I love the story and characters so far. I really like that you give us the option to have a choice of certain content such as futa. I personally do not like it but I understand others do. You have provided a simple solution to make your game more enjoyable to a wider audience. I think it is safe to say that we all appreciate the effort and extra work that makes for you. Finding a well illustrated "monster girl" game was a pure delight. Thank you. I really look forward to seeing what other characters you bring to your story. Your "Strange Girl" in the chapter 2 preview is absolutely adorable.
After I played the available content, I checked the images. There are a few spots where certain glitches can be seen. I can understand the difficulty as I have tried doing some rendering in DAZ myself. It can be frustrating. Sometimes the assets like to fight back. For instance, it seems the frame fq_hmouth1b00003 had an issue with the hair parenting properly.
If you would like assistance with the grammar, I would be willing to provide some input.
I made some renders I shared a while ago if you want to take a peek. Ya, I like "monster girls".