The overall story has potential and has my interest right from the start...but as a few have said there are a few things I am disappointed with
1-10 updates and the translating is still excessively rough (a minor issue, but it does tend to break immersion in the story)
2-Scarlet being into sharing Julie with a man is fine, but already being in a relationship with her father while also trying to get with the MC is tough for me...especially since scarlet's father seems to be unimportant to the story (except in relation to scarlet), and is never introduced or even given a name. I can see a potential for the future of him possibly being either the "coordinator" or the enemy boss...but it makes scarlet way too whorish considering she is Julie's girlfriend, is getting with the MC, and is trying to seduce Vicky and Nicole as well...and flirting with everything with a pulse regardless of who is with her. There is potential, but the scarlet character is way too scattered
3-the way the MC interacts with Vicky is confusing as hell. Half the time he cares about her and wants to be with her...the other half he can't get her to leave fast enough and is completely indifferent and unfeeling towards her, trying to push her away...makes the MC seem like a complete wuss and Vicky seem like a scared little girl with her first crush. Just inconsistent.
4-my biggest issue: 10 updates/chapters and at least 4 women practically throwing themselves at the MC...one of which is a prostitute he is paying...and he hasn't actually fucked ANY of them yet. What the fuck. Sure, a couple blowjobs, handjobs, some light fingering, and he ate out 1 or 2 of them, plus the 2 lesbian scenes between Julie and Scarlet. But not even 1 round of real vaginal sex (hell, even a good round of anal would be something at this point the way they all talk about it). Seriously...10 chapters and he hasn't been balls deep in any of them yet?
5-the intimate interactions/conversations with the girls starts off fairly sweet and romantic and then almost instantly devolves into abusive, demeaning, rough, whore use. The only time it didn't was between MC and Julie in the lingerie store...and that was cut short by the detective. I'm fine with a little whore/dom-sub play...but this is excessive...straight from "oh this kiss is so sweet and he is so caring and strong I need to be with him" to "swallow that cock you whore, choke on it so hard you cry". Just why.
Like I said, the overall story has potential, but I'm not sure I want to keep up with this one the way the details are now. Too much that just distracts or otherwise keeps me from getting invested.
However it goes from here, good luck.