I used to love Dealer, but she got removed from the game after the demo version...
Who's the second domme? I only remember Alice from the first non-demo version of Under the Witch, but I don't think I played any of the subsequent updates.
From my memory I think it was Dealer and Alice your sister. There's that shop keeper too but I'm not sure if she counts. As far as design goes I just really like Alice (the blonde girl) a lotI used to love Dealer, but she got removed from the game after the demo version...
I like Dealer more myself (I'm not that much into bbw or girls with extremely wide/large thighs), but last time I tried it the content with Dealer had been removed from Under the Witch... I guess I'll try it again to see what they added in the last few updates! Cheers!
Honestly I feel a little bad when I see fights like this. I've been modding games and making my own set of experimental games for a few years now. I've also studied a little bit of game design in my [redacted] Design major. I hate seeing new devs getting demotivated. Criticism may be a harsh and people are giving really bad scores and it might seem completely out of the blue for you but as someone who has studied and written papers about game development I can tell a few difficult observations about your game (and I swear to you I'm not hating on it, I have to no reason to troll anyone, paprticularly a femdom game dev): I'm sorry but what you've done in terms of writing is probably not even long enough to be considered a short game. There are some principles in script writing that are true regardless of the medium. Film, book, game, whatever. And it's twice as important when the game is in a visual novel style, where writing is EVERYTHING. Even if you take the pictures out, the dialogue should have everything needed to drive a story home with a raging boner throughout. And unfortunately, the writing is just not present. We don't have enough background information, there's no world building, character building, character DEVELOPMENT (which is way more important than character building itself), story progression (flow, pacing, buildups, points of focus, climaxes). Everything's seemingly cut from your game. It's difficult to relate to your story. If I were you I'd search online for screenplay writing tips. And yes, i'm talking about movie screenplays. It will help you tremendously.I have done many hours to make the game, I'm angry, it's so easy to break a game, it's a demo, except to say it's shit my game in the forums, goodbye, just make a game its so easy
I read your analysis and it's interesting
Mostly I'm against the idea of making QTEs so that missing one button leaves you defeated. I'm not against harder games, but creating an attack that one hit kills you cause you didn't do a QTE is not an idea I consider good. The rest of the fight mechanic is kinda generic TOT/Domina stuff imo, but with broken English and lack of interesting dialogue options I must say I prefer ToT much more than this game. Or A New Life in Submission, which I prefer even more.
While I don't like her look, I don't consider it a bad thing for the game. I think that these type of games should have a group of varied LIs so that bigger group of players could be satisfied. So I don't mind that we have LI that's unattractive to me as long as there's going to be at some point LI that I will like.
Fair enough and Interesting points, though I think I have to disagree with the writing compression to ToT and PS. To me personally
You're right. My memory was messed up by the fact that when I started playing ToT the game already had few dommes. So yes, Scarlet is definitely not the best starting point, though personally I think that because of shorter dialogues, more compressed plot, more prevalent dialogue choices and addition of minigame (looking for her shoes) ToT's 1st domina experience is more dynamic and for me personally less boring/more engaging. I am by no means a big fan of ToT and I don't consider it even close to being one of my fav games here, but I found the dialogues of PS too long and not very interesting. I'm sure however that at least partially it's because of the abundance of various mistakes. If the dialogues would be more polished perhaps I'd enjoy the game more.
From my part I just don't get the combat mechanic's appeal, as we already discussed this several times, I find it counter-intuitive to be put in a position to fight against a dominant female. The Mistresses of the Forest type mechanics of "fighting", where the whole combat mechanics is inverted to serve the intuitive logic of winning by employing submission techniques is revolutionary in the limited terms of RPGMs which wants to use combat in femdom. Classic combat would make more sense with a dominant female MC tho. Just my nth two cents on this issue.
That's all completely understandable and valid. To me I always remind myself that a lot of these devs make these games by themselves with limited resources, time, and most of the time are just making these games out of peer passion. So obviously it might not have the polish like other game developers got, so I tend to filter out some writing mistakes here and there. Granted there are some REALLY bad games out there with piss poor English skills. (PS pretty good compare to the rest)
Wasn't trying to be ironic at all. It seems wrong to fap while others are fleeing for their lives. Dunno. It certainly took my libido away.
I guess after a few nuclear bombs fall, this will not be a huge issue anymore. I am sorry to say, but it looks like we won't be part of the galactic federation of planets any time soon....[nor live to be old and even grumpier than we are].
In Star Trek universe World War III started in 2026 and lasted till 2053 so not all is lost.
I wouldn't be much of a centrist if I wouldn't show a little flexibility in playing to the crowds. Centrists who lose their adaptability should get in the business of supplying revolutionaries with rope.Hey now, that's just Jaike applying the well tried and tested policy of geostrategic appeasement, otherwise known as "giving the Caesar his due", so give him a break with the eyerolls! That "except for femdom" disclaimer at the end of his post is just appeasement to make sure that you, the founder/Caesar of this thread, do not get mad at him for bringing up Trump in any association with femdom again!
Wouldn't dare to impose imperialism on this topic! And it's she/her, by the way.Not really. I think helping in practical ways like donating money for refugees is more important than feeling guilt or awkwardness about going on with your life. It's your own life, you should keep living it and not stop doing things you like because things are shit elsewhere. Even if that is just across the border.
U have no idea, I still have nightmares
I can donate blood, the money part is a thing I struggle with for some years now.
I may sometimes be a "heater", but real hate is not my forte, it takes a different set of talents I guess.As for getting called a "hater", I think that was your title as the Cerberus of CBT going before you.
Yeah, they could, but nah - I already "benefited" some threads to the point of parody. This site was a specific kind of growing up story for me. It made me 7% more cynical...or rather a notch less enthusiastic than I was. I thought the world was made up of butterflies, rainbows and incredibly sexy femdom. It turned out the butterflies were moths, the rainbows were chemical spills and femdom was actually maledom....so
