun to play.