It's games like these that make me want to become an active member of this community, not just for finding new games, but also discussing them and maybe contributing feedback.
Before I start, I want to applaud you for bringing the demo out and taking advice before locking it behind a patreon! I don't want to imply that I'm a freeloader, actually, I fully intend to support you once you do commit to that, or any other direction. Me personally, I'd set up my own site with direct donation links just in case patreon decides to go on another hissy fit, but that's just me.
One last thing before I go to my "game feedback" topic, I'd like to encourage people to review the game. It's the best way to help people decide whether it's for them or not, a comment will just get lost in a month's time.
Feedback
I love the direction of the game, other people won't. I suggest you don't listen to people upset with the fundamental direction of your project, since you can't please everybody. I for one like really perverted games, whereas vanilla games just turn me off. Also, I've seen a lot of complaints on similar games where the story is too crazy. I don't get them. Is washing dishes how people normally get to fuck their entire extended family? Good thing I was a slob as a child, that might have turned out awkward.
Even though the game is light on story, the story it does have, while crazy (I see that as a good thing) is quite good (it's too short to say it's amazing), but what is amazing, and I try to keep that word for special occasions, is the banter between the twins. More of that! Yes, having sex with everyone around is awesome, if they're wearing outlandish clothes, or maybe uniforms (cops / nuns ^.^) it helps. But what I think sells you to loving someone is not
just their boobs (and the anal sex among other things), but the personality. Likes / dislikes, banter. The school headmistress and her daughter are another good example, also the really slutty girl from your class.
Now onto what I don't like
I see that you are quite defensive about your game's conversation paths and game overs. I agree with your point of view on "save scumming is quite ok", but you have to understand that people are not attacking you on this front; they are just stating that the implementation is lack-luster, and that game overs just won't fly in today's patron economy. That is to say, if your game is wasting my time, there are
hundreds out there that won't. In your case, it's not wasting my time since it fails the second I make a wrong choice. On this front, that is ok. If a decision I made an hour ago will lead to a fail-state, I will delete your game.
Having decisions in a game is quite rewarding, it makes it a game, and not a movie you have to click trough to see the next scene. A lot of great games have very few choices (all lilith games for example. Almost all jap VN). If you think that branching paths is too complicated and it will increase development time and costs (not just money but man-hours), you can do without them. But what you have right now is ... well it's nothing at all, to be perfectly honest. I hope this doesn't sound antagonistic, I'm not trying to attack you in any way.
What I do however suggest is, no matter what you end up doing with the game, if you plan on re-introducing the wife character, you need to make her optional. Hear me out, please! The wife is a
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, someone important to the plot and the protagonist, but someone the audience (player) does not, in any way, care for. And considering the crazy world you are building, I'm convinced a lot of people don't wanna get hitched, even if it is with a crazy hot chick who's open to incest orgies.
Final Feedback
I would also like there to be repeatable scenes, at least a few. Like for example during classes, you could just skip the class, or maybe ask for a blowjob. IDK, anything you'd like.
Since you are open to watersports, maybe, IDK, maybe you could also give the option for the protagonist to piss on someone, maybe your daughters, idk. (Yes I do, daughters, please, I beg you!)
I don't know your background, but I work as a software developer. Never underestimate feature creep. I understand you want to make this game the best possible thing ever and add everything under the sun, but sadly that's not possible. Limitations are a good thing!
In Conclusion
I love your game, I will be following you and once you open a patreon or whatever, I'll be there to help monetarily also. Cheers and good luck!
