why do you need to make me watch people fuck and Im just watching ..... I DIDNT EVEN CONTINUE AND I DELETED THE GAME SAD SHE WAS A GOOD FEMDOM GAME BE FOR CUM EAT AT THE BARGame was never abandoned, the progress was just extremely slow due to real life reasons. To answer the Queen question: Soon but not very soon.
In your rating you mentioned that the grammar is a bit off; obviously I do not know which sentences you are referring to but in non-formal writing you are allowed to bend the rules of grammar for many reasons e.g. realistic conversation (although some people in real life speak with impeccable grammar) flow, shock/surprised etc. If this was an essay, research paper or thesis then of course you have to keep within the strict rules of grammar on top of the even stricter rules of the assignment/assessment.
If I did make a grammar error/spelling mistake that does not seem intentional feel free to screenshot that sentence and dm me so I can look over it a fix it. Renpy does not have an inhouse spellcheck or grammar checker so simple stuff is easy to miss.