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Oh yeah. That's what I'm talking about!Update posted on SubscribeStar:
Oh yeah. That's what I'm talking about!Update posted on SubscribeStar:
Um, in the story? The current version of the story has six chapters. The seventh is being worked on now. If you'd rather think of the existing version as 0.6, with 0.7 in progress, fine, but I haven't been numbering it that way.where are all the others chapters? ,i mean ch1 ,2,3,4,5,if they exist of course
You can substitute "will" for "has." The early portion of this thread proved that out...The story will piss a lot of people off though. I'll try to take it for what it is, a story
Yes, it isn't perfect. As you might surmise, the main idea was to get back to a time where phones could take pictures, but before the "everybody has a video camera and Internet in their pocket" days. I honestly didn't think about the USB stick aspect. Oh well...The technology is kind of inconsistent with 2005(Hurricane Katrina). Floppy disks were a thing of the past by then, it was USB-drives by that time. Most teens would also have a cell phone. Heck, 90% in my 13 year old class in 2000 were running around with Nokia 3210 and 3310. In 2005 it still wasn't smartphones ofc, just cell phones. It was also when the slim laptops we know today started to really hit the mainstream market.
Thanks!Done. Cool story, lot of potential, really hot animated scenes. Will keep an eye on this and sub if it continues in a direction I like. Not something you try if you have issues separating reality and fiction however.
Um, in the story? The current version of the story has six chapters. The seventh is being worked on now. If you'd rather think of the existing version as 0.6, with 0.7 in progress, fine, but I haven't been numbering it that way.
"Bro," give us all a break.bro next update release date
I am writing a similar storyGreat "STORY" yea.. its a story not a game.. why is that so hard to digest..
but yes.. i personally enjoy the aspect of the "helpless son being forced to watch his mother being molested"(like the first scene in the police questioning room) with that being said i dont care to "be" the son in that perspective(i would rather be the cop) so the shifting perspective adds layers to how you can progress the story (not being trapped through the day-to-day events) the true "perspective" we have on this story "i believe" is that of the writer and how we are carried to peak moments in this "world of perversion" we stepped into haha...
As for future events i hope the mother/son/cop scenes return.. maybe more advanced where the son gets blackmailed and forced to sit and watch much worse going down..
But that is just my suggestions... love the story keep up the good work i cant wait to see where you take this!
Um, in the story? The current version of the story has six chapters. The seventh is being worked on now. If you'd rather think of the existing version as 0.6, with 0.7 in progress, fine, but I haven't been numbering it that way.
only if you are not playing with yourselfIts a kinetic novel, there is no playing. Only watching.
If you're asking about the chapter currently in-progress, I haven't actually counted. I'm right in the middle of one of the two sequences that are heavy on animations. Thus, a whole lot of renders going into relatively few lines of the script. Then (from a "lines of dialog rendered" point of view) it'll move along quickly until I get to the last sequence, which is also animation-heavy, at which point it'll appear to drag again.how many rennders have until now ??
Thank you. I'm looking forward to delivering it. But, no, no dates as yet.Looking forward to seeing/playing the latest update.
LOL. Good one!only if you are not playing with yourself