- May 29, 2017
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After playing through the whole thing carefully, I have to give some credit to some people that didnt liked the Cops Blackmail storyline. It is indeed very unrealistic, and could certainly be done better.
But if you look on the game - it looks like it was indeed what the Development team had in mind. The prologue monologue shows that this game will be all revolving arround the story of corrupt cops abusing power in some backwater town. And there is nothing wrong with that, or them raping the women while they are at it.
Still it could be done a bit better I believe, while still kipping the cops as evil and dreadfull. With a bit better writing and patience a more convincing way of showing the same thing would be possible. But what is done is done.
What is a bit confusing and weird - the game looks more polished and better written in the areas that arent the main focus of the game it seems like. Normal scenes and dialogues between MC his GF or that whole chellange thing with the football jock were written really nicely. I see how it can look confusing to people.
I wonder if police raping girls will be the main focus of the whole story, or other characters will join the NTRing too. I see principal and your shitty friend are easy bets by this point.
Its really hard game to give a score too. It has potencial - good looking and well written characters, their everyday interactions are good, just the main blackmail plot is done less than idealy to be honest. But this is also the main focus of the game. Thats why it is hard to rate this game.
I dont mean the devs should change the premmise of the game. They want to heavy depressing story of the utterly corrupt and opresive cops shaking the whole town - and it is good enough storyline. But a bit more work on the details of this plot is required. This should be something more exciting and alaborate than simply - you have to obey us, now come back tomorrow for more.
Another update or 2 should give us final answer - if the devs have good idea how they want to proceed with the game. Maybe GFs blackmail scenario will be done a bit better.
But if you look on the game - it looks like it was indeed what the Development team had in mind. The prologue monologue shows that this game will be all revolving arround the story of corrupt cops abusing power in some backwater town. And there is nothing wrong with that, or them raping the women while they are at it.
Still it could be done a bit better I believe, while still kipping the cops as evil and dreadfull. With a bit better writing and patience a more convincing way of showing the same thing would be possible. But what is done is done.
What is a bit confusing and weird - the game looks more polished and better written in the areas that arent the main focus of the game it seems like. Normal scenes and dialogues between MC his GF or that whole chellange thing with the football jock were written really nicely. I see how it can look confusing to people.
I wonder if police raping girls will be the main focus of the whole story, or other characters will join the NTRing too. I see principal and your shitty friend are easy bets by this point.
Its really hard game to give a score too. It has potencial - good looking and well written characters, their everyday interactions are good, just the main blackmail plot is done less than idealy to be honest. But this is also the main focus of the game. Thats why it is hard to rate this game.
I dont mean the devs should change the premmise of the game. They want to heavy depressing story of the utterly corrupt and opresive cops shaking the whole town - and it is good enough storyline. But a bit more work on the details of this plot is required. This should be something more exciting and alaborate than simply - you have to obey us, now come back tomorrow for more.
Another update or 2 should give us final answer - if the devs have good idea how they want to proceed with the game. Maybe GFs blackmail scenario will be done a bit better.