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VN Ren'Py Femdom secrets of Kates heart (femdom/hardcore femdom/sissification/cuckoldry) [Dev Thread]
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fanboi
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Looks amazing! Just a quick note, "lose" and "loser" are correct (not "loose" and "looser"). Thanks for sharing!
LadyBoyJay
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Lovely artwork! The design looks good! A few minor typos - seriouslly = seriously, aleready = already, nex = next.
Edit - Correct me if I am wrong but I think you got the names of Elise and Elanor switched around. The texting is with Elise but it should be with Elanor, right? Or are the names on their profiles switched around?
Edit - Correct me if I am wrong but I think you got the names of Elise and Elanor switched around. The texting is with Elise but it should be with Elanor, right? Or are the names on their profiles switched around?
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Very promising! I dig the teasing/humiliating vibe in the demo and the interface and interactivity look amazing. Very nice animation in the main menu too.
The spelling of the fMC's name should be Emily instead of Emilly, right?
The spelling of the fMC's name should be Emily instead of Emilly, right?
Very good start! Love the layout of the main menu and the fact that you can check to see what attires you’ve unlocked for the female characters. Also, all of them have an ending, it seems like? Do clarify on that.
The creepy masks when you see MC and Emily in the front threw me off, but if there’s a reason for that to be there, then I won’t mark it against you.
Last but not least, the demo. It’s a very good introduction by having Emily’s sister trick MC into sending a dick picture. Some typos, but nothing serious, so don’t stress too much on that. Oh, and I’m curious about the hearts for the MC in the top left.
All in all, a great start! The game has a lot of promise and now I’m more hyped for the release build!
The creepy masks when you see MC and Emily in the front threw me off, but if there’s a reason for that to be there, then I won’t mark it against you.
Last but not least, the demo. It’s a very good introduction by having Emily’s sister trick MC into sending a dick picture. Some typos, but nothing serious, so don’t stress too much on that. Oh, and I’m curious about the hearts for the MC in the top left.
All in all, a great start! The game has a lot of promise and now I’m more hyped for the release build!
That phone chat was so funny! Looks great. I have to agree with other fans, an amazing job!
Thank you all for the feedback; you are correct that the spelling is all over the place. The only exception is "Looser," which was intentional - I wanted it to be spelled "loooser!" to convey a mocking tone, but somehow failed 
. This is largely due to the fact that the text was written at the last moment. Most of my time was spent on planning, designing, bending Ren'Py to my will, and, most time-consuming of all, rendering (I already have way more renders completed). Unfortunately, I haven't written any dialogue yet, which is a bit sad to admit. However, the most important thing for me was to build a solid framework that I could populate with content later on. I aspire to start a Patreon one day and provide updates as consistently as possible. The more effort I invest in the first release, the less likely it is that I will face delays or, even worse, abandon the project. Even though I'm not a native speaker, I will try to squash all the spelling bugs before releasing it into the wild, including the naming inconsistencies. like those pointed out by LadyBoyJay .
. This is largely due to the fact that the text was written at the last moment. Most of my time was spent on planning, designing, bending Ren'Py to my will, and, most time-consuming of all, rendering (I already have way more renders completed). Unfortunately, I haven't written any dialogue yet, which is a bit sad to admit. However, the most important thing for me was to build a solid framework that I could populate with content later on. I aspire to start a Patreon one day and provide updates as consistently as possible. The more effort I invest in the first release, the less likely it is that I will face delays or, even worse, abandon the project. Even though I'm not a native speaker, I will try to squash all the spelling bugs before releasing it into the wild, including the naming inconsistencies. like those pointed out by LadyBoyJay .
I want to create as loose a connection to the previous title as possible, more of a nod towards Basium's great work, while also allowing myself to tell my story in my own way. This is especially true when you consider that another user, serious_quest, has taken on the even more ambitious task of remaking the original. I don't want to directly compete with that. My plan is to take this couple to places that I doubt he would explore. Also, you will be able to rename all the "E" girls to your liking or leave their default names.
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Thank you! Not all of the girls will have an ending. The "Ending possible?" indicator is there to inform you if, in the current moment of your main route/story, you are still able to reach that girl's ending.
I will think of a way to make it more clear from the beginning whether a girl has an ending at all. Although, who knows, maybe all the girls will end up with at least a minor ending of sorts.
Sorry for that, it was just an artistic choice. There will be no supernatural content in this project. It was supposed to symbolize the duality of their relationship: Emily looking innocent and loving on the outside, but on the inside enjoying every moment of the things she puts MC into. MC supposedly enjoying every moment of it, but also hating himself for it at times (hence tears through his smile).
The hearts represent MC's well-being, both physically and mentally. The more hardships he faces, like physical damage or mental stress, the more hearts will empty, and in their place, a thought about himself will appear.
It will impact some elements of the UI, like if MC has little self-esteem, he might think/feel that his penis is smaller than it really is. It might also impact some scenes and unlock/lock some dialogues. Although I won't go crazy on that part, as I wouldn't want to suddenly have to make 15 variations of each scene or dialogue option. So, it will matter from time to time or have just a minor impact on the scene most of the time. Some paths will also require you to go low on that front, but I will try to make it as simple as possible in terms of replayability or choice navigation.
Sweet! Definitely a lot of intriguing elements to be explored, so I look forward to all of it!
On the endings though, just so we're on the same page, there'll be three main routes: Sissification, hardcore femdom, and corruption. Most of the women have an ending. Some of the endings will be locked if you go on a particular route? And some of the women have more than one ending?
On the endings though, just so we're on the same page, there'll be three main routes: Sissification, hardcore femdom, and corruption. Most of the women have an ending. Some of the endings will be locked if you go on a particular route? And some of the women have more than one ending?
very much willing to donate to your Patreon to start playing soon. Keep up the great work!
Thank you for the video showing the interface and a snippet from the start.
I get and really like the intro interface. Please do not change it (at least from the first release). It hides and shows specific detail.
I also really really like the ideas you've implemented, and can already see how some parts can play out (very promising). From what I can see:
- The MC creates/ changes how things proceed based on their perception - junk size and emotional state directly correlating with how other characters will treat and interact with the MC (?)
- Emil(l)y being an angel - perhaps changing depending on choices
I've always seen the original game to have a lot of promise. I believe you also see this and am excited for (playing) what you create. Keep going!!
A small suggestion (that may already be in place) - perhaps only have the character details/ bio come up as they are introduced (i.e. when the audience first meet them).
I also think this would work better as a stand-alone, and not a continuation (as you say a year or so after the events of the other game)...
I'll repeat myself - please keep going!
Some will be locked by the main route, while others will be influenced by minor choices, events, or the player's state.
Thank you so much! I'm planning to launch a Patreon in the near future. Before the official launch, there will only be one $1 tier available, for those who want to throw a motivational coin to your Witcher. This tier will grant you the right to vote on various aspects, such as selecting a design for an Asian character, discussing kinks, etc. Additionally, supporters at this tier will likely enjoy 1-2 days of earlier access to the first release. After the initial release, more tiers will become available, but my current focus is on getting things started.
Yes, I want the UI to somewhat reflect the current state of the protagonist and change some interactions based on the state of your main character (MC). Of course, I can't add too many of them, as it will multiply all planned scenes to a ridiculous amount. So far, I plan to track only three variables regarding the MC's state. It's a tricky thing to balance, but I will give it a try.
Exactly the plan.- Emil(l)y being an angel - perhaps changing depending on choices
Yes, you won't see the bios of girls that you haven't met yet (not all were seen in the preview). That screen still needs a bit more polish, especially the fonts and some actual content (some renders shown won't make it to the final version as they were just placeholders).
Exactly my thinking, especially since the gameplay snippet was warmly welcomed. I'm starting to think that it would be safer for this project to sever ties from the previous title, at least by changing the official names of the characters and the title to 'Kate's Awakening' or just 'Your Kate' or whatever. Fans of the original will still be able to find some connections here and there and rename their characters back if they really want to
Thanks for the encouragement, really apreaciated!
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I'm sure none of the characters or the game itself were copyrighted in any way. You of course can do that to avoid confusion or out of respect, but rest assured you won't have legal problems anyway you go.
Thinking about rebranding, do you guys like any of these titles?
| 1. "Kate's Dominant Desires: Forbidden Love" |
| 2. "Forbidden Ecstasy: Kate's Femdom Fantasy" |
| 3. "The Dominance Dilemma: Kate's Forbidden Love Affair" |
| 4. "Femdom Fantasies: The Kate Chronicles" |
| 5. "Femdom Secrets of Kate's Heart" |
| 6. "Kate's Dominant Whispers: A Femdom Tale" |
| 7. "Chained Hearts: Kate's Femdom Journey" |
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I would recommend shorten them a lil bit, I think words like “femdom” or “dominant” are not necessary in the title
I think "femdom" is crucial, at least that's how I used to find femdom games before discovering this forum.