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Yes you are right about the last two Fred scenes. They are in no way consistent. I should have and will now put the caveat of, apart from the last two Fred scenes. The writing has in all the other paths so far been consistent. I really hope that this Fred stuff doesn't start leaking into the other paths. It hasn't so far.I wouldn't say that the writing has gotten worse, but I would definitely not call it consistent where Fred is concerned. I really don't think that the "magic cock" element should have ever appeared in the game. Fred knows about Marcus and about Monica's true situation. There's no reason at all why he couldn't have simply done as he pleased with Monica, without her inexplicably becoming addicted to his cock, in complete contradiction to her character in every other part of the game.
Not consistent.
I agree that Monica craving Marcus' cock does not make her a slut. It still should never have appeared in the game.
I agree with that final sentence, I'm sure you meant it to refer to Fred not Marcus.