Well, that was... strange.
-Ok, a little bit of spoilers. First of all,
it's not actual incest. It's more like step-incest. Which is a shame. But hey, at least they really consider themselves family.
-I find it interesting that
the MC and Allison already had a past and it doesn't start everything relatively from 0. It's not something that's been seen a lot. While I personally prefer the romance as a whole to play out over the course of the story, it will be interesting to see a story where there was already something between the MC and the mom.
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Considering his past, a little more restraint in his attitude would have been nice. Every time he sees Allison he thinks about fucking her, when we saw that their relationship didn't end in the best way thanks to this. That's why I think it would have been better if the MC would have been a bit more measured/calm/relaxed.
-Allison (the mom) is incredibly beautiful and attractive imo. A real MILF at her finest. And, man... That beautiful hairy pussy is perfect.
-The sister's model looks pretty weird to me. I'm not much of a fan, honestly.
-The English definitely needs a polish. I'm not a native speaker but I think you can tell there's a lot of Google translator here.
-The MC is a weird combination of pervy and nice guy (kinda?) Overall, I didn't like the MC very much. Neither his model nor his personality. But in the dialogues at least he seems to really care about his family and loves Allison. I'd like to see a story more aimed at romance/love than lust or perversion. Seeing the romance tag here, I'm hopeful that this will happen.
-The pace felt very fast. I think a little more time to tell the story would have been better. It was just get home, remember what happened in the past and go to sleep.
Overall a very short 0.1 version. I would say it looks more like a demo. There are interesting ideas here as for a nice classic incest story. But I think it needs a lot of improvement. I wish you success in the development of the game!