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I don't know, I don't like games that have this atmosphere, especially how and what the Baron says about MC's mother. I'll see later.
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dude love your games, keep it up! I´m also thinking about giving your novels a shoot 
- Apr 26, 2020
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He has one that is onhold (no idea why, haven't tried it), one that was just finished and 2 that are being updated regularly, I see absolutely no reason to worry, he has shown that he likes to pump out (very good) updates!
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Bro, this game from superwriter so definitely no NTR, unless.....
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I don't really think so, I think SW got a different approach. More like a short story writer.
There are a lot of VNs out there where there is only slight progress each update.
Like 1 update kissing, next update some light petting, next update some heavy petting,
next one some oral and so a year goes by without any lewd hardcore action
and that's only for one of the 7 potenial love interests!!!
Picture Perfect told a story. With some highlights being elaborately rendered
while other parts were just written. It got the major getting together with
the ensuing sex scene, then some random lewd scene and an ending scene,
for each character. Like I said SW could have dragged it out like it happens
in other VNs but they decided not to but instead focus on important
parts of the story and finishing it. Like I said short story style and not
89347 pages Tolkin style.
Everyone preferences differ and you are not forced at gun point
to subscribe to SW on paytreon so all is good right?
- Aug 17, 2019
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Sure, but at the same time it was missing a critical pieces of storytelling, if I remember correctly (my memory stinks, so could be wrong). I don't really remember a conflict in the story beyond the mom who only made a brief appearance (and a rather cold reaction to him putting his cock in her daughter(s).) at the end. There's brief mentions of money trouble, but it's only ever talked about. There was just an overall lack of finality to the writing, imo. An enjoyable experience, but not his best.I don't really think so, I think SW got a different approach. More like a short story writer.
There are a lot of VNs out there where there is only slight progress each update.
Like 1 update kissing, next update some light petting, next update some heavy petting,
next one some oral and so a year goes by without any lewd hardcore action
and that's only for one of the 7 potenial love interests!!!
Picture Perfect told a story. With some highlights being elaborately rendered
while other parts were just written. It got the major getting together with
the ensuing sex scene, then some random lewd scene and an ending scene,
for each character. Like I said SW could have dragged it out like it happens
in other VNs but they decided not to but instead focus on important
parts of the story and finishing it. Like I said short story style and not
89347 pages Tolkin style.
Everyone preferences differ and you are not forced at gun point
to subscribe to SW on paytreon so all is good right?
Then there's the logical side of misses, as well. Like Sasha, who has a full sleeve, but wants to pursue acting on broadway? I was fired from McDonalds while going to school for getting a tattoo on the bottom part of my forearm. Tattoos aren't allowed in the acting sphere, your body is a blank canvas. Especially when you reach a certain point, you don't do a damn thing without getting the higher-ups say-so.
- Aug 13, 2018
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I get what you mean with that thing about financal difficulties and the mother side story thing.
But then again...what if those weren't considered to be crucial for the main story by the author?
Or like the dev wanted to make it part of it but then decided against it for one reason or another.
But yeah, there could have been made more out of it, I agree, but hey at least PP got proper endings
unlike some other VNs on here.
The part with the tats for the actress...valid point but then again -> porn logic!!!111
I know that's a cheap counter for a valid point but it still aplies.
I mean it's fiction, Denise Richards portrayed a very skimpily clad nuclear physicist in a James Bond movie
and I know a metric crap ton of really great movies where the protagonist singlehandedly
takes out entire armies of bad guys without braking a sweat while dropping one liners.
Some things don't need to be credible to be fun and entertaining.
Long story short, you are right there are some inconsistencies but I would
call them mere oversights. And where would be the dev's room for betterment
and growth be if their first projects would have already been perfect in
every way?
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Nice little intro
Characters are pretty good looking
Story could become gud but still in early stages so have to wait and see
Characters are pretty good looking
Story could become gud but still in early stages so have to wait and see
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At this point, it's gotten pretty easy. If I see a game by SuperWriter, I download it.A new game by SuperWriter, We all know that it's going to be Amazing, thank you for the game
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You can rest assured that SW doesn't do that thing
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Yeah, while this is more of a dramatic and emotional game than my others, I myself am a sucker for romance and just getting to know beautiful women, so you will go with this experience with the girls. Thanks for the question and I hope you enjoy!
No worries about ntr ever being in my games! They are about romance for the most part.
I don't really think so, I think SW got a different approach. More like a short story writer.
There are a lot of VNs out there where there is only slight progress each update.
Like 1 update kissing, next update some light petting, next update some heavy petting,
next one some oral and so a year goes by without any lewd hardcore action
and that's only for one of the 7 potenial love interests!!!
Picture Perfect told a story. With some highlights being elaborately rendered
while other parts were just written. It got the major getting together with
the ensuing sex scene, then some random lewd scene and an ending scene,
for each character. Like I said SW could have dragged it out like it happens
in other VNs but they decided not to but instead focus on important
parts of the story and finishing it. Like I said short story style and not
89347 pages Tolkin style.
Everyone preferences differ and you are not forced at gun point
to subscribe to SW on paytreon so all is good right?
Yeah, Kitchentable explained pretty well. I do not do long or huge games like Being a Dik or Deluca Family or Dating my Daughter, etc. I'm just not interested in that, and I'm more focused on a compact story where every update is important. There is no going on a date for no reason and talking about your day for example, because that does not move the story forward.
As for the critiques on missing story points in PP, I guess that's perspective. I focused on what I thought was important and I told the story that I wanted and I'm happy how that game turned out =] And thank you for giving this game a try!
~checking the new games out.
~reading first line of plot but glance at developer.
~Stop reading and just download.
hahaha Some developers just catch my interest, so no need to read stuff to give it a shot. xD
~reading first line of plot but glance at developer.
~Stop reading and just download.
hahaha Some developers just catch my interest, so no need to read stuff to give it a shot. xD
- Jun 22, 2017
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A really solid start, the only thing that i can say that i'm not a complete fan is the point system (even more because if you make the wrong choices, you can miss one special scene at the end of this update), but overall, really nice models, nice story (i wonder if we will eventually find the mom), well, another game from superwriter on my watch list.
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Sounds good. Gonna give it a go. The plot alone is at least something new.
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