It was me. I am in contact with Perv....I'm the new proofreader. Engrish should be sorted for the next update, I've gone through the entire VN. Again, as said to someone else, if I have missed anything please do let me know by PM. Be aware though that I actually
am English, if an American comes at me with an Engrish issue I will most likely ignore it.
The problem here is working out sometimes what the dev is trying to convey and then rewording that correctly. Most times, my rephrases will most likely not make sense to a lot of foreigners (and Americans) who speak English.
As for anyone actually whining about it, it really isn't that bad in all honestly, far far better than 90% of Eastern EU VN's around.
As for rework, Perv has mentioned it and I advised against, and advised if he was to start, to do what Zeton is doing with DS and include reowrks of earlier scenes along with new updates then the VN is not being put on hold. Personally I don't have much of an issue with the early renders, sure not terribly detailed but the renders themselves and characters are all fine imo.