Ren'Py Fashion Business [Ep.4 v7.01 Extra] [DecentMonkey]

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I agreed, that's why I wrote not just. I also agree the main story line needs some focus put on it and less Betty high jinks.

Using the term canon was a poor turn of phrase on my part. I was referring more to Monica's ultimate end not an early alternate ending like marrying Dick or potentially running off with Julia.

Yes the Betty being a " good wife " is absolutely unnecessary. We get the point that she cheats, it would be better to leave it at that. Also, I do know Victoria is popular but it's getting boring that Melanie and Monica can't do anything. Victoria has such a great amount of plot armour that I wouldn't be surprised that if she were to face Marcus, she would win . She spied on Melanie's house ( basically spying on Monica) which never even implied until the very moment, she can just call up Marcus and Melanie will be thrown in the farm. Now she is after the senator's daughter. She was somehow aware that Melanie and Monica are going to show the proof to Dick.... I mean come on. All the scenes and activities are good but the character and the armour is just irritating.

 

[defd©™]

I disagree that the slum story line is not popular.

I was thinkng you was not a Slum fan...
Are you sure?.. I think Slums plot is a requirement... and it is one of the most popular path
the slum storyline is part of the Main Story with always the same renders that can be counted as new renders by simply adding a a different dialog or one single real new render that count as 20 renders already made...
I perfectly know how DM works... he has made the ASSET
The ASSET IS always the first one ready for the new update because it is always almost same as previous release
Now he have to change dialogs and adding the position of the various characters in pre made renders related with background that are alwaus the same...
(he for sure has at least 3 or more very high power computers that make final renders very fast)
...any update does not require a lot of JOB.. it is just the same as many of other devs that work with passion on one single and cheap computer.

The quality of a developers is not related with the money
The job quality of a developers cannot be judge about the fast developing technique... must be judge to the real skill on writing story line and on his enthusiasm and his passion... so is a nonsense compare a developer with other that do not make the same money/
if the dev make a lot money he must works better than others...
DM have found a smart way to di fast update with poor content and the grind of the asset HIDE this to the players
use gallery mod and you will see that in every update the real new renders can be played in 5 minutes!
(there are a lot of them thinking that he have done a titan job but it is not true)

Different story was for the Event List--- (caused by an error that he admited) and splitting the EP2 in 2 different part (because he realize that there was TOO MUCH BUGS coming up from the ASSET that was no more able to load 10GB of useless always the same renders
....the split in 2 parts was a TITAN JOB (he had to work hard and at the same time released very poor update)

I think all paths about Gym, Cleaning House, Bardie and Betty plots are just side stories not related with Monica main plot.
Only the falling and revenge paths (that was postponed because is not possible in the sandbox asset due to the fact that is a linear story line) those 2 paths are in the Main story line and including the slum and the ShinyHole path to have a sense.

 

[defd©™]

Yes the Betty being a " good wife " is absolutely unnecessary. We get the point that she cheats, it would be better to leave it at that. Also, I do know Victoria is popular but it's getting boring that Melanie and Monica can't do anything. Victoria has such a great amount of plot armour that I wouldn't be surprised that if she were to face Marcus, she would win . She spied on Melanie's house ( basically spying on Monica) which never even implied until the very moment, she can just call up Marcus and Melanie will be thrown in the farm. Now she is after the senator's daughter. She was somehow aware that Melanie and Monica are going to show the proof to Dick.... I mean come on. All the scenes and activities are good but the character and the armour is just irritating.

I agree Bardie, Betty, Cleaning house, and Gym... all that paths are like side stories that have no-sense... the only sense is to take the story long = make more money ... DM is a smart guy ... he knows how to milk his patreon supporters
but that is OK for me...!
takes advantage of the masochist-supporters-stupidity just shows his skill and power
by this way the game will be ready in 5 or more years... or maybe will never end

 

[Qixoni]

The problem with the same stuff Over and Over is that after a while it starts losing appeal. Specially when you need to do things Over and Over. The Betty gym Quest is a bore for instance after the first 3 mandatory times.
The bardie demands make no sense after a while, unlesse the guy is a eunuch.
The Revenge questineline is poorly done since it locks you from the rest of the Story, like Júlia and so on, it should have been properly integrated during the game main plot, like in order to discover stuff having to to some humiliating stuff, etc..
Don't get me wrong, the game is Nice, Monica is stunning to look at, but repetition like in plenty of things in life get's boring fast

 

[vimmers]

The ASSET IS always the first one ready for the new update because it is always almost same as previous release
Now he have to change dialogs and adding the position of the various characters in pre made renders related with background that are alwaus the same...

true and the people there use the gallery mod miss the small differences in a dialog/scene

 

[momaeh86]

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Bringing Monica to Rancho 218 would really be a dead end to the story, that's true. But if enough users wish for it to show up in the game, there are ways to include it. How about the idea that it's not Monica ending there? It wouldn't be the first time that the user is not playing with Monica but with another character. How about sending Jane or Tiffany (Molly, Ashley,...) to Rancho 218? What if Monica could buy herself some extra time for her plans by offering one of them to Marcus?

The question is not if it's possible to include Rancho 218 in the game, the question is if it's worth the effort. You can't include it in the main plot and I guess it would be a lot of work to design this whole new area. So I doubt it makes sense to do that for a side plot.

 

[defd©™]

The problem with the same stuff Over and Over is that after a while it starts losing appeal. Specially when you need to do things Over and Over. The Betty gym Quest is a bore for instance after the first 3 mandatory times.
The bardie demands make no sense after a while, unlesse the guy is a eunuch.
The Revenge questineline is poorly done since it locks you from the rest of the Story, like Júlia and so on, it should have been properly integrated during the game main plot, like in order to discover stuff having to to some humiliating stuff, etc..
Don't get me wrong, the game is Nice, Monica is stunning to look at, but repetition like in plenty of things in life get's boring fast

Yes the only good scene with Julia is this

Anyway I'm an Hero..
because I have started this game from the beginning for 2 times and after the Event List comes up I was forced to start again for the third time...
Now I know everything about this game... and here is one of my oldest post... was DECEMBER 2019
As you all can see (new and old users) this game is still stuck at the same point since more than 2 YEARS ago

this game was boring 2 years ago and it still is.
Why I'm here? because I love from time to time look at Monica adventures.. there are some of the new scenes that are great..
the best path for me is
The Grand Hotel and escort story line... unfortunately with the same slow progress and very poor new renders.

Interesting also to read the lying comments of DM and the guys of the team who try and fail to shut me up from the first post I made in this thread

but okay, they are the team ... it is clear that they are trying to make money ... only they do it by trying to hide this ... - they try to help ... but they are focused on ...
in my opinion it is not ethically that whoever is involved in the development of a game posts in the threads where their game was cracked

Decent Monkey was the only one to understood that... and he stopped to post with his own name here...

but maybe he have a different account here...
>Era<?
who knows?

 

[defd©™]

Bringing Monica to Rancho 218 would really be a dead end to the story, that's true. But if enough users wish for it to show up in the game, there are ways to include it. How about the idea that it's not Monica ending there? It wouldn't be the first time that the user is not playing with Monica but with another character. How about sending Jane or Tiffany (Molly, Ashley,...) to Rancho 218? What if Monica could buy herself some extra time for her plans by offering one of them to Marcus?

The question is not if it's possible to include Rancho 218 in the game, the question is if it's worth the effort. You can't include it in the main plot and I guess it would be a lot of work to design this whole new area. So I doubt it makes sense to do that for a side plot.

absolutely disagree with you.
Bringing Monica to Ranch 218 would really be go a step forward in the story...
this is the path of the EP1!!!
I really suggest you to play the first episode...

she could unmask the conspiracy that took her husband to jail and find out all by killing Marcus and his disgusting accomplices .... ...
of course after being heavily humiliated and gangbanged with scenes of piss drinking and bestiality with horses ... and then become again the boss of her fashion magazine where she will talk about her story ...
Monica could become the new Tsarina of Russia at the end... because the MC is always the hero.. (Heroine in this case) of the STORY\

This is how the story of a great MC as Monica is, deserve to be written...
She cannot fall forever (if yes the game is over just now as is)

if she will never be able to win her life back the game is over just now... there will be no interest in continuing to play ALWAYS THE SAME RENDERS with very poor content!!

A great writer is able to manage e great story transformation... but if is trapped in this story and the story will remain like it is right now...
This game will be the BEST EXAMPLE of HOW TO MAKE BORING A very good potential story

 

[Qixoni]

About Rach 218, at the end of episode 1 the game promised something that in episode 2 it didn´t deliver. Monica´s path of degradation and humiliation.
Because what we actually have is not exactly that, it´s just a regular story of power downfall and starting from scratch by any means necessary to recover that same power or even a little more.

 

[Stan5851]

Bringing Monica to Rancho 218 would really be a dead end to the story, that's true. But if enough users wish for it to show up in the game, there are ways to include it. How about the idea that it's not Monica ending there? It wouldn't be the first time that the user is not playing with Monica but with another character. How about sending Jane or Tiffany (Molly, Ashley,...) to Rancho 218? What if Monica could buy herself some extra time for her plans by offering one of them to Marcus?

The question is not if it's possible to include Rancho 218 in the game, the question is if it's worth the effort. You can't include it in the main plot and I guess it would be a lot of work to design this whole new area. So I doubt it makes sense to do that for a side plot.

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[Qixoni]

If you do the second Marcus Quest, and by second i mean visiting Marcus for the second time where you start to train as a cat, the episode ends with Monica going to Ranch 218 and it´s supposely end game from what i gathered, so, it seems the Dev has no intention of exploring it further.

 

[defd©™]

If you do the second Marcus Quest, and by second i mean visiting Marcus for the second time where you start to train as a cat, the episode ends with Monica going to Ranch 218 and it´s supposely end game from what i gathered, so, it seems the Dev has no intention of exploring it further.

maybe not in the EP2
there will be an EP3 for sure ... depends about the money he will continue to milk by doing only side stories
if he will continue to make a lot of money... the story will never ends by this way

 

[shahab1372]

Do anyone have the Extra v3 link? Due to sanction there is no possibility for Iranian to get the link from the owner website

 

[ashitanojoe]

Do anyone have the Extra v3 link? Due to sanction there is no possibility for Iranian to get the link from the owner website

What sanction? Patreon is banned there?
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[LoveWhores]

That Molly is so fucking HOT!!! I think from now on my favorite girl is Molly - i wish that i could play wit her or at least Monica to look like her,with such a hot big ass and tits....may be there will have a another project where Molly will be the MC in the game....i can only hope this to happen! Of course,there are a few more hot girls,like Mellanie,Victoria,even Rebeca and to don't forget the MC "Monica" but if i need to sort them then definetely Molly is at the 1st place,second one is for Mellanie and Monica is on third place - after that are Victoria and Rebeca!

I have just one question - when Alex and Mellanie become a couple? From what i remember Mellanie first was the top model,then later was disappeared for a while (in that ranch) and when she come back she was changed and acting different,even been scared from what happens to her in the ranch.....then she was having a few meetings with Monica,with Dick and with Victoria too,even participate in one of the photo shoots with Monica,but i don't remember there to be ever mentioned that Mellanie and Alex(the photographer) are couple! Did i miss something till playing?

 

[Cyber/Jack]

Hello everyone,
I have a problem of missing files when I get to the scene where Monica and Molly are doing a pole dance battle at the bar. This causes me to crash the game when I make the moves with the arrows. Could someone tell me if anyone has had this problem and how to fix it please? Thank you.

 

[agn25]

The problem with the same stuff Over and Over is that after a while it starts losing appeal. Specially when you need to do things Over and Over. The Betty gym Quest is a bore for instance after the first 3 mandatory times.
The bardie demands make no sense after a while, unlesse the guy is a eunuch.
The Revenge questineline is poorly done since it locks you from the rest of the Story, like Júlia and so on, it should have been properly integrated during the game main plot, like in order to discover stuff having to to some humiliating stuff, etc..
Don't get me wrong, the game is Nice, Monica is stunning to look at, but repetition like in plenty of things in life get's boring fast

I agree with you that the repetition required to navigate through the game is one of it's major flaws. The dev has made improvements through the updates, you now can instantly collect the workers reports is a good example. Unfortunately not all the repeatable actions are able to be skipped. I Know personally I'd appreciate not having the slum dwellers talk to monica as if she hasn't already flashed them each multiple times instead of talking like they did to her when she advertised the kebab stand. I feel if a skip option for each repeatable event or conversation was present a lot of the grind players feel would disappear. Another of my pet peeves is the dialogue not changing at all when you repeat a photo shoot. If he is going to make the player repeat photo shoots then the dialogue should reflect that.

The Bardie scenes make much more sense if you think of him as a 15 or 16 year old and not as he claims to be 18 or is it 21? He is clearly attending a high school not a university.

 

[EraRamp]

That Molly is so fucking HOT!!! I think from now on my favorite girl is Molly - i wish that i could play wit her or at least Monica to look like her,with such a hot big ass and tits....may be there will have a another project where Molly will be the MC in the game....i can only hope this to happen! Of course,there are a few more hot girls,like Mellanie,Victoria,even Rebeca and to don't forget the MC "Monica" but if i need to sort them then definetely Molly is at the 1st place,second one is for Mellanie and Monica is on third place - after that are Victoria and Rebeca!

I have just one question - when Alex and Mellanie become a couple? From what i remember Mellanie first was the top model,then later was disappeared for a while (in that ranch) and when she come back she was changed and acting different,even been scared from what happens to her in the ranch.....then she was having a few meetings with Monica,with Dick and with Victoria too,even participate in one of the photo shoots with Monica,but i don't remember there to be ever mentioned that Mellanie and Alex(the photographer) are couple! Did i miss something till playing?

Looks like you missed the latest updates

 

[agn25]

If you do the second Marcus Quest, and by second i mean visiting Marcus for the second time where you start to train as a cat, the episode ends with Monica going to Ranch 218 and it´s supposely end game from what i gathered, so, it seems the Dev has no intention of exploring it further.

Monica only ends up at the Rancho 218(This is becoming a running gag right) if she fails Marcus's pet behavioral test. It is an alternate ending. If you pass the test he is planning to show Monica off too some important people with a "To be continued" sign on it. I don't think it means the dev will not bring the Rancho in to the story at a later time.

 

[Wild Red]

Hello everyone,
I have a problem of missing files when I get to the scene where Monica and Molly are doing a pole dance battle at the bar. This causes me to crash the game when I make the moves with the arrows. Could someone tell me if anyone has had this problem and how to fix it please? Thank you.

which file is missing? do you play latest version? ep-2-2-v3
could be a part of what was deleted to minimize the file size of ep2. If so, the solution is play 2.1 v0.16 . <- this is just a guess