VN Ren'Py Fate Won't Separate Us [v0.4 Patreon] [Raising Phallus]

[Taptus]

The game is very good, but the plot moves very slowly. Instead of developing the main characters, sex happens with the characters around, it's not interesting

 

[nunzio2016]

The game is very good, but the plot moves very slowly. Instead of developing the main characters, sex happens with the characters around, it's not interesting

Everyone seems to complain about this…it’s literally the fourth update. Give it time. Other characters need to be introduced/developed. The pacing is perfect.
Enjoy the ride.

 

[RuthlessSlayer]

Other characters need to be introduced/developed

Are you kidding me? What kind of "development" are we talking about? Is there even more development possible than this? Their level of slutiness has already torn the sky apart

 

[nunzio2016]

Are you kidding me? What kind of "development" are we talking about? Is there even more development possible than this? Their level of slutiness has already torn the sky apart

You know…their likes and dislikes…how much BBC they can handle. That sort of stuff.
Nothing wrong with a bit of good old fashioned slutiness!

 

[Liam the Handyman]

TBF, this reads kinda like you can prevent NTR


This is the wake up call LOL, but i guess it being a spoiler do make some peeps miss out...

Lastly, its Freya's fault for most peeps playing the game

 

[Doctor Doom]

THIS IS SO GOOD OMG

 

[SpexIhr]

Is there no Scene in the gym toilet?
The last Version of the game stopped there and made it look like that there will be a great scene.
But now she just comes out from the toilet?

 

[Firaxius]

Oh seems update 0.4 doesn't add much beside redone some images, still had the same end as in 0.3, a bit sad for so much data.

 

[Dogorti]

Oh seems update 0.4 doesn't add much beside redone some images, still had the same end as in 0.3, a bit sad for so much data.

Adds a lot. Just that only the cheating path is updated.

 

[Nightwish_]

The game is very good, but the plot moves very slowly. Instead of developing the main characters, sex happens with the characters around, it's not interesting

This is exactly my point. Don't get me wrong, I love the game and I understand it is still in its beginning phase, but sometimes I just can't help getting annoyed when the story/plot moves so slow, couple it with various path updates which will drag the story more.


I love the game and I am very much looking forward to it. I'm willing to wait since I am already experienced with games like these (Shadows of Desire, etc.) and I was rewarded for my patience greatly. I just hope it will be as rewarding as I think it will be. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next ones although I would probably just stack up updates and maybe wait til Ver 0.8/1.0

 

[Gundeer]

I love Freyas model is all i like in this game. But the real cucking aint coming, we prob wont see it for a few updates if any.

 

[NTRlover795]

Cheating path is so boring.

 

[Forlansx]

I'm thinking about getting this, but has there already started to be anything relevant with the FMC? I see that this is only having scenes with the sister and mother, which I honestly don't feel should be the focus, the progression of this redhead is almost zero.

On the contrary, too low content for the mom and sis and could be increased in next update specially sense its cuckold path. Also i think they (mom n sis) should be even more like main characters cuz they r so hot specially the mom pornstar idea being a bbc huge slut already and cucking her son with bbc.

A suggested idea for dev for next update mom could go to her agancy and son get involved somehow against her wishes and see her mom fucked by bbc so she punishes him by cucking him right there and start being mean to him which kinda develops their relationship after the session. Raising Phallus
also thnx for ur work dev its a good game. ignore bad critics. keep going.

Go team Daniella the BBC Slut

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

On the contrary, too low content for the mom and sis and could be increased in next update specially sense its cuckold path. Also i think they (mom n sis) should be even more like main characters cuz they r so hot specially the mom pornstar idea being a bbc huge slut already and cucking her son with bbc.

A suggested idea for dev for next update mom could go to her agancy and son get involved somehow against her wishes and see her mom fucked by bbc so she punishes him by cucking him right there and start being mean to him which kinda develops their relationship after the session. Raising Phallus
also thnx for ur work dev its a good game. ignore bad critics. keep going.

Go team Daniella the BBC Slut

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Who is on the cover of the game? Freya? Or is it the mother and sister? I think the focus has already been lost here. Besides, the last update only proved the point I highlighted in this topic, update with several scenes of the mother and sister and Freya receiving only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger, including in a scene that seems to have no development between her and the antagonist, everything seems too gratuitous. In short, if you my friend who came to this game because of NTR, better let this cook for another 3 or 4 updates, I supported this game waiting for content from Freya who is the MC's girlfriend and is on the cover of the game, but all I'm getting so far is a game about MC's sister and mother.

 

[retadrddoge]

Who is on the cover of the game? Freya? Or is it the mother and sister? I think the focus has already been lost here. Besides, the last update only proved the point I highlighted in this topic, update with several scenes of the mother and sister and Freya receiving only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger, including in a scene that seems to have no development between her and the antagonist, everything seems too gratuitous. In short, if you my friend who came to this game because of NTR, better let this cook for another 3 or 4 updates, I supported this game waiting for content from Freya who is the MC's girlfriend and is on the cover of the game.

i get your point, freya is the main dish and the mother and sister are side shitz. we need more of freya but i guess shes not fully broken yet but we getting there. hope next update focused on her. im with u brother.

 

[Forlansx]

Who is on the cover of the game? Freya? Or is it the mother and sister? I think the focus has already been lost here. Besides, the last update only proved the point I highlighted in this topic, update with several scenes of the mother and sister and Freya receiving only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger, including in a scene that seems to have no development between her and the antagonist, everything seems too gratuitous. In short, if you my friend who came to this game because of NTR, better let this cook for another 3 or 4 updates, I supported this game waiting for content from Freya who is the MC's girlfriend and is on the cover of the game, but all I'm getting so far is a game about MC's sister and mother.

well its about who cucks him first i guess, i prefer the mom , then the others, u prefer the fmc then the sides, its all about order i guess.
still i like the slutiness of the mom being already a huge bbc slut and pornstar so she is ready to cuck him and build her relashionship with him again thro cucking him

 

[Raising Phallus]

Don't get me wrong, I don't give gratuitous hate, especially in NTR games, I only raise sincere and constructive points of what is actually good and bad in the game and you know what they are.

Oh yeah? Sincere and constructive points, you say... Let's have a look together.

I see that this is only having scenes with the sister and mother, which I honestly don't feel should be the focus, the progression of this redhead is almost zero.

It doesn't exist, that's why I didn't renew my patreon. Only scenes of the sister and mother, when I know that the real thing started with FMC then I can go back to being a patreon.

(FMC seems to only get attention for the wallpapers)

what i'm saying is that the FMC doesn't pay attention, the game is described as NTR, whether you like slow burn or fast burn, the point is that this game has no burn at all, slow burn means that the corruption is at least happening slowly, here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist.

spread misinformation and leak my wallpapers here and then say “I'm making constructive and sincere comments, don't misunderstand me”???? you are either trying to fuck with me or you are forcing me to deal with your passive-aggressive behavior.

I see that this is only having scenes with the sister and mother

It doesn't exist, that's why I didn't renew my patreon. Only scenes of the sister and mother.

(FMC seems to only get attention for the wallpapers)

the progression of this redhead is almost zero.

Now, open the "images folder" of the game and compare the render numbers for each character.

here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist.

These are the 'only' illussions of the protagonist;

Spoiler: only illusions scenes so far

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That's all the jeremiah's illusions, guys. "don't get me wrong."

only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger

I think I responded this claim above. Seriously, what kind of scenes do you expect in a slowburn game? and this game made its debut at the end of June?

including in a scene that seems to have no development between her and the antagonist

I wish you would bother to read texts in the game and understand what is going on between freya and samuel. but ctrl-ing is more fun, isn't it?

 

[OddLook]

great game, sadly the walkthrough is gone so i can't know what i missed

 

[retadrddoge]

Oh yeah? Sincere and constructive points, you say... Let's have a look together.









spread misinformation and leak my wallpapers here and then say “I'm making constructive and sincere comments, don't misunderstand me”???? you are either trying to fuck with me or you are forcing me to deal with your passive-aggressive behavior.







Now, open the "images folder" of the game and compare the render numbers for each character.





These are the 'only' illussions of the protagonist;

Spoiler: only illusions scenes so far

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That's all the jeremiah's illusions, guys. "don't get me wrong."




I think I responded this claim above. Seriously, what kind of scenes do you expect in a slowburn game? and this game made its debut at the end of June?



I wish you would bother to read texts in the game and understand what is going on between freya and samuel. but ctrl-ing is more fun, isn't it?

chill dev dont need to cook him so hard he didnt say hate words he loves the redhead = wants more redhead, and we all like ur game. i like it cause its funny.
pretty shrimple.

 

[nunzio2016]

chill dev dont need to cook him so hard he didnt say hate words he loves the redhead = wants more redhead, and we all like ur game. i like it cause its funny.
pretty shrimple.

Come on guy…don’t tell the dev to chill. He has every right to call out this bulllshit.

If it was anyone else. Sure. Chill.
Phallus gets to snap back.

And yes. Freya is the GREATEST FMC ever