Crushstation

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The truth is that it is disappointing. The story, due to its theme, engages more because of how it is written by the environment itself. It would be much more believable and accurate if it had been written, as someone in this forum has already suggested, that the protagonist was a tourist who really runs out of money and is forced to work in the brothel being recruited by an international intelligence agency , but in the end, it is as it is. Apart from this, which is obvious, is what is disappointing about how is written. More of the same as a waitress, okay okay, from my point of view I liked it but... just a sex scene? Weren't there three sex scenes? It is written in the author's roadmap. Once again it deceives its sponsors and further strengthens the already almost firm conviction of not supporting the project due to the lack of seriousness and empathy for those who financially support the project.
A shame.
Poor and disappointing update.
Sorry you didn't like it.
 

Crushstation

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So Crush isn't even writing all those green dots himself and it's still been how many months...? :unsure:
Incorporating more ideas and feedback doesn't always speed things up (it just improves them). In fact, it can kind of slow things down – consider the process with Behbeh. I need to have produced a draft, spoken with Behbeh, then updated the draft to incorporate her feedback.

That takes longer than just producing the draft (because it's two extra stages).

Sometimes it does speed things up. Lost Engineer wrote the dialogue for the mamasan scene based on just a rough outline in the storyboard. This was great but it's not always how it works.
 
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Crushstation

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Okay, I just popped in here to clean up the OP. I hope I answered some of the points raised, but if anybody wants to talk to me directly I'm Crushstation#8544 on Discord.

(I don't come here regularly, so I may not see or respond to replies here.)
 
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ScornedBeef

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Is there any meaningful variation in this update? Either from new or old choices? I'm guessing no but i don't want to miss any 'hidden' content.

(Not to hate on small choices with little to no impact. They can add nice little vibe shifts and a sense of ownership, and nicely break up the click click click from passage to passage in straight line.)
 

CassieBare

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Nope. Not that I could tell. This update opens two 'side quests' which are opt-in/out, and there's no reason to opt out. Probably implemented in the future where you either do the quest or it jumps in Twine to after the quest if you opt-out.

Still 100% railroad with flavor 'choices'
 
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afc2112

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I was a bit disappointed with this update... I'd probably suggest waiting for the next one if you can wait.
 

cd13

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I kinda also disappointed with this game and direction it currently takes. I do not care much about update frequency because I do not pay for the access and therefore it is not really my place to complain about it. But what is disappointing for me is a change of narrative direction between the Prologue and actual story.

Prologue was refreshingly normal in most of its scenes. Young woman was doing sexy things in it because she wanted to and it is exceedingly rare among porn games. But the main story goes on the well-trodded road of corruption which is almost every single game with female protagonist on this site. I guess it sells but it also very very boring.

Female protagonist with a fucking agency is much more interesting for me than number nine thousand doll to be abused and pressured into situations she doesn't want to be in.
 

okfairenough

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Prologue was refreshingly normal in most of its scenes. Young woman was doing sexy things in it because she wanted to and it is exceedingly rare among porn games. But the main story goes on the well-trodded road of corruption which is almost every single game with female protagonist on this site. I guess it sells but it also very very boring.

Female protagonist with a fucking agency is much more interesting for me than number nine thousand doll to be abused and pressured into situations she doesn't want to be in.
Yes, I have the same complaint. What drew me to the game initially was the idea that our agent was a badass who kicks ass and also uses her sexuality to make things go her way. Instead, we get a character who is docile, ready to be used and abused like the million other female protagonist games we see on here.
 
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If you don't get the information you need from a random guy on the internet who has nothing to do with the project, I'm Crushstation#8544 on Discord
Hey. It's not just about getting answers(which is great), but rather a process of discussing topic at hand. I assume you're not going to spend your day going back and forth with me while discussing 'Female Agent'? You're working at the game. But maybe this guy will. :unsure:

It's an invitation to a conversation, as much as thought process.
Journey, not a destination.
Thanks for answering.
 
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leg28

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This is astute. I actually do hope to go through the existing content and add in width/backstory callbacks. Of course, this will take time, because work takes time.
it took 3 years to build titanic, we are here for 5 years and we are far away from interior decoration. so, yes it took time.
and you are again repeating mistakes. now you are again multiplying trivial choices like lipsticks, eyeliners, mascara, shoes, panties... which have no impact on the game and some of them are pretty hard to see on mc's avatar. waist of time
your time management is at least poor or you do it in purpose to extend game's life. years spent on intro, adding and removing options and yet basically nothing happened. 1 year of real work (mostly when mc reached bangkok) and 4 years of idle experimenting.
 

lexlexx

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lets not forgot "hey guys i'm so poor at time managment that i need to spilt this update that i have worked on for four months in to 5 parts" don't get me wrong i really like his writing and the idea of FA but jesus man sort you self out.
 

Doppelgang

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I count 5 parts to be released
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If you'd actually read the first line of the post you've attached, you'd see that it says "we're going to release the episode in two parts". And then he informs about the contents of those two parts, before he writes about three additional side quests that he also gives us the release schedule for. Those were never the same episode. They're the next ones.

And what's the problem with releasing it in two parts, thus giving us a chance to play some of it earlier? How is that of all things a proof of poor time management?

It's not difficult to find things to criticize about the development of the game, but the massive circlejerk obsession on this thread to find new things to ridicule every single time a new update is posted, is just a bit pathetic to be honest.
 
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