I'm a fan of corruption games but this seems to have gone way pass corruption , I would love to see her at the farm but I also want a good path...not just getting her stuff back but also learning something... Has she even tried to help/protect Melanie from Victoria? She just seems completely cold and soulless, which can only take you so far.
I think we are all kinda on the same page, with hopes for some improved writing and multiple varied endings for the finale.
I posted once before about the endings I would like to see for this game, and my wishes haven't changed since then, though I doubt that many (if any) of those wishes will come true.
As for the dynamic between Monica, Melanie, and Victoria,
I've said before that I don't believe that Victoria could have ever gotten the upper hand over either Monica or Melanie on her own. Monica was out of Victoria's league because of the wealth and status she had, and Melanie was out of Victoria's league because she's smarter than Victoria and better at judging people and manipulating them. Given that this is my opinion, while I would like to see Monica try to help Melanie, I would also like an ending in which Melanie turns the tables on Victoria without help, because I think she could, if Marcus were out of the picture.
I don't think the writing is any worse than it has ever been. In fact I would say it is very consistent.
I wouldn't say that the writing has gotten worse, but I would definitely not call it consistent where Fred is concerned. I really don't think that the "magic cock" element should have ever appeared in the game. Fred knows about Marcus and about Monica's true situation. There's no reason at all why he couldn't have simply done as he pleased with Monica, without her inexplicably becoming addicted to his cock, in complete contradiction to her character in every other part of the game.
Not consistent.
As long as Monica only craves Fred's magic tool and no other she is no slut.
I agree that Monica craving Fred's cock does not make her a slut. It still should never have appeared in the game.
It looks like we're in the final 5th stage of accepting the inevitable... Anger, denial, bargaining and depression we've already passed, it's time for acceptance, hehe.) But anyway, you are right and Monica is not a slut and I hope it stays that way.
I, for one, do not accept it, and never will. However, I can't deny it, because I'm not the game developer. I can't bargain, because I'd be bargaining against what I think is likely a well funded push in favor of the "magic cock" storyline, and I don't have the money to push the pendulum in the other direction. I won't indulge in anger or depression, since this is just a game. But I will never accept the magic cock storyline. It doesn't belong in this game.