"I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore"
Obvious (?) statement n1:
The NTR gourmet: Oh no, here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist. only illusions.
Me: "a bunch of scenes are shown that are not illusions"
The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.
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Obvious (?) statement n2:
The NTR gourmet: only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger.
Me: *a bunch of scenes are shown.
*mentioning her 'friendship' with samuel, her squirting in her boyfriend's face, the gym and the toilet scenes etc.
*stating this game is slowburn and it's making its debut at the end of June.
*asking what kind of scenes are expected.
The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.
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Obvious (?) statement n3:
The NTR gourmet: *I bet he'll create more female characters for the same purpose.
*I was a patron of your work since you released it. Don't get me wrong, I don't give gratuitous hate, especially in NTR games, I only raise sincere and constructive points.
Me: You're just spreading some shitty misinformative comments. You're taunting me by misreading my intentions and leaking my wallpapers. Then "Oh no, don't get me wrong".
Btw, don't you think that leaking these wallpapers is undermining the game you declared to support?
The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.
Even Kofi is capable of understanding what I wrote.
It's not fair to yourself to waste so much mental energy with him. There will always be some trolls and edgelords demanding your attention, the ignore button is your best friend.
Keep up the great work and keep in mind that the vast majority of people is receiving your game very positively.
It's not fair to yourself to waste so much mental energy with him. There will always be some trolls and edgelords demanding your attention, the ignore button is your best friend.
Keep up the great work and keep in mind that the vast majority of people is receiving your game very positively.
yes i just discover the game and we can clearly see that all paths will be good in different way even if 2 of them are just be introduce. The sister is personally my favourite character, hope we will see her in all the paths but i'll see. Also, it s impressive that you create this game between june and today with 3 updates, is it your objective for the releases's schedule and how much time can i expect between the updates if you know it. thks
8/10.
v0.4
A humorous NTR with very high highs, but somewhat mediocre lows.
I really wanted to give this game a max score - the 'Good' stuff in this truly deserves it. But the 'Bad' stuff was just too big for me to ignore.
Good:
- Tone - 10/10.
NTR <=> Comedy.
The very best thing about this game.
An NTR can be a pretty dark genre - and here author for sure explores some extreme emotions and past traumas - but because the comedy is at the very center of this story, it never feels truly gross, depressing or disgusting.
- Relationships (of the main couple) - 10/10.
The couple loves each other. It's not some empty relationship just for the sake of checking out an NTR box. Their funny/caring little moments are incredibly cute, and not just some padding between sex that you want to skip. You feel for these two freaks of nature.
- Sex scenes (of the main heroine) - 10/10.
From teasing, innuendos, and character turmoil to the flow and tempo switches - almost everything with Freya is pure electrifying enjoyment.
Bad:
- Sex scenes.
-_-
Half of ALL the sex scenes - with Mom - are complete side stories that have nothing to do with the main plot. These are just fanfics.
And another half - with the sister - has absolutely 0 emotional investment from her. There are just some gifs of her fucking appearing out of nowhere and no one on the screen cares about what's going on - until... she just becomes a malicious bitch? There's some glimmer of possible tension for her after the hospital - but it's quickly squashed and she goes back to be her unpleasant self.
Not very sexy of her.
And that is 'a bit' of a problem when almost ALL of the sex scenes in the game are either her, or her mom's meaningless cameos.
- 'Bad choices'.
"You want to behave like a decent human being? No content for you~"
"Oh, want more content? Act like a piece of shit."
Classic.
Dude, you have antagonists for a reason. Several of them! Use them if you need something bad to happen to create the drama.
Why the fuck are you forcing Ugly to destroy his own relationship, while antagonists just sit on their balls doing nothing - and picking up what's falling from the sky? These relationships are important. See what I listed in the good stuff? There won't be any NTR without them.
It would be just like with the sister - mindless fucking. And I can go on pornhub for that. No need to sit for hours in the game.
But overall:
Hot, cute, and funny.
Highly recommend it even with the 'bad' stuff listed.
Most importantly: the author showed that he CAN write hot scenes and character tension - he just doesn't do it for the sister. For some reason.
And he CAN write the adorable relationships for the couple - he just uses MC instead of the antagonists to create the drama. For some reason.
He can do everything.
So I'm looking forward to the future of his stories.
//This is my review. Copied here for discussion cos this site does not allow commenting on the reviews.
Everyone seems to complain about this…it’s literally the fourth update. Give it time. Other characters need to be introduced/developed. The pacing is perfect.
Enjoy the ride.
It's far from "perfect pacing", but it's clear with how many times you've responded in here defending the game, and your pfp and your sig are about the game you are FAR from unbiased.
"Everyone" complains about this because it's egregious compared to other games in this category (NTR type games), and the dev is actively giving people what they are repeating they DON'T want (the constant sex with the sister and mom, it's over the top with the sister), and giving noooooothing of what they do (Freya actually doing anything without having ADHD and wandering off screen the second it pretends anything is going to happen with her).
This is what you do with the first update to tease, the second to hook you to come back with the promise "it will happen soon" at most, but the third time it's silly. The 4th, sorry you are trolling. It's not like the game is lacking sex scenes, and that's why people are doing a "wtf?!" because it has tons of sex scenes, and zero with the only thing people are here for and lots of what they are telling the dev they don't.
It's far from "perfect pacing", but it's clear with how many times you've responded in here defending the game, and your pfp and your sig are about the game you are FAR from unbiased.
"Everyone" complains about this because it's egregious compared to other games in this category (NTR type games), and the dev is actively giving people what they are repeating they DON'T want (the constant sex with the sister and mom, it's over the top with the sister), and giving noooooothing of what they do (Freya actually doing anything without having ADHD and wandering off screen the second it pretends anything is going to happen with her).
This is what you do with the first update to tease, the second to hook you to come back with the promise "it will happen soon" at most, but the third time it's silly. The 4th, sorry you are trolling. It's not like the game is lacking sex scenes, and that's why people are doing a "wtf?!" because it has tons of sex scenes, and zero with the only thing people are here for and lots of what they are telling the dev they don't.
The MC is much in love with his gf, but one day some evil perverted wizard appears and finds it funny to mess with his relationship, he shrinked the MC's cock and tries everything to make his gf cheat or cuck her MC bf. But if the MC is smart enough he drinks all those potions and undergo the consequences, thus seeing illusions of his gf being fucked by his bully, the drinks does that. So it either suffering the illusions, see his gf do it for real with his bully or have her cheat behind his back.
Naw the guy needs to chill. The dude was giving pretty legitimate feedback at first, and was a patreon (which I'd say 99% of people in here aren't), but the dev came at him sideways because his game is being criticized fairly rationally and calmly (The guy isn't insulting anyone or even dropping a single curse word, let alone being flat out rude).
The guy is just talking a lot in here responding to people, ya know much like you are, only difference is you are sucking up and they aren't, so somehow they should be "called out" for their "bullshit", but you totally shouldn't and no one should dare criticize the game?
Naw the guy needs to chill. The dude was giving pretty legitimate feedback at first, and was a patreon (which I'd say 99% of people in here aren't), but the dev came at him sideways because his game is being criticized fairly rationally and calmly (The guy isn't insulting anyone or even dropping a single curse word, let alone being flat out rude).
The guy is just talking a lot in here responding to people, ya know much like you are, only difference is you are sucking up and they aren't, so somehow they should be "called out" for their "bullshit", but you totally shouldn't and no one should dare criticize the game?
Ok...fair enough dude. I think the Dev laid it out pretty well with what he was insulted by. Obviously at the end of the day is really none of my business.
I don't know about sucking up, but I won't deny I'm a Freya simp haha
Look, I'm not a cunt. I just came across as one (maybe a couple times)
This guy seriously stated "here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist"
And I tried to answer that this is not so by showing many scenes which are NOT illusions.
Guess what? I didn't even see a word against it.
Obvious (?) statement n2:
The NTR gourmet: only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger.
Me: *a bunch of scenes are shown.
*mentioning her 'friendship' with samuel, her squirting in her boyfriend's face, the gym and the toilet scenes etc.
*stating this game is slowburn and it's making its debut at the end of June.
*asking what kind of scenes are expected.
Look at the renders I quoted above (even if I have no hope...).
And then let me ask you, what kind of scenes do you expect in a game that claims to be slowburn, released at the end of June?
I expect a proper answer to that (but again, I have no hope.).
I don't know if anyone has already posted here, but here are the wallpapers from when I was still on the Patreon for this game. (FMC seems to only get attention for the wallpapers)
NTR <=> Comedy.
The very best thing about this game.
An NTR can be a pretty dark genre - and here author for sure explores some extreme emotions and past traumas - but because the comedy is at the very center of this story, it never feels truly gross, depressing or disgusting.
Unless I misunderstood the massage scene she basically got stripped and mildly sexually felt up then a finger in the mouth, she did nothing, but she decked the other masseur. Why, did I miss something or does this fall to he's black. Just asking kind of confused with that scene was it explained why she handled it different.
Unless I misunderstood the massage scene she basically got stripped and mildly sexually felt up then a finger in the mouth, she did nothing, but she decked the other masseur. Why, did I miss something or does this fall to he's black. Just asking kind of confused with that scene was it explained why she handled it different.
Either she’s just a whore, or they’ll tell us more about their past relationship. But a lot of the scenes are very strange. At least laugh at your boyfriend and his pants. like at home you couldn’t tell him to put on something else... No, let’s laugh at him together with the bull.
You didn't understand the message. They are in a relationship and you can openly say that he looks funny in these pants. Don't ask if he's sure. It’s stupid to be offended by all the messages in which people don’t agree with your logic. Keep it simple.
Guys, let the devs do whatever they wants with their game. Its their game.
If you somehow dislike it, or feels that this game is illogical or something, than don't play it. Raising Phallus, you have an incredible game here, so keep up the excellent work and don't let anyone pull you down.
