Looks very promising. The start is good. A few things could be improved.
1. The font is very small and hard to read.
2. Time management is a little too tight. You go into the kitchen in the morning, talk to Richard, and it's noon right away. No time to go to work. That makes not much sense.
3. Navigation is a bit challenging. There are 4 districts. But you don't know where anything is. The name is not very meaningful. You take a bus at good luck. This makes everything very confusing
1. The font is very small and hard to read.
2. Time management is a little too tight. You go into the kitchen in the morning, talk to Richard, and it's noon right away. No time to go to work. That makes not much sense.
3. Navigation is a bit challenging. There are 4 districts. But you don't know where anything is. The name is not very meaningful. You take a bus at good luck. This makes everything very confusing