VN Ren'Py Fake Father [Second v0.2 P1] [Netero3009]

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Dole

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0.5b bug (reported on Discord)

1) It is possible when you do nothing and so on to get to the point when Chloe is sleeping on the Couch when you leave her now immedialey you are at the scene that you spank Lily. (so you can unlock the Gallery pic) -I think this is the bug !!! 1 Correct Way) When I see it correct I must spank Lily before and when I came to the point Chloe is sleeping on the Couch and leave her I get the option to visit Lily and talk to her and then I can spank her. (so you can unlock the Gallery pic) , Normal it make no sense when I leave Chloe it change to the bed scene that I can spank Lily without knowing why.
 
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Dole said:
0.5b bug (reported on Discord)

1) It is possible when you do nothing and so on to get to the point when Chloe is sleeping on the Couch when you leave her now immedialey you are at the scene that you spank Lily. (so you can unlock the Gallery pic) -I think this is the bug !!! 1 Correct Way) When I see it correct I must spank Lily before and when I came to the point Chloe is sleeping on the Couch and leave her I get the option to visit Lily and talk to her and then I can spank her. (so you can unlock the Gallery pic) , Normal it make no sense when I leave Chloe it change to the bed scene that I can spank Lily without knowing why.
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just had this happen, if you choose to leave its immediately to the spanking scene but if you choose to touch she will undress and pass out but it will still then go to lily spanking.
and whichever you choose to spank or leave it immetiately sent me to the main menu
 
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Dole

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DongoDildos said:
just had this happen, if you choose to leave its immediately to the spanking scene but if you choose to touch she will undress and pass out but it will still then go to lily spanking.
and whichever you choose to spank or leave it immetiately sent me to the main menu
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I have it so not that he go the menu only that I see the scene and can play further.

Maybe it is because you have choosed other options before as I did. Like other games with dead ends when you don`t choose the "walkthrough way" you have bugs "like this".

I wrote the correct way above because it was to strange that he switch to it and you don`t know why you spank her (the talking way and so on was missing and the reason is it is a bug that I get it so I was searching for the correct choice).

I am on the "love route" (and play further for the future) so it is correct that I unlocked it not before in the Gallery.
 
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HentaiKami

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Damn that extra pic you get for gallery on the oldest daughter in this update, she is one fine looking lass. Also hope we get to bang the mother of those girls. :D
 
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So, any difference in buying or not buying Alice those clothes?
Baside burning 10K in moolah, that is.... :HideThePain:
 
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Dole said:
I have it so not that he go the menu only that I see the scene and can play further.

Maybe it is because you have choosed other options before as I did. Like other games with dead ends when you don`t choose the "walkthrough way" you have bugs "like this".

I wrote the correct way above because it was to strange that he switch to it and you don`t know why you spank her (the talking way and so on was missing and the reason is it is a bug that I get it so I was searching for the correct choice).

I am on the "love route" (and play further for the future) so it is correct that I unlocked it not before in the Gallery.
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there any bugfix yet ? got the same bug
 
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I got to say, Dora and her behaviour are starting to become ridiculous even for porn standards.
She's way too naive, way too stupid, someone of her age, in this time, it's just not possible like this.

I am not saying don't go that route, but fucking do it better.
Fucking seriously? That excuse for seeing her pussy is so absolutely ridiculous, she must be brain-dead to accept it.

I like this game, I don't have a problem with that route and I understand that it's not easy to write a quasi-incest story like this and keep it both sexy and believable, but this just constantly jumping the shark.
 
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And I agree with other comments, grammatically and punctuation-wise, this update was horrible and definitely needs to be edited a lot.
Constantly switching genders and using wrong tenses, and even things like having the first word in a sentence without a capital letter. That's not excusable due to English not being your first language, it's simply not caring enough and not doing the necessary quality control
 
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guardianfather said:
I think the dev is from spain.
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Yes, and i'm from Italy so English is not my first language just like him; i just wanted to show the developer the error so he can hopefully fix it in the next update.
Anyway he should hire a proofreader: these are minor mistakes that can be fixed quickly.
 
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netero3009 other things to fix:
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I honestly don't know why devs try to write VN's in English if they don't properly know the language, it makes no sense to do it.. and it really ruins the VN, it's all too common these days. What a shame.
 
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HentaiKami

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DanThaMan said:
I honestly don't know why devs try to write VN's in English if they don't properly know the language, it makes no sense to do it.. and it really ruins the VN, it's all too common these days. What a shame.
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Simple answer for that question, bigger market. Even if it was free game, you want most available players to play it, so you can get more visibility and perhaps at some point start making money out of games. And if there's people that really like the game and know the language better than you, they might offer help by proofreading/translating things.
 
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botc76 said:
And I agree with other comments, grammatically and punctuation-wise, this update was horrible and definitely needs to be edited a lot.
Constantly switching genders and using wrong tenses, and even things like having the first word in a sentence without a capital letter. That's not excusable due to English not being your first language, it's simply not caring enough and not doing the necessary quality control
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It's true, it's my fault. Sometimes I forget to check Google translations. I can't dedicate all my time to the game, so I apologize, sometimes I forget things.
 
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