VN Ren'Py Fleeting Memories [Update 1] [Lyrical Artistry]

[sexypeanut]

Gave this one a go.

Curious choice of narration in 3rd person instead of 1st person.
Some background music would make it a better experience!
There should be an option to reduce or remove the moan sounds.
The animation is TOP NOTCH! Very few games have them as fluid as these. Congratz!

Hovering the cursor on the buttons should show a tooltip box with their names


Janice is gorgeous and sexy, but she sure was a bitch when younger lol

I don't see the point of these.



I noticed the story is heavier than the usual slice of life AVNs. Interested in seeing more of it!

 

[Lerd0]

I don't see the point of these.

...how dare u.....

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

Gave this one a go.

Curious choice of narration in 3rd person instead of 1st person.
Some background music would make it a better experience!
There should be an option to reduce or remove the moan sounds.
The animation is TOP NOTCH! Very few games have them as fluid as these. Congratz!

Hovering the cursor on the buttons should show a tooltip box with their names
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Janice is gorgeous and sexy, but she sure was a bitch when younger lol

I don't see the point of these.
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I noticed the story is heavier than the usual slice of life AVNs. Interested in seeing more of it!

Glad you liked it, man. And there is an option to select background music from the music tab, man

 

[LinkBox88]

I really liked the start. This game has quite a few things going for it so far. Good story, nice character designs, sex scenes are hot(the sfx really elevate those scenes) and well animated.

Based on the choices it kinda seems like we're going to have to choose between the love interests, which is a shame. I like both of them but I'm not the type to do multiple playthroughs so I'll probably end up missing out on one of the paths.

Still, I'm impressed so far. Keep it up!

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

I really liked the start. This game has quite a few things going for it so far. Good story, nice character designs, sex scenes are hot(the sfx really elevate those scenes) and well animated.

Based on the choices it kinda seems like we're going to have to choose between the love interests, which is a shame. I like both of them but I'm not the type to do multiple playthroughs so I'll probably end up missing out on one of the paths.

Still, I'm impressed so far. Keep it up!

Thanks for your kind words, man

 

[sexypeanut]

Glad you liked it, man. And there is an option to select background music from the music tab, man

Oh, lol! Never seen that option in an AVN before.

 

[ReaperZ0ne]

so is there gonna be any consequence for persuing everyone in the same save or anything like that ?

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

so is there gonna be any consequence for persuing everyone in the same save or anything like that ?

U mean negative consequences, if u choose to pursue more than one girl with the given choices... no, there wont be any negative consequences...
(But do know, its not a harem game.)

 

[Mark Macabre]

As the one writing the story: IF you have something constructive to say about the writing, i'm open to all criticism, as this is the first project i'm writing for.
But it might take a while between updates, as i'm the only writer for the story so far. So blame for that is (some of the times) Due to me being busy with other projects, and normal work.

I'll do what i can though, and I hope to entertain y'all with Lyrical Artistry

 

[DevinHesi]

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Hey, guys...

Hope you all are doing well...

I don't plan to make this post a long one. So, let's get directly to the point...

My writer and I was thinking about it for quite some time and finally came to an idea where it may look a bit logical, I guess?...

What I want to tell is....

Harem will be added in 'Fleeting Memories'

Indeed, harem, where all love interests will know of each other's relationship with the protagonist and will accept it.

it will be added but it will take place much later in the game. Though I am not talking about the epilogue. It will take place before that.

(Note: Unlike most other harem AVNs , in Fleeing Memories, the harem will not be that easy where the love interest would just accept it. The protagonist will have to earn it, and the harem route will only trigger if the protagonist meets certain conditions.)



I hope it's good news for most of you. And for the others, I will reassure them not to worry, as the harem route will not affect the main story of the game in any way.

Well... That's all, guys.

Stay safe and stay well, until next time

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

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Hey, guys...

Hope you all are doing well...

I don't plan to make this post a long one. So, let's get directly to the point...

My writer and I was thinking about it for quite some time and finally came to an idea where it may look a bit logical, I guess?...

What I want to tell is....

Harem will be added in 'Fleeting Memories'

Indeed, harem, where all love interests will know of each other's relationship with the protagonist and will accept it.

it will be added but it will take place much later in the game. Though I am not talking about the epilogue. It will take place before that.

(Note: Unlike most other harem AVNs , in Fleeing Memories, the harem will not be that easy where the love interest would just accept it. The protagonist will have to earn it, and the harem route will only trigger if the protagonist meets certain conditions.)



I hope it's good news for most of you. And for the others, I will reassure them not to worry, as the harem route will not affect the main story of the game in any way.

Well... That's all, guys.

Stay safe and stay well, until next time

Indeed, harem would be added. But as i said, don't expect it to be like the most other harem games. In here, mc will have to earn it and needs certain tags, variables and points to trigger the harem route. If mc fails to acquire any of those requirements and still try to go for the harem route... It will have negative consequences.

Another note, in case someone asks...


Yes, I will make a walkthrough of the game... I will make it after the release of Update 2

 

[wisesage]

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Hey, guys...

Hope you all are doing well...

I don't plan to make this post a long one. So, let's get directly to the point...

My writer and I was thinking about it for quite some time and finally came to an idea where it may look a bit logical, I guess?...

What I want to tell is....

Harem will be added in 'Fleeting Memories'

Indeed, harem, where all love interests will know of each other's relationship with the protagonist and will accept it.

it will be added but it will take place much later in the game. Though I am not talking about the epilogue. It will take place before that.

(Note: Unlike most other harem AVNs , in Fleeing Memories, the harem will not be that easy where the love interest would just accept it. The protagonist will have to earn it, and the harem route will only trigger if the protagonist meets certain conditions.)



I hope it's good news for most of you. And for the others, I will reassure them not to worry, as the harem route will not affect the main story of the game in any way.

Well... That's all, guys.

Stay safe and stay well, until next time

Hopefully the harem choices won't be the most boring vanilla choices like previous example of losing points for choosing to cum inside. Hopefully we don't have to play as a pure goody-two shoes to obtain the harem

 

[AnonW123]

So I played the demo previously and now that I have tried this update I have a better feel for this game.

The renders look good generally and with respect to the use of colours and light and dark effects. The two Lis (so far) both are attractive and have interesting but distinct personalities.

The Mc seems like tough enough without being asshole/cynical type (at least so far) but also a decent guy without being a pushover.

Still don't have enough to judge the story.

My issues so far are:

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I'm not dictating how the dev should write his own game, these are just my thoughts on the matter. Interesting start, looking forward to more.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

So I played the demo previously and now that I have tried this update I have a better feel for this game.

The renders look good generally and with respect to the use of colours and light and dark effects. The two Lis (so far) both are attractive and have interesting but distinct personalities.

The Mc seems like tough enough without being asshole/cynical type (at least so far) but also a decent guy without being a pushover.

Still don't have enough to judge the story.

My issues so far are:

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I'm not dictating how the dev should write his own game, these are just my thoughts on the matter. Interesting start, looking forward to more.

First of all, thanks for playing the game and liking it enough to comment. Now to answer your issues...

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Again thanks a lot for your kind words, mate...

 

[metamorphMP]

I hope it's good news for most of you. And for the others, I will reassure them not to worry, as the harem route will not affect the main story of the game in any way.

Well, ehm, considering that the game wasn't supposed to be harem from the beginning I have doubts now, oh well, I only can hope that this change of original vision of the game won't affect story, characters and their personalities(

Unfortunately I played enough harems with weirds stories and plain characters, especially it shows when Developers add harem into the game in a process (not their original vision), oh well, we'll see

Good luck anyways with a project!

 

[AnonW123]

First of all, thanks for playing the game and liking it enough to comment. Now to answer your issues...

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Again thanks a lot for your kind words, mate...

Thanks for the response. Apologies if you have answered this before but I'm not seeing it, so just to be clear:

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Something to consider. All the best.

 

[MagicMan753]

Hopefully for the harem path, I don't have to cheat on Janice. That is my one hope with the harem path, cause I am glad we got it but, I don't want to be a dick to get it.

 

[AnonW123]

Hopefully for the harem path, I don't have to cheat on Janice. That is my one hope with the harem path, cause I am glad we got it but, I don't want to be a dick to get it.

The thing is you're not in a committed relationship with her. It's a friends with benefits situation. It has been going on for nine years though, so whether in her heart she feels otherwise is something else. On paper though you should be free.

 

[MagicMan753]

The thing is you're not in a committed relationship with her. It's a friends with benefits situation. It has been going on for nine years though, so whether in her heart she feels otherwise is something else. On paper though you should be free.

Yeah, but it still feels like a relationship. So even if its just friends with benefits, it feels like a relationship because it has been going on so long, and I rather not really do cheating or type of cheating for the harem path imo.

 

[Mark Macabre]

To answer some questions some people may have about the writing:

1. Harem?
-Simple answer, yes. Not that i wanted it, but it's being requested so much that we had to cave in.

2. Will harem include cheating.
-Yes, I don't want to make a spank-fest of a story, there will be consequenses regarding realationships. And some of the characters might not want to do it, depending on the choices taken.

3. Will the story include pregnancy?
-Nope, not my thing so i'm not writing it, same with feet. I leave that to the dev to write.

4. Why is the english a bit broken?
-I'm not the one writing the story in the game's engine, I make the story in Miro, where the dev copies it. (It's easier to do branching stories in a flowchart on Miro) Also neither of us live in english speaking countries.

5. Why didn't Sylvia get medical attention?
-I wanted to, but I can only write so much, due to the limitations we work within. (Engine, language barrier, PC and such)

6. Why focus so much on marshall?
-He'll be a major part of the story later on, but I admit, we did infodump a bit. And i'll work on being more subtle with such things moving forward.

7. Will the story contain more vanilla stuff?
-Meh, both yes and no. The plot will be dark (VERY DARK). The sexual encounters will be both vanilla and more kinky (How kinky? depends on what you guys request and what i'm told to write)

I hope i could clear up some things for you guys, and if you have more questions, both Lyrical Artistry and I will happily answer them.

Stay hard, kings!