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Femdom, ntr planned ? (I hope not)
Harem planned? (I hope yes)
Harem planned? (I hope yes)
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Wow wow wow... happy I gave this early version a shot. It legit exceeded my expectations. I want more! 
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Still little content, but I liked the graphics and animations. Good job Still developer could thing adding moans during animated scenes also
Still developer could thing adding moans during animated scenes also Hello... nice for start.
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I'm getting positive AoA vibes from this title.. hope so as that was/is one greatly missed title that had potential too
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Meat Shield
Just so its clear i do love this title in the making.. but for every good there sadly is bad and so this list is just for the dev's awareness of things to maybe consider in future..
Facial Expressions - Most of the time they are fine but there are quite a lot of OTT facial expressions that spoil the scene, mostly on mc or vincent.. from my own experiences in this field and advise from other creators.. use a mirror to replicate your own expressions and facial motions to dialogue or a reaction to allow for a more natural expression
Angelica - her face seems a little elderly at times for the age range of character she is, its not just the hair colour as i've seen silver haired characters used before but its more her facial tone and lines that make her seem more like a 40+ skin type at times
MC - While i get he is technically The universal Soldier/Cap America/Super Soldier His over the top muscle mass is a bit much.. he could be all that you intend while being a smaller build and still maintain muscle mass.. at the moment he feels like a Incredible Hulk type and it makes his activities like running look unintentionally funny and out of place.. you can still keep the fitness aspect but he doesn't need to look like a walking brick wall to be what you intended
Lydia - Again like angelica she falls into the 'looks older than she should' appearance.. while not as bad as angelica its still strange to see and reminds me of all these tv and movie series where a 35-40 year old actor or actress is cast as a 20something in school or college/uni lol
Kendra - While there are differences be prepared for the backlash that Kendra IS Kindra from Artemis.. personally i love that djkink character but no doubt others will also pick up on this too
Thats all i have for now at the current point of reading but just wanted to help in possibly giving some feedback both good AND bad to help this title get even better
Just so its clear i do love this title in the making.. but for every good there sadly is bad and so this list is just for the dev's awareness of things to maybe consider in future..
Facial Expressions - Most of the time they are fine but there are quite a lot of OTT facial expressions that spoil the scene, mostly on mc or vincent.. from my own experiences in this field and advise from other creators.. use a mirror to replicate your own expressions and facial motions to dialogue or a reaction to allow for a more natural expression
Angelica - her face seems a little elderly at times for the age range of character she is, its not just the hair colour as i've seen silver haired characters used before but its more her facial tone and lines that make her seem more like a 40+ skin type at times
MC - While i get he is technically The universal Soldier/Cap America/Super Soldier His over the top muscle mass is a bit much.. he could be all that you intend while being a smaller build and still maintain muscle mass.. at the moment he feels like a Incredible Hulk type and it makes his activities like running look unintentionally funny and out of place.. you can still keep the fitness aspect but he doesn't need to look like a walking brick wall to be what you intended
Lydia - Again like angelica she falls into the 'looks older than she should' appearance.. while not as bad as angelica its still strange to see and reminds me of all these tv and movie series where a 35-40 year old actor or actress is cast as a 20something in school or college/uni lol
Kendra - While there are differences be prepared for the backlash that Kendra IS Kindra from Artemis.. personally i love that djkink character but no doubt others will also pick up on this too
Thats all i have for now at the current point of reading but just wanted to help in possibly giving some feedback both good AND bad to help this title get even better
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Just a question, will we have to lock in choices early on or will there be a clear and obvious point where we can choose which LI we would like to pursue? I am not normally a fan of single LI VNs, however, some that have interesting stories do keep me in. However, I prefer the choice to come at a much later date to see which LI I prefer, but building to that choice I wouldn't want any of the other LIs to be getting hurt due to choices like going on a date with someone else.
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I liked the demo when it came out, and this update wasn't bad either. Just some minor issues that bugged me is all.
Not a fan of forced stuff. The girlfriend stuff in the beginning was fine, cause well, she was your girlfriend. But then there is the random girl in the club (Scarlett) who you are forced to kiss, then later after the fire, you're forced to kiss Kendra. And of course, not a fan of dream sex. Just felt so out of place and thrown in for the sake of having a lewd scene.
If your game isn't a harem game, then don't force girls on the player. It ruins the whole point of having to pick a LI when girls are forced on us. Should always have choices in that matter.
Either way, update wasn't bad, just that one issue that is just a personal pet-peeve of mine. Not a fan of girls being forced on players without choice (or out of place dream sex either). I'll see what the next update brings, but if that continues, I don't think this will be for me anymore. Thanks though.
Not a fan of forced stuff. The girlfriend stuff in the beginning was fine, cause well, she was your girlfriend. But then there is the random girl in the club (Scarlett) who you are forced to kiss, then later after the fire, you're forced to kiss Kendra. And of course, not a fan of dream sex. Just felt so out of place and thrown in for the sake of having a lewd scene.
If your game isn't a harem game, then don't force girls on the player. It ruins the whole point of having to pick a LI when girls are forced on us. Should always have choices in that matter.
Either way, update wasn't bad, just that one issue that is just a personal pet-peeve of mine. Not a fan of girls being forced on players without choice (or out of place dream sex either). I'll see what the next update brings, but if that continues, I don't think this will be for me anymore. Thanks though.
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Note to Dev: Still playing. Love the renders and the fluidity. But can you please give us the option to choose the font (or change the default one to something a bit more pleasing to the eye)? The current one is giving me quite a headache. Also, why no option to choose text speed? I always like to customize it to my reading speed.
