The project has grown a lot the last few updates, the new content should generally be polished and finished.
It is very high on the priority list to get the game into beta and make savefiles compatible between major update.
Thank you, I forgot about that part.
Can't wait for content to kick off with her. Though it seems like that's not likely even for v10. Wouldn't mind some stages of her weight gain even just at Bunny Bites from eating there to hold us over till story content is added.
Hello. Can i translate your game in to Russian language? And can u upload game with Russian language into Steam?
I'll give the current version a run-through and see if it's been updated; been a solid eight months since my last attempt. Will post here when I finish up.
Amber does not have a stage 3 event in the update.
I intend to do translations when the game is finished, because currently there are still too many things changing with every update that it would be wasted to translations already.
Not all girls will end up with big bellies. Apple, Pear, Hourglass are just the main bodytypes of the characters, but there is still a lot of variation within those 3 types. Hari and Trista are very heavily pear shaped, especially Trista, while Bonnie is more a hybrid between pear and apple. If I didn't do that, there would only really be three types of gain in the game. I try to make it so there are plenty of shapes and sizes so that everyone has some character they like.
Alright, finished up. Looks like most of the WiP stuff from my last runthrough is gone. Only one I found was Luna's repeatable scene after feeding her a specific amount. That said, if you're open to constructive criticism, a lot of what's there now isn't much more than WiP. The spoiler has more details per scene, but the gist of it is that the average sex scene in the game has roughly 30 lines of text to it. There's a few of them (also noted) that are particularly good, but for many scenes it's just some quick dirty talk thrown in as if to do the bare minimum to accompany the scene. Like I mentioned previously, it *is* a visual novel - the novel part's just as important. The writing here isn't *bad*, it's just very bare-bones, like it was rushed through in favor of focusing on the animations. Don't get me wrong, the animations are great (the new Cayenne shower scene is amazing on that front), but in a world where you can find tons of amazing, voiced animations, sometimes lasting longer than it would take to read all of the scenes here, a VN's writing is what can make it stick out.
Thank you for the feedback on the sex scene dialogue.
That one was definitely one of the better ones; a good scene's got a good mix of descriptor lines & dialogue - excessive dirty talk might be one of the "unrealistic" parts of porn in games like this in particular, but when your only option for conveying info is text, it can definitely get things to the next level. It also might be worth a mini-hunt for writers with experience with the genre. It's a bit under-represented in most media, but there's some stories featuring bigger gals and feeding on sites like literotica; not all of them actively accept commissions, but I've seen it used to good effect to find solid writers for a bit cheaper than a full-blown studio. It's got the added benefit of having instant access to samples of their work, too.
The core of the game is about the body appreciation, not t3h sexx0rz, so it never seemed out of place to me that the scenes were short and a little stiff. At first, I didn't like Cayenne, but in the new stages and the new shower scene...
And Trista changed a lot too (especially with her pose before the sauna ): it's not necessarily a "teasing" game, but the non-sex scenes are already erotic, so being able to visit Bonnie sometimes and powerlift her on her couch with your pelvis is just a cherry on top. All depends on what we're here for - ultimately it *is* a smut game, albeit with an atypical secondary focus. While you won't disappoint everyone by letting certain aspects of it slip, this isn't one of those cases where you have to sacrifice another part of the game to make it better & maximize your audience & appeal. The sex scenes can be great right alongside the rest of it, no good reason for them not to be IMOThe core of the game is about the body appreciation, not t3h sexx0rz, so it never seemed out of place to me that the scenes were short and a little stiff. At first, I didn't like Cayenne, but in the new stages and the new shower scene...
