Very enjoyable update! I just love darker story lines, all the happy vanilla crap has run it's course and I can't take it anymore. All those stories are exactly the same. Thank you guys for braving these darker waters. You guys did a superb job of capturing the emotional distress of the situation on melissa's face and body language, I was able to both feel sorry for her AND get a sick sense of satisfaction from it. (of course I wouldn't in the real world, but this is just fantasy)
And again, I would like to encourage those of you like this VN and would like to see this story completed to give the Devs your support, these projects just don't continue without it.