Having to delay all or part of something is literally the definition of poor time management.And what's the problem with releasing it in two parts, thus giving us a chance to play some of it earlier? How is that of all things a proof of poor time management?
But nothing has been delayed. No release date was given before the decision to split the update in two parts. If you're looking for something to legitimately criticize in that post and the release schedule, one could've pointed to how the time before the first early access and between the general release and the second early access equals four weeks, while the previous Patreon post mentioned three weeks to complete the writing—and that a total of four weeks to polish the early access versions into general releases seems exaggerated. (See, I did the job the poster I was replying to could have done.)Having to delay all or part of something is literally the definition of poor time management.
For how little content there is in each update (and I can’t stress that point enough), there’s no excuse for it to take so long to release updates, never mind splitting them into even smaller chunks.
4 months of “I’m making great progress”, only for him to deliver half an update with some bizarre story about his massive blue balls making it difficult for him to chase a runaway dog?
Of all the pity posts he makes to excuse his incompetence, that’s the stupidest one yet.
But...it's already a single story/choice! There was a point to be made when the lifepath was a think, that there were pretty different branches (between the country of origin+how uni happened, there was a decent amount of variation).Having it be more streamlined with a single story/choice path would also ease up on Crush's workload/months of storyboarding, delivering on a solid, coherent product in a shorter time.
this is nothing new, it is his trade-mark4 months of “I’m making great progress”, only for him to deliver half an update with some bizarre story about his massive blue balls making it difficult for him to chase a run
i don't believe it is about incompetence here. business as usualOf all the pity posts he makes to excuse his incompetence, that’s the stupidest one yet.
Don't give him ideas to sidetrack to, we want the game done firstIf this was made into an erotic spy-thriller novel, the writing's probably good enough to be a best seller.
Having it be more streamlined with a single story/choice path would also ease up on Crush's workload/months of storyboarding, delivering on a solid, coherent product in a shorter time.
I can see it work as a lil' 300 page book
- Ch. 1 - Introduction - Childhood, College, Sexual exploration and academic achievement
- Ch. 2 - Recruitment, training, (hypno?)
- Ch. 3 - First mission: Dubai
- Ch. 4 - Bangkok, first nights, bar job, recon
- Ch. 5 - Bangkok, first contact, infiltrating seedy underground crime scene
....
Maybe even start the story in media res, Bangkok, and intercut it with flashbacks to the MCs childhood and agency training between chapters
I know many people in the publishing industry, as well as a number of published authors. I don't see it.If this was made into an erotic spy-thriller novel, the writing's probably good enough to be a best seller.
Right but he can't even write for himself when he can do whatever he pleases. There's no way he's writing a novel even if he had 20 years to write it.Everyone butts heads with their editor. It is the nature of the job.
Unrelated but I have a pitch.I know many people in the publishing industry, as well as a number of published authors. I don't see it.
He would just butt heads with the editor and never get it done...His writing style would need a lot of massaging/ editing and I don't think he'll take it well.
Some of the comments are shitty but what can you expect after five years of development that got content deleted from the game and only saw it get to Bangkok with just a few scenes available. Is blind praise the only acceptable thing?Yeah, I find it really hard to write. It never comes out as well as I want it to. Thanks for the supportive comments as usual F95, stay classy you guys