HTML Female Agent [v1.20.1p] [Crushstation]

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Having it be more streamlined with a single story/choice path would also ease up on Crush's workload/months of storyboarding, delivering on a solid, coherent product in a shorter time.

But...it's already a single story/choice! There was a point to be made when the lifepath was a think, that there were pretty different branches (between the country of origin+how uni happened, there was a decent amount of variation).

But currently, the "choices" you get are either "Don't do this" leading to a Game Over or "Do this but in a slightly different way" that simply adds a bit of extra flavour text for a couple of slides.

 

[leg28]

4 months of “I’m making great progress”, only for him to deliver half an update with some bizarre story about his massive blue balls making it difficult for him to chase a run

this is nothing new, it is his trade-mark

Of all the pity posts he makes to excuse his incompetence, that’s the stupidest one yet.

i don't believe it is about incompetence here. business as usual

 

[TheOnlyRockSolid]

If this was made into an erotic spy-thriller novel, the writing's probably good enough to be a best seller.
Having it be more streamlined with a single story/choice path would also ease up on Crush's workload/months of storyboarding, delivering on a solid, coherent product in a shorter time.

I can see it work as a lil' 300 page book

- Ch. 1 - Introduction - Childhood, College, Sexual exploration and academic achievement
- Ch. 2 - Recruitment, training, (hypno?)
- Ch. 3 - First mission: Dubai
- Ch. 4 - Bangkok, first nights, bar job, recon
- Ch. 5 - Bangkok, first contact, infiltrating seedy underground crime scene
....

Maybe even start the story in media res, Bangkok, and intercut it with flashbacks to the MCs childhood and agency training between chapters

Don't give him ideas to sidetrack to, we want the game done first

 

[afc2112]

If this was made into an erotic spy-thriller novel, the writing's probably good enough to be a best seller.

I know many people in the publishing industry, as well as a number of published authors. I don't see it.

He would just butt heads with the editor and never get it done...His writing style would need a lot of massaging/ editing and I don't think he'll take it well.

 

[voerman]

Everyone butts heads with their editor. It is the nature of the job.

 

[afc2112]

Everyone butts heads with their editor. It is the nature of the job.

Right but he can't even write for himself when he can do whatever he pleases. There's no way he's writing a novel even if he had 20 years to write it.

This is mostly repetitive and he's still struggling to put it down on paper.

 

[Kevin Smarts]

I know many people in the publishing industry, as well as a number of published authors. I don't see it.

He would just butt heads with the editor and never get it done...His writing style would need a lot of massaging/ editing and I don't think he'll take it well.

Unrelated but I have a pitch.
Its about this girl with basically no emotions and she has to pick between this ancient vampire who goes to her school for some reason and a werewolf that just takes his top off all the God damn time, to the point that you think he's just her confident gay friend or something because otherwise it'd be super uncomfortable.
Its called: Late evening just before the sun sets.

Let me know what you think.

 

[richarddlopatin]

At least it's been out of the limbo for a while now. And seemingly hitting (close to) their goals. That's good enough for a freeloader like me heh

Btw the new version is out on their discord.

 

[Deleted member 664455]

Here is the new update in downloadable version
1.16.1 ver.

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[Crushstation]

Yeah, I find it really hard to write. It never comes out as well as I want it to. Thanks for the supportive comments as usual F95, stay classy you guys

 

[rbx4]

Just saying, if I had to choose between hearing only 1) accurate praise, 2) inaccurate praise, 3) accurate critique, or 4) inaccurate critique, I would choose accurate critique. Nobody learns much from praise whether accurate or inaccurate, and it is quickly forgotten after the first word of critique is heard from anyone. Critique will always be louder than praise, due to human nature.

Somewhere, deep inside, we know that we learn better from mistakes even when we hate hearing about them, and accurate critique can point out mistakes that we had not noticed. Sure, nobody likes inaccurate critique, and everyone, everywhere, feels misunderstood. It takes some inner strength to ignore the inaccurate critiques to find and benefit from the accurate critique. It doesn't matter what I say about praise: it will be forgotten soon regardless of what I say.

 

[TheGodUncle]

Yeah, I find it really hard to write. It never comes out as well as I want it to. Thanks for the supportive comments as usual F95, stay classy you guys

Some of the comments are shitty but what can you expect after five years of development that got content deleted from the game and only saw it get to Bangkok with just a few scenes available. Is blind praise the only acceptable thing?

 

[eightypercent]

The past is the past... I, for one, thank the Dev and enjoyed the new version. Do I wish the VN was finished already? Sure I do. But it isn't, and I cannot do much about it. Reading the many complaining posts on this thread just gets me down. There is so much in RL that needs changing, so I tend to choose my battles, perhaps more wisely? Keep it real.

 

[fortuna95]

Show your MC before date with Max...here is mine:

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[Nope]

Some of the better authors from literotica should take notes from Crush. Write erotic fiction, give it some meaningless choices, call it a game, put it up on Patreon, get paid.

 

[TheGodUncle]

The past is the past... I, for one, thank the Dev and enjoyed the new version. Do I wish the VN was finished already? Sure I do. But it isn't, and I cannot do much about it. Reading the many complaining posts on this thread just gets me down. There is so much in RL that needs changing, so I tend to choose my battles, perhaps more wisely? Keep it real.

It's been five years and the game has just crawled along to where it is now. People will be rightfully annoyed at the fact that the game just hasn't gone anywhere. Some of the comments here are needlessly negative but it's logical that there are more negative than positive comments considering where the game is now.

If Crush doesn't like the comments he(?) recieves here then just stop coming here.

If I want to change something in real life I do that. People will complain on the porn piracy website if their complaints are related to something on that porn piracy website. Real life problems have nothing to do with this.

 

[okfairenough]

Over the last five years, this game has made over 350,000 dollars. That seems a lot of money for a few pages of text and some 2D sprites. Where is all the money going?

 

[zedascove]

Does this game feature a few pics or is it 99% text?

 

[okokok]

Does this game feature a few pics or is it 99% text?

It has a paperdoll system for the mc and pictures for locations and other characters but it's still about 90% text

 

[LoneRanger11]

Female Agent 1.16.1

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