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As someone said above, Ancho deserves a good break and an attractive muse to continue their art. We should support creators like Ancho and cheer them on.
If you didn't say anything, I'd probably have assumed it was your first language honestly. Very good job. Better than most native speakers actually. But about your first post, I don't speak for the author, but I guarantee there will be more of Morgan in the future. I doubt that there will be a whole chapter dedicated to her though, since the game never really focuses on one girl per chapter. Some chapters kind of do, but there's never really a huge priority on specific girls. You more just get content with them sprinkled in when the story allows for it.Sorry for my bad English. Portuguese and English are very different kkkkkk
Ah yes, because characters never change and develop through a story arc.my god !
even though i love the art, i stopped playing nearly right away.
spineless doormat Mc ... check
pure blonde insufferable bitch ... check
best female friend being a dirty slut .... check
seriously there should be a doormat protagonist tag on this site.
Dude I also didn't like the first chapter like you hahahaha. But after I got to chp 6 onwards I realized that Fantasy Valley is practically a hero's tale, with its development happening with each chapter, and you can be sure that from chapter 1 onwards the game only improves a lot, mainly the MC the plot, and all the characters. (Ancho is amazing, I just say that)my god !
even though i love the art, i stopped playing nearly right away.
spineless doormat Mc ... check
pure blonde insufferable bitch ... check
best female friend being a dirty slut .... check
seriously there should be a doormat protagonist tag on this site.
True , i went over the top with this one."dirty slut"?
The exaggeration in the criticism is so over the top it's laughable.
Play the game my friend, progress and find out, then come back here to write what you think.True , i went over the top with this one.
i should have said lying slut. she impersonate her father to make you come then lies about her relationship with the guy for no reason whatsoever.
If she had said something like: i know , he's a jerk but he is my boyfriend or something along those lines it would have been much better. It's not the action in itself i have a problem with, it's how it is brought up.
Also the fact that no matter what you do she will be your main LI.
and if seeing your childhood crush blowing someone gives you a boner , then there is a problem.
Wow, Ancho reacted to my post, Ancho would just like to say that I'm your fan. And thank you so much for all this amazing story and the beautiful art you made.It would be really interesting if next season of fantasy valley had a chapter focused on Morgan, like her wanting to take Joey to meet her parents, and joey getting nervous and insecure ends up taking the MC with them both. So we could see more depth into Morgan's storyline. (Morgan is my favorite girl)
can you post it here?
On the other hand it could probs help him. I find going back to old work allows room for expansion on minute details that could eventually lead to entire stories.It's good that he's actually doing something, but going back and working on past content in my experience makes the writer's block worse.
Oh, you mean the one that makes people cry NTR when it isn't actually NTR? That one is pretty crucial to the development of the actual story. Taking it our or altering it would cheapen the game.He is working on first chapter. Let's see if he changes the scene that is talked about even more than the actual game content