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Kukipett

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Feb 2, 2021
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I'm just starting this game and it already starting to piss me off, why those "clic on this, on that" for absolutely no reason. especially if this story has not much choices that matters.
Vicky is boring as fuck, Julie is annyoing as hell, oh my !!!
And i guess we will have those little clicking games all the time for no reason except making the player think he does something.
If it was fun well it could be ok but.... I remember painfully when i had to help my neighbourg with the groceries. Clicking on those fruits in the right order to manage to go through the punishment left me really annoyed.
 

Exanadae

Newbie
Dec 19, 2018
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I really want to enjoy this game because the renders are good and the non-porn side of the plot is fun, but every single sex scene seems to be the hero getting a hand-job while the girl describes a much better sex scene he's not having.
Checking the game out again two-plus years later, the only conclusion I can draw is the developer doesn't actually know how to pose any sex scene beyond hand- or blow-job. Is there an online course or something we can chip in for to help them out?
 

Notheonlyone

Newbie
Dec 24, 2021
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Any interest is a better script i am considering (not changing) rewriting so the script makes more sense since this is a big immersion killer in a pretty good story
 
Dec 11, 2021
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Hi,

I don't know how far I am but some thoughts...

Translation/writing is annoying as hell, putting me off each time and thinking "what the fuck?", have to read it again...

Artwork is really nice, good looking girls, even MC looks good. #nohomo haha :D
Story is actually also intriguing, just disrupted from the translation and typos.. don't know why this is not improved after 10 Episodes.

And Nicole, in which universe is she looking like she could be the mother of the MC? Ridiculous.

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But this is surely just my taste issue and other have no issues with this.

Good luck and take care

Regards
 

Sotak

Member
Nov 9, 2017
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The overall story has potential and has my interest right from the start...but as a few have said there are a few things I am disappointed with

1-10 updates and the translating is still excessively rough (a minor issue, but it does tend to break immersion in the story)
2-Scarlet being into sharing Julie with a man is fine, but already being in a relationship with her father while also trying to get with the MC is tough for me...especially since scarlet's father seems to be unimportant to the story (except in relation to scarlet), and is never introduced or even given a name. I can see a potential for the future of him possibly being either the "coordinator" or the enemy boss...but it makes scarlet way too whorish considering she is Julie's girlfriend, is getting with the MC, and is trying to seduce Vicky and Nicole as well...and flirting with everything with a pulse regardless of who is with her. There is potential, but the scarlet character is way too scattered
3-the way the MC interacts with Vicky is confusing as hell. Half the time he cares about her and wants to be with her...the other half he can't get her to leave fast enough and is completely indifferent and unfeeling towards her, trying to push her away...makes the MC seem like a complete wuss and Vicky seem like a scared little girl with her first crush. Just inconsistent.
4-my biggest issue: 10 updates/chapters and at least 4 women practically throwing themselves at the MC...one of which is a prostitute he is paying...and he hasn't actually fucked ANY of them yet. What the fuck. Sure, a couple blowjobs, handjobs, some light fingering, and he ate out 1 or 2 of them, plus the 2 lesbian scenes between Julie and Scarlet. But not even 1 round of real vaginal sex (hell, even a good round of anal would be something at this point the way they all talk about it). Seriously...10 chapters and he hasn't been balls deep in any of them yet?
5-the intimate interactions/conversations with the girls starts off fairly sweet and romantic and then almost instantly devolves into abusive, demeaning, rough, whore use. The only time it didn't was between MC and Julie in the lingerie store...and that was cut short by the detective. I'm fine with a little whore/dom-sub play...but this is excessive...straight from "oh this kiss is so sweet and he is so caring and strong I need to be with him" to "swallow that cock you whore, choke on it so hard you cry". Just why.

Like I said, the overall story has potential, but I'm not sure I want to keep up with this one the way the details are now. Too much that just distracts or otherwise keeps me from getting invested.

However it goes from here, good luck.
 

ArcticFox1996

New Member
Jan 17, 2021
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So does anybody know what I'm supposed to say during the scene with the lawyer after Detective White arrests the MC? I have no clue what I'm supposed to say and even when I say what really happened I just get a Game Over screen.
 

rash69

Active Member
Jul 6, 2017
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So does anybody know what I'm supposed to say during the scene with the lawyer after Detective White arrests the MC? I have no clue what I'm supposed to say and even when I say what really happened I just get a Game Over screen.
have you tried searching that is how I found the right answers
 

Sotak

Member
Nov 9, 2017
357
318
The overall story has potential and has my interest right from the start...but as a few have said there are a few things I am disappointed with

1-10 updates and the translating is still excessively rough (a minor issue, but it does tend to break immersion in the story)
2-Scarlet being into sharing Julie with a man is fine, but already being in a relationship with her father while also trying to get with the MC is tough for me...especially since scarlet's father seems to be unimportant to the story (except in relation to scarlet), and is never introduced or even given a name. I can see a potential for the future of him possibly being either the "coordinator" or the enemy boss...but it makes scarlet way too whorish considering she is Julie's girlfriend, is getting with the MC, and is trying to seduce Vicky and Nicole as well...and flirting with everything with a pulse regardless of who is with her. There is potential, but the scarlet character is way too scattered
3-the way the MC interacts with Vicky is confusing as hell. Half the time he cares about her and wants to be with her...the other half he can't get her to leave fast enough and is completely indifferent and unfeeling towards her, trying to push her away...makes the MC seem like a complete wuss and Vicky seem like a scared little girl with her first crush. Just inconsistent.
4-my biggest issue: 10 updates/chapters and at least 4 women practically throwing themselves at the MC...one of which is a prostitute he is paying...and he hasn't actually fucked ANY of them yet. What the fuck. Sure, a couple blowjobs, handjobs, some light fingering, and he ate out 1 or 2 of them, plus the 2 lesbian scenes between Julie and Scarlet. But not even 1 round of real vaginal sex (hell, even a good round of anal would be something at this point the way they all talk about it). Seriously...10 chapters and he hasn't been balls deep in any of them yet?
5-the intimate interactions/conversations with the girls starts off fairly sweet and romantic and then almost instantly devolves into abusive, demeaning, rough, whore use. The only time it didn't was between MC and Julie in the lingerie store...and that was cut short by the detective. I'm fine with a little whore/dom-sub play...but this is excessive...straight from "oh this kiss is so sweet and he is so caring and strong I need to be with him" to "swallow that cock you whore, choke on it so hard you cry". Just why.

Like I said, the overall story has potential, but I'm not sure I want to keep up with this one the way the details are now. Too much that just distracts or otherwise keeps me from getting invested.

However it goes from here, good luck.
Oh, I almost for lot the most confusing thing: all of those points where we are lead to manually do an action (work out in the gym, get groceries from.the coolers at the market...etc.) seemed like there may be a stat base for something (at the gym it actually says you gained 1 strength) or may be triggers for secrets...but are completely useless and basically unplayable (the only way to pass many of them.is to run automatic or skip). So what's even the point of these scenes. Hell, the random "point and click" stuff is kinda pointless at this point also (clicking on the phone to answer it, on the drawer and the stash to pick it up, Julie's bag, and even the fight at the market). Its excessive and meaningless since there is no "penalty" for miss-clicking and no other options than the primary (like hanging up the phone or kicking the guy in the balls). And that scene helping Nicole in the hallway...talk about redundant...first you click on the choice to "help" then you have to click on each item in order to accomplish it...its redundant and pointless to the game at this point...just make everything a choice click instead of point and click...and take out the scene at the gym altogether (the one where he works out alone), the MC never goes back to work out and its obvious so far that the stat growth part of the game was abandoned early (and there was no actual stat bars put in for the player to monitor anyway), so whats the point of even having it.
 

Sotak

Member
Nov 9, 2017
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So does anybody know what I'm supposed to say during the scene with the lawyer after Detective White arrests the MC? I have no clue what I'm supposed to say and even when I say what really happened I just get a Game Over screen.
its possible you missed the correct choices earlier in the game...or you chose something out of order. There is a walkthrough mod that may help
 
Dec 11, 2021
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Hi,

played it complete now. I keep my previous result and add something.

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Music: Those 10 second music loops are getting annoying... I cannot remember any proper music.

Story: still good so far but I didn't expect such slow burn.. more girl-on-girl scenes than the MC, just alone the no-sex.

How about making Scarlett the alpha and fuck with Nicole, Vicky and Julie and the MC is allowed to watch or maybe get an occasional BJ?
It is a very unsatisfying game flow in regards of the adult content.
Girls are throwing themselves at that guy, therefore no sex is really "unrealistic"..

Give this guy some proper release... he deserves it for all the stress... lol

I hope if will be improved in those points, would even suggest adding sex scenes for the earlier episodes. You "just" need to extend existing scenes.

Good luck

Regards
 
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